The Hyuga Clan at the Beginning of Konoha

I think this book is quite interesting and I look forward to the follow-up, but I hope the author can always maintain his current mentality. I think no matter what, there should be a beginning and an end. A thousand people have a thousand Hamlets. I believe there are people who like this book and there are people who don't like it. So, author, no matter what in the future, please give it a happy ending for the readers who like this book. (Even though... There are fewer people who like it than people who don't like it... Although this is a bit overwhelming).

Would you like to add more sperm?

Life is gone and life is here again, I see a tower city in winter and spring

I have read more than 30 chapters and the main character has no sense of presence. There is no Goldfinger. I really don't know how to continue reading.

The free chapters feel so childish, I'm convinced

I feel like Ice Escape is meaningless. Watching Naruto makes me tired of aesthetics. Lan Dun might be more interesting. Or quick escape, steel escape, etc. Explosive escape is also good. Combined with soft fist, chakra can be injected into the enemy's body and detonated. Explosive power.

I believe that most readers don't like to see a protagonist who is too young, so don't worry, I will let the protagonist transition to 15 years old around Chapter 60, and then the protagonist awakens to Ice Escape. There isn't much room to write about World War II, so I'll finish it in a hundred chapters. Then transition to the third battle, the third battle will be written auspiciously, there will be a small climax, and then you will learn the magic of magic. Then before the plot begins, the protagonist awakens the reincarnation eye, which will also be a climax. After the plot begins, the book will reach its climax in the middle and late stages. Then during the four battles, the protagonist will enter the blood inheritance trap in a special way. From Ice Escape to Blood Succession Snare, I already have ways to awaken. As for Bo Renzhuan, I am not planning to write it at the moment. If you want to read it, I can delve into the ideas. In addition, there are some small private settings that do not affect the reading of books and are also foreshadowing. For example, it was arranged that the Kingdom of Uzumaki would be destroyed later, and Uzumaki Kushina would enter school two years later. Furthermore, I am not going to write about the heroine issue yet. Even if there is, I will choose one of the two choices in my mind, and it is not from Konoha. Above, I hope you will add it to your favorites after reading it, thank you.

I've caught up with the progress. Let's start saving books and say a few words. Two female protagonists are a real punishment... To be honest, it would be better to close Yecang. I feel that the author just wrote it as if there was no female protagonist. The writing is okay, but there are a lot of dramas at the beginning, but after a hundred chapters it becomes quite good, and the plot is quite reasonable.

