Paper Effigy Maker: This Is Late Ming Liaozhai

This author is really stubborn The subject matter is good, but the author's writing is really bad 1. First of all, the protagonist can obviously use the skin painting spell to disguise himself and kill people without being discovered by his enemies. However, he just doesn't use it and just plays with it. When readers point it out, he doesn't listen and pretends not to see it. 2. The author insisted on using the background of the Ming Dynasty, but did not deal with the world view background system well, which caused many bugs in it. I can only skip reading because some parts are really unbearable. I suggest that if you can't stand it, you can completely ignore it. For example, the Ming Dynasty was replaced by the Daqian Dynasty, the Jinyiwei was replaced by the Embroidered Messenger, Taoist forces such as Longhu Mountain and Maoshan were used directly, and Buddhism was Kaysapa Temple, Landa Temple, White Horse Temple, Jinshan Temple, and Shaolin Temple. Aren't you going to skip a lot of bugs like this? It doesn't affect your insertion into the plot of Liaozhai. 3. I really want to complain about this setting of learning skills. There are no restrictions, such as Taoist oaths or inner demon prohibitions. Just say it verbally, don't pass it on. If you do, be careful and I will kill you. Then the skills you foreshadowed in front of you are so rare that they are of no use. If it is a world where Taoism is manifested, people will directly steal and abduct to get the skills. What's the use of you just saying a few indifferent bullshit. 4. Since it is about writing about paper craftsmen, don't rely on orthodox immortals, but on weird cultivators. Why are you writing about it? Practicing some bullshit Pure Yang Wuji Kung Fu. You are killing yourself. You should use paper crafts to find a way out. If you succeed, you will receive heavenly fortune. 5. Another thing is that your description of the court is too childish. Of course, it is difficult for people who have not experienced the story to write this kind of thing. My suggestion is not to touch it, or just brush it off. As a result, the author is bumping up the frame. Of course, this has a problem with the author's background setting and cannot be changed. I can only say that the next book may be better.

How could an empire be destroyed by a tribe in the extraordinary world? ? ? ?

Let's change the skill levels. I don't know what level these messed up levels are at all. I don't know why they all use such nonsense as first glimpse, mastery, and slight success. It's better to change the skill level to a numerical level, Lv1, Lv2 or (1/8) current level/total level. It's so simple and clear, or how simple and clear it is with words (entry, small success, great success, perfect)

Isn't it a bit off topic? If you add it, it has no sense of existence. Pig's feet have no sense of existence. There are no spells or anything. They are all descriptions of other people. It's okay to write a story about Liaozhai. Why do you plunge into Zao Zhao? Or meet some monsters on the way, causing you trouble or helping you, so that the pig's feet have a sense of existence.

After reading more than 30 chapters, the protagonist defected to Sun Chuanting. He has the status of a scholar and went to be a head catcher. The protagonist also has a secret book of Yang Yuanjing and does not upgrade it. I feel like I have offended both historical novel readers and fairy tale readers at once 😅😅😅😅😅

Brothers, quit, really quit. We want to see a normal protagonist With all due respect, what does Que Gongfa do with the dragon energy in his hand? I don't see any uselessness in your hands. Doesn't our paper puppet exist? Do you want this puppet to go out and exchange dragon energy for something good? What nonsense is the Ming Dynasty talking about? If you really can't do it, why don't you go to Mongolia and change your career? You want to say that Mongolia doesn't have top-notch Kung Fu, how did Mongolia destroy the Ming Dynasty? I'm too lazy to complain about the Kung Fu you changed. What serious Kung Fu needs to maintain the body of a boy? People are talking about pure Yang Qi in a broad sense You practice Kung Fu to strengthen this Pure Yang Qi, and then you tell me, if this is missing, you can't practice it, so why practice it? Ah, if you add another setting and practice until you reach great heights, why will you be dead? You would have died if you ran out of energy. How can a dead person practice? Tell me I'm speechless with all the bugs. Just like what the brother said, we want to see the paper man become a Taoist He also joined the Jin Yiwei. That shit can't be passed on to outsiders. He doesn't even know who he passed it to. All the Jin Yiwei are prosperous and wealthy, and no one is down and out, right? The Ming Dynasty is heaven, the Ming Dynasty is God, no one dares to betray, right?

