Konoha: Kaguya's Notepad

The protagonist written by the author and most Chinese people are always peace-loving. Faced with a hostile party like Konoha's high-level officials, why should they wait for the other party to take action before resisting? Why not take the initiative to hunt them down? Anyway, as long as there is no evidence, it will be fine, unless the other party dares to turn the table over. But at this time, the war is about to start again, and they certainly don't dare. Not to mention that it is a loss of Konoha's strength. As the current leader of Konoha, the other party doesn't care, and you are not a high-level person.

Konoha is based on conspiracy theories, but the protagonist has a problem with his head. When I was eight years old, I was just trying to survive. I had to jump out with my two friends to commit suicide. I was eight years old! No matter how you write the plot of three little brats trying to die, it will be difficult to write, and you will jump on their faces for three generations. All you can say is that if you let the plot go, it will explode on the spot.

I don't know why Senju Hashirama was scolded like that. First of all, Asura's chakra has been reincarnated in the ninja world countless times, and every time there is a mutual understanding between people, and the behavior is naturally the same (including the split-tailed beast). It can be said that apart from his strength, Hashirama is basically Asura's puppet mentally. If you really want to scold them, the one who deserves the most scolding is Liu Dao, the little Zao who started reincarnation for their two sons. Secondly, limited by his vision and class, he doesn't know what unity is, because in his opinion, Ninja Village is the best form he can think of (at least better than the Warring States Period). You can say that he is too naive, too stubborn, too stupid, and his vision is too narrow. But is it too much to say that a person who ended troubled times and a person who implemented a new administrative method is a piece of shit?

~Chuunibyou novel, I can't understand it

It feels a bit self-indulgent, and the protagonist feels a bit self-pitying. The humor is different from the humor. When reading fan fiction, I still want to see the expanded world.

As soon as I walked in, I saw a heroine on the classic Uchiha Hinata side!

The original heroine really has no sense of immersion, even if you set the heroine to be Chiyo in a swimsuit, or sleep with Koharu, and then travel back to the version 30 years ago with Dragon Vein. Original I don't know what it looks like.

Wouldn't it be stupid if he knew the truth about the annihilation of the Uchiha clan and still fought so hard for Konoha?

It makes me dizzy and the reading experience is extremely poor.

I just reviewed the Tohsaka Family Plan yesterday... I feel like I've seen it before

The protagonist is too arrogant. He doesn't understand the position of the Sannin very well, so he exposes his own information at will.

There is too much nonsense in spoken language, and it feels like a chatterbox is chattering in your ears.

Do you want to add a strong hand? Although it is a bit abrupt, otherwise it would be better to write that no one wants her. I don't want her to end up with the old perverted toad or Kato. What do you think, family members?

I don't understand that it's an inner world and you have to learn the Eight Gates. Why does every Hokage fan have to learn the Eight Gates? Isn't it so easy to learn the Eight Gates in Konoha? And it's especially like the book Will of Fire.

I thought it was a novel by Otsutsuki Kaguya

Forgot about the wolf-like active attack again. Don't wait for a passive counterattack. You should start preparing to attack Danzo's roots with strong malice during the battle ahead and destroy them. Even if the Hokage finds out, he will refuse to admit it and reduce the enemy's effective strength. At that time, they will definitely not think that Uchiha will deal with them first in the face of war. Then when the war started, they continued to hold back, betray them, kill them, and guard against them until the Uchiha regime was no longer threatened.

Everything was fine before, but the scene of the eight-year-old's speech was too weird. It can be explained that it was because of the speed of time and my old mental age, but it was still too fast, especially since the experience of the past two years was skipped directly, and I couldn't feel the growth of the characters at all. Why did the group start all of a sudden? Just like LoL, which is only level 5 online, why are you so anxious to apply for group promotion?

When I first saw the title of the book, I thought it was Kaguya's family affairs_§:з)))∠)_

I don't understand what the space is for. Does it make sense to write it?

You become invincible too quickly. In the Ninja World War, you led the Uchiha clan to sneak attack and killed the Third Kazekage. They turned the table directly on Tsunade and Orochimaru. When you return to the village, you don't have to write, you can only kill F4, and then the other four ninja villages beat you.

The plot is blunt, and the explanation before going to the battlefield is rubbish. Is the whole clan going to the battlefield to force one clan to death? Just giving up the initiative is not as good as just leaving. At this time, there is a war on the front line, the Sannin is not in the village, and the Ninja clan may not be able to contribute, so running away is simply not too happy😄

If the Hyuga clan is gone, then Hinata will be gone.🥺

After becoming the fourth generation, this book has already concluded. This is a common problem in this type of Naruto novels.

I don't think it's good for the main character, Goldfinger, to pull someone to have the other person's memory.

The golden finger settings are not good and too cumbersome. Relax while reading online novels. The less explanatory text, the better. The simpler all settings are, the better.

Kaguya's family, isn't it the one who threw the toothpick? A whole toothpick meat, more toothpicks.

The Uchiha heroine in this book is a poisonous point, because the setting of the Uchiha heroine in this book is that the Uchiha family is greater than everything else, and her eyes are opened because of it. Generally, Uchiha can never be saved because of some obsession, so the Uchiha heroine is not suitable to be the heroine. Instead, the setting of the Hyuga heroine is more suitable, because the Hyuga heroine's obsession is that the protagonist is greater than the family and the village. If the protagonist defectes, the Hyuga heroine will follow. If there is a three-person team, it is completely possible to have the protagonist + the Hyuga heroine + find a talented medical ninja or train it yourself, and then the protagonist can be the main attacker. The Hyuga heroine is responsible for sensing and assisting in fighting, and the medical ninja nurse. There is no need to bring this Uchiha heroine, because the setting of this book is inappropriate. If the protagonist wants to defect, or something else, this woman will not hesitate to expose the protagonist's abilities according to the setting.

The author's writing is good. I would like to recommend the book he wrote. Friends who are book-hungry can take a look. Just click on the avatar. It is non-toxic.

The development of the protagonist is too hot. It is just a fantasy thing that can develop on its own without undoing it, or it can pull people into the other world and record their information. There are many ways to play it. Have you ever seen Raising All Humans? The protagonist's ability can quickly harvest everyone's knowledge and ninjutsu. For example, in the early stage, you can bring in a person to imagine an opponent chasing him crazily. I don't believe he doesn't use ninjutsu

Have you ever thought about a way to use the other world, such as catching someone into the other world, and then using authority to completely replace that person? Don't say it's impossible. You said before that blood inheritance and experience can be taken out. If authority is not enough, some soul secrets can also be used. If you are afraid that other people's souls and memories will contaminate your own soul, wouldn't it be nice to use authority to remove those useless things?