I Want to Cultivate Steadily

It's not bad, but the conflicts are too frequent, and it will cause visual fatigue after watching too much.

Something as important as the magical alchemy furnace should be written about in a big way. What's going on? There is no space to write about the illegitimate daughter of the witch and saint, but no time to write about Goldfinger? Finally, I would like to mention that you should not write female characters, it will be embarrassing. If I really want to write it, I will finish it after I have accumulated hundreds of chapters.

In what age are we still writing about witches and saints? You can write about prostitutes better than this! ! !

This immortal cultivator fights every day, Brother Wen is woolly

The first chapter is completely unreasonable. How can the protagonist predict the time of being attacked? And the strongest sect, Tianlinggen, cannot be prepared without a method. The ratio is to directly summon the old Jindan monster to come over in person.

The protagonist's conflicts are a bit too frequent

The writing is good, the protagonist is very calm, come on, the author, the new book is too short, it makes me crazy

The villain is not intelligent enough and has too many conflicts, which is seriously inconsistent with the title of the book.

This Taoist Xuan Fu, after establishing the foundation, find a way to kill him. If you ask me to be your disciple, I will be. What do you think of me? Come and die for me

The writing is good, but there are a lot of brainless villains, and the control is not very good. The decisive killing also has a period of exhaustion, and the demon sect girl is absolutely forced to die by me.