Really, if you want to write about Naruto, you should research more information, read more dialogues, think more about the characters, and understand more about the power levels of ninjas. If you have the time, why not study how the protagonist can improve and design it well? Think about it, don't think that it's just a matter of time. You are so stupid. You don't know a few ninjutsu and you just spent a year to create an ice escape blood successor. If the blood successor's limit is so worthless, why do all the ninja villages regard it as a treasure? How many ninjas are there in the five major ninja villages? How many ninjas are there in the five major ninja villages? How much, your protagonist is still a child, but it took him a year to create an ice escape, and it was done in a fit of excitement after his grandfather died. Brother, this thing is a delicate job, isn't it? The Sharingan, and some kind of combat experience, the experience is normal training for combat. Skills and mental training are not for you to make breakthroughs in temporary battles. What kind of epiphany or enlightenment? If you can see it naturally, I will endure it. But what is the bottleneck of your whole perception? I am so drunk. When did the Hokage have this thing? What is the bottleneck? Are you here to cultivate immortality for me? A very perfect and smooth upgrade route for the Hyuga clan. The Byakugan is really a top-notch auxiliary. The higher its strength, the more powerful it is. Unlike the Sharingan, the more powerful the Sharingan, the higher its strength. Before the Byakugan reaches the Tsengigan, the protagonist should learn more. Needless to say about Taijutsu, the Hyuga Family's Soft Fist. If you go to learn Steel Fist from Kaido, you won't need the Eight Gate Dungeon. It's not necessary. This thing will be completely useless after reaching a certain level. In the end, this thing is an explosive skill. You can learn swordsmanship or not. It's better if you learn it. You can do it if you don't have time. If you don't want to learn it, you still need to learn the properties of thunder attribute chakra. This thing is very powerful in strengthening the body's speed. The protagonist has Byakugan and is not afraid of speed. You can learn a few ninjutsu without using too many, it is enough. It is recommended to learn the Rasengan and its subsequent derivative skills. If you are strong in taijutsu, you can add it. Muji Ninjutsu is a perfect match, which is basically enough. In the mid-term, Hashirama cells are absolutely indispensable. The amount of chakra is really important. Don't say that Hashirama cells don't match the Byakugan. Otsutsuki is still supercilious. Doesn't Asura have nothing to do with Kaguya? The chakra of Hashirama's cells increases, as well as the physical strength. The increase in recovery is very important for Taijutsu. Transplanting Hashirama's cells will make it more adaptable to natural energy. Senjutsu is very important. Without it, there is no way to hurt the Six Paths. Level, you can try to develop Gundam skills like Susanoo. This thing seems to be very useful. It clears out the soldiers and explodes. It's just like Bokujin no Jutsu and Wood Dragon no Jutsu. You don't have to do it like Susanoo. It's still good. Several levels, after all, this thing is not your core. Needless to say in the later stage, the core reincarnationan, the eighty gods air attack, senjutsu, time and space ninjutsu (you must have one of these things, otherwise you will not be at a disadvantage), chakra nature fusion, and blood Following the snare level, you need to think about it yourself and make up a reasonable reason that will not make everyone feel bad. You don't need to study too many ninjutsu at the energy level, just a few are enough. This thing can be used against people at the sixth level and above. It's useless at all, not to mention the blooming eyes of the Otsutsuki clan. Powers with low power levels can't move them at all. Taijutsu often has very good effects. Tenseigan, taijutsu, senjutsu, time and space, plus a few useful ninjutsu, this is It's enough. You don't need those fancy things at all, especially illusions. The pupil technique is the embodiment of spiritual energy. The higher the pupil technique, the higher the spiritual energy. Later illusions are basically useless for those above the sixth level. I think this is pretty good. Yes, the main thing is to go up to your own life level. Is the Six Paths level immortal, or is the Blood Successor Snare immortal? I still prefer the Blood Successor Snare. No matter what, the Six Paths Sage is still dead. Otsutsuki Hagoromo has not checked out. Kara died in the end, but nothing happened to Kaguya. This is quite obvious. It is possible that the six-level soul will live forever, but the body will still die before it reaches the blood successor snare. I am quite inclined to this view, after all, we still have to strive for the blood successor snare level.

I feel that the setting of Byakugan is a bit poisonous. You can see through, far-sighted, and have super dynamic vision. How can you actually engage in melee combat with others? Weapon Enchantment The boss will shoot you to death from a few kilometers away, but you just want to play close combat with them, and even come up with a Bagua 140 Palm or something. You can hit him more than 100 times against someone weaker than you. Why? If you don't just stab him to death, you have to hit him more than 100 times, which is a waste of energy. To deal with someone who is more powerful than you, if you rush in, you will die. I will kill you before you can hit him. I feel mentally retarded just thinking about it.

