Reborn in Kobe, Japan with Naruto

As a result of the novels written by the behind-the-scenes mastermind, you have been writing about women! Women drink, women are in danger, women want to fall in love, women are unhappy... I had to use a dot connecter to turn pages to get to the main storyline.

I hope the author will read it! In every behind-the-scenes novel, as long as the protagonist appears from behind the scenes to the front of the stage, and then starts to pretend and slap in the face, there will be nothing to write about and the whole thing will be unfinished. The most exciting thing about writing behind-the-scenes novels is the fate chosen by ordinary people after gaining power, and what kind of sparks will be created. What is the best life, not a stepping stone for the protagonist to pretend to be a slap in the face? They have their own lives, and this can resonate with readers.

When I read the introduction, I almost thought it was a new book after the rain.

The fight scenes were pretty well written, but other than that the plot was a bit too much and too much forced pretentiousness.

The biggest shortcoming of this book now is the mission creation. It can almost be said that it did not create a likeable character. Either the mission given by the author is "decent", or he is a "villain" who has no pursuit and has almost destroyed the main character. These characters are too heavily labeled and have almost no resonance with readers. Especially the Koreans and Japanese cheating couples in this plot can be said to be unlikable characters. Train to Korea is a replica of Train to Busan, but Train to Busan can achieve high scores because of the human nature of the protagonist team. If the entry point of Train to Busan is the evil of human nature, it is estimated that the score will definitely fail. The author is currently a bit too descriptive about the sinister nature of people's hearts. Although it is very realistic, the best starting point for the work is to focus on the kindness of people's hearts. God is in the darkness and his heart is toward the light, which is definitely more attractive than the laws of darkness and the law of the jungle. I think this book needs improvement: One: Create several likable characters and give more pen and ink. Especially unflattering characters and plots, try to describe them as little as possible. This kind of villain can be brought out in just a few strokes. If you really want to portray a rebel character, you should portray a charismatic rebel, not a scumbag rebel. (The portrayal of the Blood Girl is much better than these people) Two: Don't create new characters, new locations, and new plots in just a few chapters. The pace is too fast, there are too many characters, and there is not much description, so it will easily collapse in the later stage. (Although the plot is easy to write in this way, it is equivalent to an independent narrative and it is easy to lose readers. After all, if you want to retain readers, you must make their favorite characters have a sense of existence) Three: The characterization of the protagonist is a bit weak. The behind-the-scenes drama is usually a group drama, and the main character who often appears in the article is the protagonist. Except for the blood girl, which left an impression on me, the other ones are "Miko of the Forest" which is pretty good. King Arthur and Jeanne d'Arc or The Dragon Lady are the backdrops in my opinion. Describing more of what they want to do, rather than what the character template (such as King Arthur) wants to do, will make the characters more fleshed out. Four: Try to start from the perspective of the good lineup, or from the perspective of the innocent and weak, so that saving or being saved will have a shining point. Five: Fighting scenes are too frequent, maybe this is also caused by poor character creation in most cases. Fighting is a means, not an end. Describe the purpose well, and then shape the fight between conflicting ideas. Before the fight, it creates a sense of expectation for the readers that they are going to fight, and when the fight occurs, it is an explosion and a climax. That's it. If something is wrong, you are welcome to correct me and add to it. I hope the author will write better and better.

Let's talk about some trivia King Arthur was the king of Britain at the time, but that was Celtic Britain. King Arthur resisted the invasion of the Anglo-Saxons, and now the descendants of the Anglo-Saxons have become the masters of Britain. The Anglo-Saxons destroyed the country protected by King Arthur, so King Arthur and the current Queen of England can be said to be feuding. It would be too much to ask King Arthur to protect the Anglo-Saxons. Of course, it is hard to say whether King Arthur is real, so the legendary King Arthur can also be from many other ethnic groups. The only ones that weren't possible were the Anglo-Saxons.

Why⊙ω⊙when I see the title of the book, I think of someone who has lost four or five books on a rainy night without a knife? ?

Don't write about the country, don't mention the country, treat it as if it doesn't exist. Why did you forget about it before? I wrote about another eunuch in China

Warning: The sentences are not comfortable to break, and the description is a bit dry. Come on, there are too few of these. After the old eunuch Yugou died, there was almost no one left.

The god played by the protagonist in this book is really low in level of realism. In the United States, the god who talked to Joan of Arc simply lowered the lower limit of God.

