Quickly Wear and Play Counterattack

Dear, please practice your writing. The subject matter and content are good, but many sentences are not fluent, and there are problems with the plot and cohesion.

The writing is too poor and many places are too unreasonable.

Is there a male protagonist? Is there a cp for the female protagonist in Small World?

I can't understand it, the writing is very messy, the article has few words and missing words, it's so messy that it's hard to understand.

The writing is so bad that I can't stand it at all

It feels like Cannon Fodder Strategy

This is another novel with a male protagonist who is quick to wear clothes. Can't he be more assertive?

Come on! There are a lot of typos.

Are there any men living there? Ahem, don't ask, I'm sorry, feel free to take care of me

Author, are you sure this type is good-looking?

I read the first short story, it's unethical🐴

After the author finished writing, he checked it. There are many bugs.

At the beginning of the chapter, the heroine's father could not figure out the murder case even with her brain circuit? After being crawled into bed, no one doubted the other person's interpersonal relationship or paternity test. I take it for granted that readers can be fooled casually. The plot description is even more confusing. There is no rhythm of time and space. My head hurt after looking at it.