Blind Uchiha and Platinum Star

A good book that is delayed by its title, it can be regarded as food and fodder among the Naruto novels.

The direction of the plot... Looks more and more like Matsushita is a red Uchiha novel set in the world of Naruto. But Naruto World is red... It is really poorly written and has not produced a few high-quality books. Kishimoto's zz level is at most that of a forum official. Weaving a zz background of a big world is completely beyond his ability. The logic of zz in the world of Naruto is not self-consistent, and it is very unreal, so it is even more unrealistic to be red in Naruto. The class basis is not fully reflected. What is it and who is it? For example, Naruto's zz foundation is self-contradictory. So far, no fan author can come up with a reasonable second hypothesis about the daimyo's control of the shinobi village economy, because it is fundamentally illogical. Naruto's view of war is a chuunibyou. Madara, Hashirama, Tobirama, and Uchiha Itachi, Nagato, etc. Talk about war as if they were talking about metaphysics. They talk about war as an independent subject and ignore the sexual nature of war. This also leads to the methods they come up with to stop the war being more abstract than the last. If you ask me, even if the Japanese bring their ancestor Oda Nobunaga into it, it will bring peace more than ten thousand pillars. There is no need for red to quell the war, unification will be enough. What makes me interested in seeing the update is the author's plan for the protagonist's growth. Hey, the writing is quite good. Some of the descriptions of the principles of magic techniques go further than the secondary settings of many existing novels. They have a very systematic feel. I like it. This is the female supporting role. Boruto Anko is too abstract. It's a bit jarring to see her seem like a heroine.

Is it to go to heaven⌓‿⌓The enlightened one will always be happy!

The protagonist's ninja phantom is so strong, so why is the protagonist blind? Do you just keep using the kaleidoscope and don't use anything else? ? ?

The author's writing is quite strange. He spends a lot of words and ink on plotting in the Naruto world view, especially after the Dance King and the Pot King were offline, the subsequent plot was even worse. Isn't watching Naruto just to have fun, just to show off when someone doesn't like you? If I want to watch Machiavellian, why don't I watch Three Kingdoms or Game of Thrones?

I don't know why the author's opening pictures are completely different from the current ones. The current ones have the feeling of youthful pain literature, as if they are moaning for nothing. It really doesn't look good.

I thought it was a fusion of Fujitora and Kizaru. I was speechless after reading Chapter 14.

The main character is schizophrenic. . .

Ordered some time ago I stopped when I saw that the author was showing signs of becoming a literary youth I took advantage of the limited exemption to read it in the past two days, and found that there are indeed some common problems for new authors 1. Can't grasp the key points to advance the plot (for example: the plot of Shin and Yuji in the hospital) 2. Write about women It just feels inexplicable (for example: Ye Cang) 3. The protagonist's personality is a bit erratic (smiling playfully with Minato) There is also a point where the character is really immature. At first, it seemed that he had the pearls of wisdom in hand, but in the end, he was completely panicked when a plot that I had not seen in the original work came out.

It's Xu Xian and Platinum Star getting spanked again. Is it too much to tease? The protagonist was still serious in the past, talking about big ideas all day long, but now he is becoming more and more like a sexy young man with a lot of fun. Is the author excited?

The avatar is the embodiment of the spirit. Let's not talk about why you have the Platinum Star. After you get the Platinum Star, shouldn't your personality change? Even plug-ins have an impact on the host, right?

It's rare to find a good Naruto story with Jo skills. I really want to give you a few words of advice. In fact, you can no longer control it. It starts to go in a classic direction, limiting the protagonist's strength. When you know the plot, there will be scenes out of the protagonist's control from time to time. The inexplicable literary youth makes the supporting characters pretend to be awesome, and the protagonist is frustrated. For example, a shabby place like Kirigakure, which was almost destroyed by Obito in the original work, can actually be operated in various ways. Although it is understandable, it makes people feel psychologically uncomfortable. After all, Kirigakure is just a bastard in the eyes of most Naruto fans. Without the big-breasted Mizukage, who would pay attention. . . Moreover, the comparison between Kirigakure and Sagakure you wrote is too different. You compare Sagakure to a bastard. Although Sagakure is indeed a bastard, it is not so bastardized that it looks like a small, unpopular village compared to Kirigakure. Or maybe you don't want the protagonist to be awesome and the others to be puppets, but you are writing a web article after all. You can fall short, but you can't fall all the time, and you have to do it slowly. Think about it if you were a reader and watched the scenes that were always boring for a week, wouldn't you feel irritable? I have read several fan fiction authors. They were very good in the early stage and had good rankings. Then they got sick in the middle stage and made a few wild moves. Then the books disappeared from the rankings. Today's readers have a different mentality when reading online articles. In Lao Jin's time, writing a dragon knight plot was quite a big deal. If he came to Qidian to write a dragon knight, he probably wouldn't be able to keep his horse. Just take it easy

Author, I have never understood whether your protagonist's blindness conflicts with Kakashi's eyes transplanted setting? Can you clarify the confusion? I think this should have dissuaded some people. Maybe I didn't look carefully or missed something. Many of the people I followed have read your novel, so I would like to ask. Good books are rare.

How many of them survived Chapter 14 or 15? Curious

You can fill it with water, but you can't fill it with water.

Wouldn't it be better if the eyes in Naruto were blind and replaced with a new pair? Plug and use

After coming out of Yecang, I felt that the taste had changed...😥

What is Platinum Star and what is its function? Please explain.

The last few chapters have been terrible, I would have stopped subscribing if I had known.

I don't know what the relationship between this author and the author of Uchiha Giyu is. Both books are very detailed in the fandom.

Eight months later, I am still angry and want an ending. Can you see it, author?