Naruto: The Kaguya Family Notebook

The protagonist, as portrayed by the author, is generally peace-loving, much like most Chinese people. Faced with an enemy like the Konoha leadership, why wait for them to make a move before retaliating? Why not actively hunt them down? As long as there's no evidence, everything will be fine, unless they dare to overturn the table.

Konoha is built on a conspiracy theory framework, but the protagonist has a screw loose. He should have been quietly hiding at eight years old, but he insisted on leading two companions to jump out and court death. Eight years old! No matter how you write the plot after these three little brats courting death, it's all nonsense. You've already jumped into the faces of the Third Hokage and the others. You can only say that letting the plot run wild is just asking for trouble.

I don't understand why Hashirama Senju is being criticized so harshly. First, Ashura's chakra has cycled through the ninja world countless times, always adhering to the same principles of mutual understanding between people, and their actions naturally reflect this (including the division of the tailed beasts).

~A chuunibyou (middle school syndrome) novel, I can't understand it.

It feels a bit self-indulgent; the protagonist seems a bit self-pitying. The jokes and humor are different. When reading fanfiction, people are probably more interested in seeing the expanded world.

The moment you walk in, you see the classic Uchiha Hyuga with a female protagonist on each side!

I just can't connect with original female leads. Even if you made her a swimsuit-clad Chiyo or a Koharu Utatane, and then had a dragon travel back 30 years in time, that would be fine. How am I supposed to know what an original character looks like?

It made my head spin and the reading experience was terrible.

If you know the truth about the Uchiha clan massacre, wouldn't it be foolish to fight so desperately for Konoha?

It's a rambling account, full of colloquialisms and unnecessary details; it feels like a chatterbox is nagging in your ear.