Suddenly I realized that all the potential readers of After the Rain had been cheated by the author 🤔. Even if the eunuch Gou is removed, I still like the type of writing written by Yuhou😄😄

If readers who feel like they can prostitute that dead eunuch for free come here, they will at least have over a thousand comments.

Japan only values ​​family names and not bloodlines. If a son dies, it is enough to find an adopted son. As long as he bears his own surname, there will be no problem of cutting off the bloodline and leaving no one to invest.

The Japanese gang is called the Tiger Claw Gang, which is as awesome as writing a historical novel and the emperor opens his mouth and says: "Old Iron Six Six Six"

When I saw it on the shelves, I didn't think it had anything to do with Naruto. I suggested that the author change the name, such as Brawl of the Behind the Scenes, or call me the whole world by myself. Really, except for a few names, does it have anything to do with Naruto? Are there any ninjutsu? In addition to the Three Body Techniques, I seem to have seen a Wind Release written. I'm speechless. Don't you know that shouting out skill ninjutsu with seals is also a way to show off? The combat power collapsed just after it was put on the shelves. I don't know what else to read later. A body of an evil god with tens of thousands of points is written for you like a fucking unparalleled one. Later, when you find out that it is broken, you have to patch it up. Where is your brain?

After reading the latest chapters, I really want to ask why the plot is so confusing? Sato Megumi, who was still an extreme person in the previous chapters, is now inexplicably starting to think about philosophy? Also, Megumi Sato was fascinated by her previous transformation. Wasn't she playing Infernal Affairs with her brother? My brother Hunji Dao leaked information to his sister for a promotion. Is such a gray personality so easy to go to extremes? Isn't the outline very good and perfect? I was surprised when I came out of the shrine maiden. Isn't this the cute low-profile version of Yuye's book about reborn Naruto in Tokyo, Japan? I just modified a few details and added some of the author's own opinions. The overall logic is almost the same as that book. Wouldn't it be good to directly apply other people's outlines and slightly revise it? Why are the latest chapters so chaotic? Are you mixing too many of your own opinions? Just like the poor student who copied the answers in the front row during the exam and stubbornly wrote down the answers he randomly guessed to a few multiple-choice questions!

When writing about behind-the-scenes stories, you also have to write about a female protagonist. How many of Qidian's behind-the-scenes novels have female protagonists? Yu Ye's novel is very vicious in this regard. Do you want to learn from him?

I don't know why in the latest episode, it looks so embarrassing, especially Sayuri. She was hit by a car and felt sorry for her husband if she was going to die. If she didn't die, she would continue to remember that stick.

Why do you people behind the scenes have to have something to do with myths? Why don't you create your own world view and power system? The myths of various countries are in conflict with each other, and forcibly merging them together will only be nondescript, and it is very easy to see that there is a mastermind behind the scenes. Don't underestimate the think tanks of each country.

You can write curse seals. Orochimaru's curse seals have various forms, as well as strengthened forms of heaven and earth. You can develop various strengthened forms by yourself, such as elements, beast transformation, giant transformation, etc. Here comes another kaleidoscope spiritual embodiment for guidance and development. Get an evil god's vest, give it to the god, and then perform a ritual, curse seal + kaleidoscope. The curse seal absorbs external energy, and the kaleidoscope guides the spiritual energy, which has a dual effect on the body. If it is designed well, it will be a complete system similar to "mind", but the upper limit is not high.

I read the novel, it's good, but the eunuch is a pity

It feels very similar to the Tokyo one. But I personally think it's more interesting than that one. It's very well written, I hope it doesn't end badly. It is not recommended in China. It is very easy to write, but even if you are in a parallel world and a different world, it is too difficult to adjust, so I will give you a 404.

Bitch before you read it: There is a book with the same theme, the behind-the-scenes flow, evil series, using ninja bloodstains to play the role of modern ghosts, and the mastermind becoming a modern Japanese ninja sect. I don't know what route your book will take. Let's go in and take a look 😰

This book is really out of date, which is a pity

The part about the tree god in the plot felt a bit awkward and the acting was a bit exaggerated. I don't know why but it felt a bit hard to accept.

Not bad, not bad. I'm getting more and more excited as I watch it. I like super fights.

Is the author of Naruto in Tokyo still writing a book? Great friends, please take a look. Do you have any other vests?

Not bad, I hope the author survives

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This wave, this wave, cut it and glue it on, it belongs