I am Shen Nong. Let me give you a brief summary. The current progress is close to 300 chapters. Let me share some opinions: 1. You can skip nearly half of the chapters before they are released, which does not affect reading at all. It gives people a dull feeling. It writes some irrelevant plots that have nothing to do with the protagonist and does not create any character image. At least I think it is a waste of time. 2. Is the protagonist really a time traveler? Do the advantages really exist? Why release it into the sea at the critical moment? Isn't the advantage of a time traveler being familiar with the plot? At least it has an intelligence advantage, right? One moment you are careless, and the next moment you sigh that you are not dead? 3. Are you Yi Xiaochuan? Sometimes I feel uncomfortable because I'm overacting, for fear of changing the plot. I can't move this or that, and I have to keep following the plot. 4. In the nanny story, many of the plots are meaningless strengthening of supporting characters. The problem is that the supporting characters who have been strengthened are not bad at all. I see that the corpse bone veins of Kirigakure Village that have not yet awakened to strengthen themselves are the corpse bone veins of Kirigakure Village that have not yet awakened, half-baked magic, and a half-completed bloodstained elimination of ice escape. The main reason is that it does not give me the feeling of seeing the growth of the protagonist at all. If you fight Ban with these things, are you looking down on him too much? 5. This is a name that too many people complain about. There are so many good names, and readers have given you suggestions. Just to please yourself, the names in the Xue Ji Ninpo post are all better than yours.

There is actually a Yondaime who likes a woman who is not a good husband, cannot protect his own woman, is not a good father, cannot accompany his son, is not a good leader, just sells the Uchiha and goes to die, the Yondaime is a pure waste

I, the author, solemnly promise: If what you write does not meet your wishes, you can feel free to comment. As long as the comment only involves me personally and does not involve my family, friends and other book fans, I will never delete or ban comments! In addition, you are welcome to point out the errors in my book. Now there are 3 chapters updated every day, each chapter has 3333 words+. The update time is every day at 8:00, 12:00, and 18:00. Unless there's something big in my life that I need to deal with, then the 18 o'clock chapter will probably be a no-brainer. In most cases, there will be 3 updates as usual. Now I have about 100,000 words of manuscript, and I continue to write 3 chapters every day. You can read it with confidence.

Naruto fan, I think these two look good

A very embarrassing problem with Rouquan in the comics is that you can slap the opponent dozens of times, so why not just stab the opponent to death with a kunai.

The existence of the caged bird is necessary. The function of the clan being able to directly control the curse seal is removed, and only the function of digging out the eyes and self-destructing is retained. Otherwise, a group of people come to dig out the eyes, and the white-eye battlefield serves as a reconnaissance. Like the Sharingan, Orochimaru wants a kaleidoscope, and so does Danzo. The three magatama can also be used as a resurrection coin. But one and two magatama are of little significance. Like digging one or two Magatama Sharingan, it is of little significance to the battlefield. It only strengthens one person's strength, while the Byakugan is a team benefit. Actually, I have an idea that I can send people to cut off the Hyuga family members on the battlefield, and then escape to the camp to find volunteers to frighten. However, Yun Ninja probably didn't expect this. After all, they are a group of straight-forward people😁😁

Let's not talk about anything else, let's just talk about the marriage with the Land of Snow. The protagonist is really hypocritical. An adult and an 8-year-old girl told her father that he wanted to ask the little girl's opinion. How can he talk about the sacredness of love? Don't accept the sacred horse in the harem. An 8-year-old girl knows nothing about love. If you ask her, you are making excuses for her own hypocrisy. If you ask her, you have to wait until she is mature and mature. Why bother to be so pretentious and assertive? I just want to find so many excuses. It's a bit disgusting.

The author's writing is average! There are not many big poisons, but small poisons are constant! I'm quite speechless, and you can poison me at every turn! It's uncomfortable to watch, so I won't watch it!

Brothers, this is a story without a heroine. I know there are many sages who like this setting. You're welcome.

Later on, his strength surpassed that of Uchiha Madara, and he had his own ideas and goals, but he was still timid and followed the original process, which made me feel really irritated.

It's too witty. As a time traveler, I pretend to be stupid and act cute when I travel as a child. I really can't stand it. I don't have the thinking capacity of an adult to use Chichi's plot context for my own development. As a Hyuga clan, I don't have large psychic beasts, tons of chakra, no reincarnation eye, no senjutsu, just a soft fist. When I grow up step by step, I can only reach the level of a Hyuga and Hinata jounin. In the later stage, I will be cannon fodder. I'm still talking about the cute word count. After reading a few chapters, there's really nothing interesting to watch.

