Reborn into the Earth, Mastering the Two Qi of Life and Death at the Beginning

When I saw mortals building villages, I felt something was wrong. Author, did you enter the story in the wrong way? In the beginning, the plot is steadily advanced step by step, and the joy of watching the slowly growing land is directly intercepted at the back, and even stepped on it. From the reader's point of view, it is a bit frustrating or even aggrieved. The protagonist's mentality towards these plants is to skip directly, or to say it doesn't matter, and go directly to the development of mortals. It is easier to understand that it is the indifferent feeling that your parents smashed your beloved toy and gave it to you as written in this assignment. Of course, it may be that I am the only one who feels this way. Looking at it from my own perspective. The author should attribute this to the rhythm issue, or to the title of the book, the introduction, or the audience deviation between the beginning and the subsequent plot. Of course I have not seen the back part, but judging from the summary of the comment area, it should have little to do with the evolution of farming at the beginning (After thinking about it, I sent you a May ticket and thank you for letting me express my emotions.

The author's writing is good, and the chapters are well laid out, but the only drawback is that the pace is too slow, the writing is too delicate, and the plot is too bland, without much excitement. Over time, it will easily make readers feel tired. The subject matter itself is a niche one. It is recommended that the author finish it within about 1.8 Million words. If it takes too long, it will only consume the popularity of the work.

Feelings after reading Chapter 113 The extreme nature of things, the outside without the inside, the extreme cultivation of immortality, the cultivation of both the inside and the outside Starting from the invasion of the outer world, the pattern of this book has opened up. Facing the invasion of civilization at the cosmic level, unless the protagonist uses a mechanical deity, there is no hope of victory for the civilization of immortality. Until I see this chapter... The protagonist takes out a king bomb! Centralized power instead of individual power, government power can be lowered to the towns and villages, combined with the timely communication and personal power of the cultivating civilization, what do you think of? The immortal version of Xuan Kingdom! And it seems that the alien invasion and the protagonist's hometown are not from the same camp. I even suspect that the immortal civilization will be dyed red later and join hands with the Earth Alliance to fight against the alien civilization. In addition, the protagonist used the congratulations to light up the industrialization of the civilization of cultivating immortals, and used Han Lin to optimize the formation of cultivating immortals. He is also promoting the red dust gas system. With the three-way advance, it is hard to say who will win and who will lose This kind of protagonist who regards himself as a pure tool man, coupled with a very long and wonderful group portrait narrative, the structure reminds me of "Trafficking Crime" and "Raising All Humanity", and the layout reminds me of "The Mythical Version of the Three Kingdoms", it's weird and scary

This protagonist is more stubborn than me and doesn't take anyone's head.

Chapter 40 starts using human bodies, sheep heads and dog meat, you can decide for yourself.

The title of the book is very intuitive, but it has the feeling of an upgrade like a studio novel. I almost missed it.

Ah, this time, after only a few chapters, the plot about life and death has turned into a plot about worldly anger. The side plot has become the main plot. The chapters about life and death are much more comfortable to read than the plot about worldly anger.

At the beginning, I mastered the two Qi of life and death, but I have been playing with the Qi of Red Dust.

Brothers, after the invasion from the center of the earth. This book has changed. Once you see this place, you can probably withdraw.

It's really inappropriate to have a human body. This is the most disgusting thing about heterosexual novels. Who would read it if it had a human body? Most readers clicked in because of the aliens themselves. This is the selling point of this book. It would be strange if the selling point disappears and offends Bu Bo. Many authors who write about alien beasts are speechless if they don't understand this point. The focus of heterogeneous novels is aliens.

We already have rebirth in the earth, and now the authors are so imaginative. Is there anything about rebirth that hasn't been written yet?

Jiang Kun, also known as Dadi, also known as Landlord.

How should I put it? There is a reason why it is not popular. After a book is written, there is not much plot, and it keeps talking about the setting. The setting is so big, but there is no plot, and no one reads it.

I saved it for now, but abandoned the last book after reading it halfway through. The story of Worlds Collide made me sleepy. I hope I can read more of this book.

I just want to know if my hometown is really gone~ First of all, according to our country's tradition, this kind of exploration through other worlds is impossible to start on a large scale. Will there be an advance team? ? Secondly, in the future world, our country's population should not be lower than it is now. It would be very painful to lose 60 million young people, but the remaining population cannot be wiped out by the Earth Alliance! ~~ I hope the author can come back and not really let the protagonist lose his home~

The author has great ideas and his writing style is not bad. Although the rhythm is very different from other novels, this does not affect the excellence of the novel.

