From Selling Egg-Filled Cakes to Becoming the Richest Man

I have opened two steamed bun shops, and the income is not bad. I get up at four in the morning to make steamed buns, and finish at eight or nine in the morning.

The writing is good, but it always seems to be ecstatic, always a bit pretentious, and always curls one's lips, with a very disdainful look. Personally speaking, if these are changed, it will become more natural and smoother to read.

After reading thirty chapters, I still don't know much about the protagonist. There is no introduction to the protagonist himself ~ no background introduction at all.

The protagonist is too humble. He can't become the richest man even if he sells eggs and steamed buns in a national chain. He can become the richest man by selling eggs and filling cakes while sleeping. 😂

Let me introduce the background of the characters and the background of the times. It seems a bit abrupt now.

From filling cakes to becoming the richest man, you are still a long way away...

Author, you can't collapse, I gave you my last investment. If you play it steadily, your book will at least be a good resource.

It's well written, but I can't invest in it. It seems to be quite real, although I have never sold steamed buns, hahaha

Why does the character "" have to be added in the middle of the protagonist's name?