I'm speechless. I travel to the past and know everything about the plot. Why is there no turning point that can be changed every time? Traveling back in time just to show off? Lin couldn't be saved, the Fourth Hokage couldn't be saved, so what's the use of you? You always describe what abilities you have gained, and you also say that few in the ninja world are your rivals. Anyone can stop you from saving people. Doesn't it hurt to slap yourself in the face? Why do some people like to read fan fiction, just because they want to change some tragedies or more passionate ones? You are better off, the tragedy has not changed at all, and you have covered your face and pretended to be B for more than 300 times. The protagonist is too incompetent. He comes out to create variables in things that have not happened in the original work. He has no energy to do the actual work!

Author, you need to know that what you write is a fan, not an original worldview character, etc. Readers have an understanding of the characters in the fandom, whether they are abilities, talents, or personalities. Different from original creation. So you are completely putting the cart before the horse by spending a lot of time describing Minato Kushina. The title of the book is Hyuga Clan, and the first impression it gives people is that it is a cool novel (because generally Naruto books about Hinata start with a branch), but it turns out that those branches are more fun than your clan. (Here is an example, Hyuga Setsuna, that book is very cool, I won't tell you what the title is.) The protagonist is reduced to a supporting character. Character, to set off some native characters (for example, Minato, we all know he is a genius, but you don't need to write about how talented the other person is, and is more talented than the protagonist, etc.) Even if we don't read this book, we still know that Minato is a genius, and you don't need to emphasize it again, and it is still stepping on the protagonist's genius. What fanfiction needs is to be fun, but at the same time it is fun and logical. Don't be six-year-old Jonin or ten-year-old Kage level. The author has suppressed the protagonist to the point where he is not as good as the natives. It is really not fun at all. No matter how fun you write in the later period (I didn't read it later), if you write like that in the early stage, you will lose a lot of readers. Writing group portraits in fan fiction is completely putting the cart before the horse. You can write that Minato is a genius, but you cannot write that Minato is more genius than the protagonist. The normal logic is that Minato is very talented, and the protagonist is more talented than Minato to get cool points. Not much else to say, let's continue working hard on the next book 🤓

It's basically fully booked, and it can be said that it's disgusting to watch. While saying that the protagonist is very powerful, at the same time, it is forced to be based on the original work. This is mainly reflected in two plots. 1. Watching Lin die, and then Madara's ending in the middle is still no different from the original work. 2. It is the night of the Kyuubi. It was planned and planned, but Minato was still offline.

Although the writing of the free chapter is childish, the plot is okay. I'm going to read it. But the anti-theft chapter is okay. Forget it, since I can't read it, it doesn't matter if I don't read it, I won't recharge even one piece.

Looking at the whole book, the plot design of this book is also commendable. I personally think that the fundamental reason for the negative reviews is the author's outrageous narrative method - the author likes to insert narrations, or the author's subjective opinions, into the development of the storyline. This not only affects the continuity of the plot, but also makes readers feel "watered" and difficult to read; it also creates some additional problems. For example, due to the subjectivity of the narration, it is actually difficult to distinguish clearly between the narration in this book and Aangji's psychological description. The blurring of the boundaries between objective and subjective can also cause reading difficulties. The final result is that it is tasteless and is a pity to throw away. If the author writes another book, I hope it can change this writing method of "write down everything you think", otherwise it will be difficult to get good results no matter how popular it is. Regards from a fully subscribed reader.

Six million words, but it didn't make it out of the circle. I feel like it could be refined and some bad points should be corrected.

I have never seen a book like this. There are more than 1,600 chapters. The main character is probably less than 600. The rest are all irrelevant and even have no main character.

For a while, I remembered Uzumaki Kushina as Uzumaki Kushina. I always thought Uzumaki Kushina was pleasant to read.

I don't think I've read his original works, and I haven't heard of conspiracy theories yet. This author, no wonder he's still a first-class work with more than 6 million words.