Rebirth 2003: I Want to Be a Boss

Please write a book based on the theme of "coolness", and use hidden tasks to deceive scammers? Will someone who can get around in online games be fooled so brainlessly? Set up a street vendor with nothing? The author is tangled in the writing, and the other party is tangled and still owes favors. Can't it be written directly as a normal commercial transaction or a cooperative transaction? At the end of the movie, except for the name of the protagonist, I remember nothing about the other supporting characters. Who is the heroine, who are her parents, and who are her friends?

This is the book I'm talking about about driving high and walking low, and it's pretty awesome written above. What are you doing behind the scenes in the Internet cafe?

Playing games, setting up a street stall, the plot stretches the crotch, and the protagonist is the Virgin Mary. The game is also very niche, and you don't know how to play dnf? People who write the plot of setting up a street stall are a little unhappy. Although you recommended Bai Da's book, this one is too crotch-stretching. I feel ashamed to be in the same group as the rebirth novel!

Stop writing, people born in their 20s will kill pigs and fatten them up

There is an inexplicable CS pretentious plot, you can come and do it, and the protagonist is given a background as a professional player. Then 1 killed 35 and was knifed after death. It's a slap in the face in reverse, right? The most important thing is that this victory was obviously achieved by another person, and it was placed on the protagonist's head in the blink of an eye. Do you really want to finish writing and not read it? The author has a good idea, and I hope the plot will unfold together. To be honest, you might as well not have written it.

The introduction is well written, but the content is basically useless, and all the poisonous points that shouldn't be there are present. Many plots will have big problems after reading them twice. Of course, you need to read them patiently, and you often can't see the problems in what you write

I wrote five chapters, all of which were just to teach others how to do business, and just do it myself.

Fighting in the bathhouse and getting unfinished goods on credit. Do you feel confident just because you are the protagonist? It's very blunt and unreasonable.

The introduction is so well written. But I don't have the ink

Write a chapter of main text interspersed with more than a dozen side stories, and there is a lot of mess

It's almost 100 chapters, Emm, I don't have much money, and the girl doesn't have anything to do.

The progress is too slow. How many chapters does it take to write a small book?

Well written, readable, very stable

Hahahahaha, congratulations to the author on the successful signing! Congratulations on your successful investment! My taste is pretty good! Come on!

Not bad, very good book.

Can the author persevere? Not a eunuch?

I don't understand what I'm writing about. It's a lot of verbose popularization.

Do you want a eunuch? No updates for two days

You can take a look at the author (Rebirth Begins from Lottery), the writing is very good, he brings all the women to life and doesn't forcefully pretend to be b.