Xianfu Asked

Your registered disciple trial is outrageous. You secretly attack at every turn and fight to the death. You behave like a demon sect. Normal sects would not do this. Your registered disciples are all tool men. Who will do the work if there are too many dead?

Time travel is just time travel. Time travel is not like time travel and rebirth, nor is it like rebirth. It's just that after sleeping, I woke up with some more memories in my head, making it seem like there are no human beings inside and outside.

Vote for a chapter and hope you won't give up. If the mortal stream can write to the golden elixir stage, it can basically succeed, but many people surrender in advance.

There is still a market for well-written mortal flow. Don't be a eunuch. If you stick to chapter 300, most of them will be successful.

After reading 100 chapters, I don't know what to say. A lot of what was written was written in one stroke. I should not write it in detail. What I shouldn't write in detail is simply gone. Many paragraphs cannot be connected at all. It is very boring to read. Read more what others have written and compare your own. It is a pity to abandon it if it is tasteless. There are still book reviews in the beginning. There are not even many book reviews in the middle. I don't know what to say.

You might as well not have the burden of being a time traveler. I really don't understand why there are so few people writing about indigenous people.

Not bad, I hope the more you write, the better! Come on update!

I've read about 20 chapters, and I'd like to briefly share my thoughts If the author is just playing for fun, then just pretend I didn't say anything. If you plan to live up to your grades, it's best to make a table and add some more. First of all, let's talk about the skill issue. In the future, does the author plan to escape from fire or water? Although they have water and fire spiritual roots, after all, these are incompatible attributes. Choose one of them as a major, right? I think it's a bit inconsistent for the author to use the Fire Snake Technique and the Ice Ling Technique. Also, I still don't understand whether "Taiyin Seventy-Two Chapters" is a technique or a technique. If it is a technique, should I write about the characteristics of this technique? The second is the Immortal Mansion. There should be at least a limit to this limit, right? For example, the Qi training period can mature medicinal materials that are hundreds of years old at most, and there is also the time it takes for a medicinal material to grow from seed to a hundred years old. Finally, prices, I have read Chapter 20 now. The end of this chapter is that the protagonist has just come out of the trial copy to check the harvest. There are a total of 14 low-grade magic weapons, 2 medium-grade magic weapons, more than 300 spiritual stones, and some fire essences. According to the price given by the previous author, a low-grade magic weapon costs 100-150 souls, and 14 pieces should cost around 2,000 souls. Adding in mid-grade magic weapons, essence, spirit stones, etc., This harvest will cost at least 3,000 souls. The author actually said that it is only enough to cultivate to the 5th level of Qi training? I think it should be more than enough to practice these to level 7, right? The author writes well. But I hope the details will be well thought out.

An ancient plot, you know the ending after watching the beginning

The price of this book makes me have a headache. The book written by Haohao Sect is almost the same as the one written by Mo Sect! !

It's hard for a new author to explain everything, and there are problems with logic and settings.

There are no major poisons, but there are constant minor ones. The logic in many places is inconsistent. The male protagonist's business relationship deteriorates from time to time. I don't know what the author is thinking.

Does the protagonist only use one kind of spiritual herb to make alchemy?

How come the protagonist doesn't become resistant to the medicines he takes?

The writing is okay, and the little poison is bearable. Why is it that there is everything in the Six Arts Miscellaneous Book? Will there be a fairyland skill that day?

It's quite satisfactory, but the routine is too old.

In fact, the protagonist is the time traveler. The first chapter may have been vague and not explained clearly, causing ambiguity among readers. Now that I have revised it, it will not have any impact on subsequent reading. The last update time was changed to around 8:30 pm. Thank you for your support! ＿|￣|●＿|￣|●＿|￣|●＿|￣|●

Rubbish novel, comment to avoid lightning: The protagonist's Shaoyin Sword is his most powerful magical power when he reaches the sixth level of Qi training, but just like Schrödinger's Shaoyin Sword, it is sometimes used and sometimes not used, even in desperate situations. The author does not say why it is not used. The description of the protagonist is also too flat. The protagonist has no obvious characteristics after sixty chapters. I can't remember what kind of person the protagonist is. He often plays awkwardly. When others ask if he is an alchemist, the protagonist smiles bitterly. When others ask the protagonist if he is here to buy a certain treasure again, the protagonist smiles awkwardly and touches his nose. Does this protagonist have an underdeveloped cerebellum? ?