Immortality Through Unorthodox Cultivation in Strange Tales from a Chinese Studio

To be honest, I don't know what it's worth. The practice is not described, the heretical techniques are not described, and the content is mediocre. I don't know how to attract subscribers after it is put on the shelves.

The executioner is a leftist, but until now there is no information about the executioner's leftist skills. They have always said that he relies on his fate to suppress him.

If you, a birdie, don't tell us, the old readers of Quanding, about your new book, are you ready to cover it and run away?

It is extremely poisonous, and the author did not pay attention to many details that he thought he was proud of, such as the beginning of the hungry people and the most important first meal. For example, the author thinks that everyone knows what his birth date is, just like the sentence: Why not eat minced meat. And the most important thing is, when you wear it, where do you write the birthday and horoscope? Or write about the birth date and horoscope of modern society? I don't know the birth date and birth date over there, so it's better not to write it down. Just cover it up with a direct sentence. An author also replied in the comments that don't care about these details,,, oh my God, it's like when you go to eat and eat rat head and duck neck, and then the boss tells you, don't care about these details, please continue eating. Toxic,,,,,, unfortunately, a very attractive introduction

The protagonist killed nine prisoners and took away nine memories. How come he didn't become mentally ill? The protagonist doesn't have a treasure to block those memories!

The writing of the last few chapters has been terrible. I am not thorough, I want to push forward but I don't have the confidence. I am a bit self-righteous. If I want resources and money, why don't I rob the rich and give to the poor? The protagonist is not incapable of this ability, and the protagonist is not short of money, and he directly takes such a big risk.

I can't understand it at all. It's like reading a composition written by a primary school student.

I just read the beginning, and I feel that the author still needs to polish some details. For example, there is no introduction at the beginning of the time travel, whether the soul travels or the body is worn. If the soul travels, how do you know the birth date of this body? This point must be buried at the beginning, and the birth date will be reasonable later. After entering the city to calculate the birth date, I didn't have any food in the first place. I was hungry for so many days and didn't cultivate myself. I just practiced a twenty-pound sword. Is it reasonable to write about self-cultivation? After being hungry for so long, I started practicing directly, and after learning sword skills, I didn't write about the protagonist's eating skewers and integrating in the city. One month later, he became good at sword skills and went to the execution ground. It's not economical to omit it. If some things are not explained, the following things will appear unreasonable. At the beginning, so many unreasonable things were discovered, so after writing, I still have to polish some details of the book.

I don't understand the worldview a little bit. In Chapter 6, the protagonist can't chop the prisoners, but he is reluctant to attack those who can, fearing that the dead will turn into ghosts and come looking for him. So here comes the question, in this world, is there a way to survive if you kill people? Since no one dares to kill anyone, fearing that the dead will turn into ghosts and take revenge, where do so many murderers and thieves come from? The logic doesn't make sense.

I can't understand this sudden apprenticeship. Is he very qualified? Very eye-catching? A particularly hard relationship? I didn't even notice it, I just felt it was very sudden. It said that I wanted to accept a disciple. The protagonist's own cultivation has not reached the point where he can't make any progress 🤔