My Health Bar Is Super Long

Shouldn't the new book be "Rebirth of Magi's Son-in-law"?

My evaluation is not as good as Ma Ji's son-in-law

What does the protagonist's plug-in do? The protagonist has a lot of small skills through plug-ins, and he also talks about how durable he is. Then the protagonist, a professional player, was fighting a woman who was also a military commander and a little higher than her. One of her arms was removed, and they were inextricably beaten. After this fight, I really felt that the foundation of the entire book was wrong. Is it necessary to play a game? I don't see how you current ring players are better than amateurs? Also, why did you send a high-level military commander here when you clearly want to capture the protagonist who is a middle-level military commander alive? The protagonist still has the actual record of defeating high-level players twice? Everyone in Dou Po Cang Qiong knew that Gao Xiaoyan would be sent in a big stage 🤔 That Dilla Xiao is also a valuable asset, he is a one-man trick, and he was surpassed by the protagonist in the early stage. As a result, he is now ranked higher than the protagonist, and he mocks the protagonist every day. Looking at it this way, his strength is no worse than that of the protagonist. Then the question comes again, what does the protagonist's plug-in do?

Is our basketball article not making money or something? There are so many guys waiting for you to cut it, please express your opinion, author

My suggestion is to finish the book quickly and update "Moji's Son-in-law: I Inherited Moji's Ability"

It looks like the car is going very fast, but actually the main character is still a virgin, so why do he do all those bells and whistles (I didn't speak until I finished watching it). If you want to see driving, you can run it.

I feel really awkward. I want to say that it's really too much when I'm still fighting. It's really boring to do so many side projects. If you're writing about boxing, you shouldn't do so many side projects. I like the punches to the flesh. There are side projects in your chapter.

This is a boxing article wrapped in a fighting guise, which is completely different from the background in the article.

Might as well write about basketball! The content is about traditional centers playing in the small ball era.

The first principle for starting writers is to have specialization in the field

I'm Drunk. The protagonist is a reborn person who trusts a random passerby and tells him his golden finger. He betrays him and is hunted down. At the beginning, I endured it, but if I try to influence others with love, I also endure it. Now you still want to send your daughter away. . .

It would be a pity that this title and theme does not include monsters and upgrades. With such a long health bar, you actually write that the awakened person is boxing.

I suggest the author to read comics like Quan Yuan. The fighting style written by the author is too low. It is obvious that there is such a surreal power as Wuhun, but the B level is too low.

I suggest you go straight to eunuch and write about basketball.

At present, the protagonist gives me the impression that he is an ordinary person with very little talent. He has reached his current level by being beaten by golden fingers. The so-called super long health bar means that it is slightly higher than the same level. As long as he exceeds even a small stage, there is a danger of being beaten through the health bar. In terms of fighting skills, he is not much better than others. At least with Joshua, a model of technical flow, compared here, that is the feeling. The ones with the highest sense of presence are those small talents that add attack. Considering that the original character of the protagonist is indeed a mediocre person with mediocre talent. It hasn't been long since the Lord traveled through time, and Zhenlun's combat experience is far worse than that of veteran players. My final evaluation is reasonable, but not entertaining.

You are always being provoked, and you are always attacked by your opponent before the fight begins. What's the point? Routine

The setting is unreasonable. People with strong physical strength will be treated like monkeys and fight in an octagonal cage.

In fact, Lao Ge does not need to step into a new field. He has always written basketball articles and there is room for improvement. He can strengthen the core, improve the writing style, and write a good story. Lin Haitingtao, who writes about football, has also been writing about football, and his new book Fox in the Zone is his own breakthrough.

This comment section is interesting. Seventy-eight of the ten comments suggest switching to basketball. So why is the author so fussy about it? The main character was suffocated to death by two basketballs, and it ended well...

My health bar is super long, which is about equal to my article being super short.

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This book is still being updated simultaneously, awesome

Good guy, I've been saving and saving, and I've finished this book... 😰

This book is okay {"TopicId":"782235190847209474","TopicName":"What is the Mid-Autumn Festival like"}

This author likes to force the butterfly effect, and force the protagonist to become famous without objective conditions. It makes you feel that the above situation suddenly occurs and forces the drama to happen. It can be embarrassing.

Emmmmm I originally thought it was a fantasy flow system flow, but after reading the beginning, it was about boxing. It described too much. No matter how many skins you put on, it's still boxing. No matter what kind of martial arts or martial arts, the process of boxing is just ordinary fighting. There are no highlights. For people like me who have no feeling about boxing, I am a bit speechless. After all, when I opened this novel, I read the introduction and came to the system flow.

First, in the setting, the strength is strong and the defense is strong. The weapons can only barely cut the skin, so no weapons are used. (This reason is very strong. What if I poke it very hard?) It feels uncoordinated to only increase the weak strength of a body with such a strong defense. Also, it was clearly written as boxing instead of restricting fighting. There is a huge difference between no-discrimination fighting and boxing. Second, the description of the coach is directly ambiguous, but the setting still emphasizes training, and there is no transition of emotional advancement. Third, I read that the author of the review writes about basketball. No wonder the author made the relationship between the boxing team members so weird, especially the bickering and argument with a partner who was full of affection.

Just know that your writing is not long, and there is a big problem with the content. The core is simply a fighting article, and fighting is more niche than basketball.

Lao Ge wants to break through, but there is no need. Fighting is far more difficult to write than basketball. In the later stage, he must improve to high martial arts.