I'm Really Not from My Motherland

The main character is a mentally ill fw.

The protagonist is a mentally ill person

Seriously, don't write it, it has no future. Don't say anything else.

How to say it. . . Sometimes in the plot, the protagonist's embarrassing foot-picking and retarded lines really make people laugh. When in danger, he just stands there and plays tricks without thinking about how to deal with it. What happens next? There will definitely be events to change the protagonist's personality in the follow-up, but don't you think this will make people even more disgusting, just showing off and then following the protagonist around to make soy sauce every day. . . I think most of the people who want to read black-robed fan fiction like to beat the people of the motherland if they don't obey, or use means to rule the Vought Company and hold the people of the motherland under the Five Fingers Mountain, or simply reborn as the people of the motherland and then evolve into more lawless ancestors. You. . . I always feel like you want to write but I don't see you holding it in for a long time. It's really uncomfortable. I just follow the plot and make soy sauce. I don't see the growth of the protagonist. I only see hiding, running, and collecting treasures. It's depressing. . . Solemn declaration: My personal opinion does not represent others. If you want to criticize me, I will only admit that you are right.

It's boring, the main character has no purpose in it. Nothing changes the plot. He has no ideas of his own and just goes with the flow. It makes no difference whether there is a protagonist or not. In short, this book is just a very ordinary hydrology, which seems quite boring.

I was confused when I looked at the label. It was fantasy, and it was from another world. But the title of the book is a native of the motherland? What a magical combination this is

It's very well written. Why did you add a love line later and it's still Chinese? It's weird and embarrassing.

I hope that if I see the mentally ill Virgin Superman, I will not kill him without killing him. You came to this world... To save people, not to kill them. That's not an S on your chest, it represents hope... And salvation.

Already invested, hoping to sign a contract. I hope that the subsequent plot will not follow the original plot. After all, the protagonist is not an ordinary person without super powers. To make a fan is to use the background and characters to write your own story.

It's okay, but the protagonist's growth is too slow. He is not even as good as the Oi Xia who uses medicine. At the beginning, he must at least have the strength to fight Azu a few times.

😏😏😏, Give up, instead of reading, it's better to write, hahahahahahaha, come and see me.

Why eunuchs are needed? The writing is quite good. Although it suppresses the protagonist's combat power and loses 90% of the readers, there are still us who can make do with it.