If the protagonist reports the Fan family and uses the emperor's power to deal with them, it will be relatively simple, but he just doesn't know how strong the power in the other party's court is now. In addition, the Dragon Qi Crystal will inevitably be handed over. The most important thing is that the future harvest is difficult to determine, and the rewards for the central protagonist may be greedy. There is also a possibility of being beaten down. It is said that the protagonist is the one who steals the dragon energy. But if the protagonist does not report it, he will be constantly hunted by the Fan family and their allies, and they will not stop until death. How will the protagonist have time to find the fundamental method? It's half a dead end. I hope the author can write more exciting things.

After reading fifty chapters in one breath, I found that it was a bit of a scam. The paper-tying technique is actually a kind of Taoism. The author can completely innovate. First, he can make the paper-tying technique to the top level and then add the concept of puppet technique into one. Wouldn't it be better to create a guardian god like Liu Ding Liujia? The same goes from the left to the right. Since you can't steal the master, you can create your own. There is a system. The author's previous foreshadowing does not match the background. Bandits were definitely rampant in the late Ming Dynasty, not to mention the late Ming Dynasty in the world of Liaozhai. The yamen basically beheaded anyone caught. If you want to obtain enlightenment points by killing people, you can rely on painted skin to disguise yourself as an executioner in each county or prefecture. You do not need to join the imperial guards. If you accumulate enough enlightenment points, you can directly deduce the Yangyuan Jue to the peerless magical skill to solve physical problems. Since it's a left-handed title, let's describe more of the fighting between left-right and side-sects and prove that right-handed people can also become immortals.

The plot arrangement of this dragon energy crystal really confused me! Isn't it better to just backhand a report than anything else? Why do you have to make a simple thing so complicated? You are a decent man, and you also know how to gain enlightenment. Whether it is practicing martial arts, taking imperial examinations, or cultivating immortality, what can't you do? Do you still care about Fuze Shisheng's stuff? And if you directly ask the county magistrate to report it, it doesn't mean you can't be greedy. The Fan family will have to peel off their skin even if they die, and they can distract you. And once this is done, your road to the imperial examination will be a bonus to be honest. I really don't understand the author's operation @_@

I saw three chapters on the shelves, how can I say, it's okay, not bad at all, but the author has stepped on a lot of bad points. I will briefly list a few 1. Overwhelm the protagonist. At the beginning, the author added some paper-tying skills, but I personally couldn't see where the ability would increase. Also, if you leave your Yang Yuan skill for nothing, even if you don't add lifespan or vitality, when you upgrade it later, it means that the absorption capacity will increase. You can add more points to improve the absorption capacity and take care of your body. 2. It's still a golden finger problem. You like to save enlightenment points, right? When you have more than 100 points, you encounter a few enemies. Do you want to add more points at the beginning to feel more comfortable when fighting? You said you want to add some martial arts, okay, I accept it, but you added some paper-tying skills to your backhand. I don't understand. Why didn't you add it before? 3. Martial arts issues. The title of your work is Paper Maker, but now that I see it, I feel that the Paper Maker is just a tool. Your focus is on martial arts. I wonder if you have dealt with it well in the future 4. Struggle for hegemony. You are a real show. It is not enough for a scholar to become a head catcher. He also went to be a royal guard. I looked at the back of the catalog and it seems that he proclaimed himself an emperor and founded a country. I can't say. Readers of historical novels will probably feel uncomfortable, and those who are talking about your subject matter will also feel uncomfortable.