Family: I Became Immortal from the Start

In family novels, if you don't marry a wife, you are a poisonous person. If you want resources, you might as well join a sect, and you will have everything in the later stages.

A typical assembly-line work, with all kinds of ill-informed words and phrases, a preface that does not match the subtitles, and a bad book.

When people and spiritual roots become one, people take the initiative, the tree maintains tranquility, the tree nourishes the blessed land, and people practice Taoism, this is cultivation, this is the earthly immortal way.

The writing doesn't read smoothly and sucks.

You have too many typos and unclear sentences.

Every person on the first floor every day! Go, go, go! ! !

Read the comments, what do you mean? Brothers, is this a nanny-type family story with no offspring? That's so fucked up.

Let's retake Chinese. If you can't do the basic writing basics well, do you still want to get good grades? Punctuation errors, grammatical errors, wrong sentences, and wrong words are all in a mess.

There are really too many bad sentences. Can't you practice them carefully? It looks very uncomfortable.

A rogue cultivator is a rogue cultivator, and a family is a family. What kind of descendant of a rogue cultivator family? If you can't distinguish between the two things, your family will not be considered a casual cultivator, and a casual cultivator will not have a family. Really speechless.