She Took the Script of Cultivation of Immortality Cannon Fodder

Very good story, why are there so many typos?

The author is great, does he have CP?

I read the beginning. A family has a patriarch and elders. The son with double spiritual roots beats and scolds him wantonly, the niece with double spiritual roots is happy, and the elders are all mute? Don't care about the family's future? This family still has Yuanying, it's just child's play… How did this family pass down the family safely? Hostess, you are only 5 years old. You are really not afraid of death. If you are crushed to death, it will be like crushing an ant to death...

It's so well written, I hope I don't come to CP.

I suggest the author write about the harem. If a family of cultivators of immortality is not united, can they still be called a family of cultivators of immortality? Not to mention Mo Yuheng, how could Mo Zhipu succeed in his cultivation and still not destroy the Mo family? Yeah😊

Alas, why does the novel about cultivating immortals feel like a novel about otaku fighting? It feels like the author is writing this for the first time, and some of the conflicts are very childish.

Can you let the heroine go to the sect to practice? This family has too much trouble. It is better to let the heroine go to the sect. With the talent of the protagonist, she can be a master of a powerful person.

The writing of the opening is really disgusting. A single spiritual root can at least guarantee the existence of the Nascent Soul, but just for the sake of a few resources of the golden elixir, it is ignored. The writing is really disgusting.

Too many typos! ! The heroine has a mutated single spirit root and a big gold finger, but she has over 100 cards and is only over ten years old. She only practices Qi. Then she always encounters various dangers. Trouble comes to her wherever she goes, one after another, endless!

There are too many typos, which really affects viewing.

A family of scumbags and scheming people. How could such a family still exist? The protagonist needs to be stronger. Why would you want to take revenge within the family? Moreover, those who have been practicing for several years are competing with those who have just started practicing. How to compete for resources? That's when waste can be taught patiently. When dealing with geniuses, just ask them once and for all. What a disgusting family!

The biggest problem in this article is that the combat power is broken, and foundation building can challenge Yuanying. The heroine of Long Aotian in the other book is not that strong. The heroine in that novel is already the top cheater, and she will try her best to escape when faced with those who are several levels higher.

There are a lot of typos, and I'm quite puzzled as to how a child of any age can recognize stunning beauty. If you brag about flowers, you're just a beauty. But when you look at them, you'll be stunning when they grow up.

I haven't even read a few chapters but I noticed a lot of typos, and I hope the author will correct them.

I hope the author can pay attention to the smoothness of the writing. There are typos from time to time, and the typing skills are also worrying. Either one more word is typed here, or one less word is typed there. When reading, you have to guess while relaxing, which greatly reduces the sense of reading.

After watching the beginning, I felt like I had seen a house fight.

The story is quite good, but there are some typos, omissions, unclear sentences, and other problems that are difficult to read. Many of them are based on guesswork. There are several chapters that are repetitive. Writing is not easy, so the author should revise his writing and don't let these small mistakes drive away readers.

There are so many mistakes that it makes my head hurt.

Why are you all fighting at home? , Isn't it a novel about cultivating immortals?

The book is very good. From the beginning it was a bit unfamiliar to the current level of fluency, which is very good! It would be better if the heroine on the protagonist label could be replaced by a female protagonist, or the original heroine. This book is originally about the protagonist's counterattack. It is not good to put the original heroine and the current heroine in front of the protagonist. It is not good to put a stud harem in front of the protagonist, so that book friends who have not jumped into the trap will not dare to jump easily. I have collected this book for a long time and just clicked on it yesterday. I found it interesting. I have been reading it until I finish it to comment. There is no need for the original heroine to occupy the heroine's position😜😜