Introduction: True literary youth, moaning without any illness

The protagonist's perspective is from a macro perspective, but the author also wanted to write about the micro perspective, so he had to use the indigenous perspective. The indigenous perspective unfortunately became a clone. After reading more than a hundred chapters, there is a line for the protagonist's body, a line for Hongchen's corpse, a line for the surname He, a line for the surname Han, and a line for Heini's clone. Brother 5 Lines, I don't know if you are crazy in writing or not. Those who read have already gone crazy and slipped away~

It's wonderful. I can't stop watching it. Not only the behind-the-scenes manipulation of the protagonist, but also the stories of other Gan Yuan travelers are really exciting. It's especially satisfying to see them plotting to create cracks in the way of heaven in order to gain contact with the motherland. Even now, I am very worried about the safety of Gan Yuan. Danger, after all, the previous accident caused tens of millions of elites to travel across time and cut off contact with Qian Yuan. In addition, after the signal sent through the crack was cracked, the reply signal was not Qian Yuan but the English-speaking Earth Alliance. This really makes me worried, but everything has to be done step by step. I look forward to the author's follow-up. .

Before Mortals built a village, it was quite innovative, but after that it became unsightly. I read more than 20 chapters in a hurry, but I really couldn't stand it anymore. Whether a book is good or not depends not on the praise of a few people.

It's been bad since the beginning. Did the author think it was good to write this way? Don't you know that all novels about the consciousness of heaven and earth are bad if they have a clone? First you have to know the positioning of your novel. Are readers here to see you become a human being? Originally, because the protagonist is not a talented person, you have to create a doppelgänger. If you like the previous part of this novel, you will definitely not like the avatar, and if you like the avatar, you will not be able to read the previous part.

They all traveled to another world and included a lot of personal belongings. I wrote more than forty chapters and created a disgusting preface.

This book is innovative, and the settings can be corrected without bugs being discovered, which is amazing. There are two things that annoy me the most when reading novels. First, there is nothing new. For example, the novels about cultivating immortals are mostly the same as the ancient times, journey to the west, mortal stories, two-dimensional novels about Naruto, Douluo, etc. The sheep are all bald under the blankets and there is no end to them. The second is that the hook is too wide, and the protagonist has almost no restrictions. Without difficulties and difficulties, there would be no joy in breaking through and solving difficult difficulties. Without shackles, we would not know what freedom is. It doesn't require misery, nor does it exclude tragedy. It's just that the readers of Shuangwen have caused the entire Internet article to limit the protagonist's image to a certain extent, allowing for protagonists who have to meet their standards. On the contrary, there is a strong demand for tragic articles.

I'm so dumbfounded. In the last chapter before the book is released, the whole family of an important supporting character is killed by the author's plot. I hope everyone knows this.

My brief review is that I wanted to write something big, good, and in-depth, but the pace was too big and it was ridiculous.

Nice! It's really beautiful! Although the plot is very peaceful, it is very interesting. The main plot plus the auxiliary plots from God's perspective make it so fun to watch!

Although I don't like Dilian very much, their technologies, especially the protective devices to prevent information in the brain from being stolen, are very consistent with my positioning of science fiction. Although Dilian has only revealed biomechanical or mind protection technologies at present, I feel that they are already very awesome from what they have revealed.

Suddenly it became a group chat again. Such a setting would persuade at least half of the people to leave.

It feels like the three sects are still one step behind. They are preoccupied with guarding against the threat from the strong, but they have not noticed that the Earth Alliance has already penetrated into the mortals. However, this is normal. After all, although the three sects' system also pays attention to mortals, they have already separated themselves from mortals and become immortals. People, their emphasis on mortals and their understanding of mortals must have many shortcomings, but the Earth Alliance is different. They follow the technological route, and they must understand the importance of mortals more deeply. However, with the help of the dry ape time travelers of the three sects, it should not be so easy to collapse.

Alien Beast Style Discussion Points The transformation scenes account for more than 50%. Transformation does not exceed 50%, but the main line starts from transformation. Transformation exceeds 50%. In the world view of the novel, are the three views correct? Without transformation, in the world view of the novel, are the three views of the present or the three views of the past life followed? In the case of the animal body, where are the three views? Would there be a situation where demons kill people, and then the protagonist goes out to help humans kill the demons, but the protagonist doesn't care if humans kill demons. 1. The perspective of the human camp. People can kill demons, but demons cannot kill people. The protagonist is a beast with a human heart. 2. Neutral camp perspective. Regardless of both sides. Just look after your own interests. Just do it if it suits you. There is no Virgin behavior in the protagonist's animal body, animal mind or human heart. 3. The viewpoint of the beast camp. He was a human in his previous life, and a beast in this life. Cut it in two, just for your own camp. Not the Holy Mother, the camp represents those who are with you, not just the beasts, they are in the same camp. For example, today's human beings are not all human beings, or they are on the same side. I will not forcefully apply the three views of my past life to the bodies of beasts.