In Fact, Qingmei, Who Is Cold and Cold, Always Has Evil Intentions Towards Me.

The writing is okay, but the plot transitions are not smooth, and it is difficult to write a daily novel, so I only read dozens of chapters. It feels very stiff, after all, I am a new author. If you eat sweets, you can still watch. I feel that the character design is not established yet, and I think this is still a test of the waters for the author. Write more outlines and details. If the full screen feel is used, I think it will crash. Happy New Year, author

Come on, author, the book is very interesting.

Come on, author!!!!

This book should be called "Leng Qingmei Crazy for Free"

I've read Chapter 62. Xiaoyuan and Hanhan are so sweet and flirty. I would like to ask the bosses in the back, will Ding Liang and Yan Qiaoqiao have any romantic dramas? I really like to read single-line love stories. I am most afraid that in daily love stories, the male and female protagonists have not yet established a relationship, and the supporting characters have fallen in love, which will easily create a contrast and affect the perception of the love rhythm of the male and female protagonists. At present, both Xiaoyuan and Hanhan should be determined to pursue the path of writers. In this case, they will both stay at home and work after getting married. I quite like one working at home and the other going out to work. Two different professions and different circles meet different people and produce more different events. Then every morning, we say goodbye before going to work, we go home after get off work and chat about what happened during the day, and then we buy groceries and cook and eat together. There is no such sense of ritual when we stay at home and work, which is a bit regretful.

I feel like the hostess is disgusting. She has to get involved in the relationship between the children. Although the result is good, it is really disgusting.

Intrusion and deletion

It feels like the male protagonist and the female protagonist don't have the feeling of being a couple together.

It's good, but it's too slow. It's almost 200 chapters since school started. As mentioned earlier, the male protagonist is in the summer vacation of his freshman year. It's a bit difficult to wait until he gets married. The plot is very daily, which is good.

If he's not a buddy, why is the picture not hot?

The plot is too slow, but the writing is pretty good

Very unhappy! In the past, it was all sugar, and later on, it was all boiled water. Not to mention other book friends, I was just like the children who didn't have enough sugar, so I spent the money! ! !

Let the male protagonist have some counter-attacks. After it was released, it became almost meaningless. There is no problem with the Asasi type male protagonist, but at least let the male protagonist enjoy some benefits. He has always received benefits but it is quite uncomfortable not to know. And the male protagonist has not shown that he likes the female protagonist so far. Is the pace a bit slow?

Damn it, why is there a role of the heroine's mother? It's so poisonous.

The last few chapters are awesome and they have become popular 😁

Come on, author, don't give up. As long as you update, I will keep reading.

Suddenly I thought, if the protagonist is not with the heroine later, will the heroine become the kind of pervert who says "this way you will be with me forever"? I want to see it

I only updated one chapter in two days, the author is so short

Don't you know who to cum?(´▽｀;)ゝ

Why do you look so awkward? The relationship development is inexplicable, and the communication between the two people is also very strange. The most annoying one is the tsundere. Why do so many people say it's sweet? Very annoyed to see

It's not good for this author to update a few chapters a month.

I want to be more refined🤒

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Feeling like a female video

Update soon ah ah ah ah ah ah

Why is there such a huge difference in writing between Before Together and After Together? Many things described after Together are awkward. There are so many potential things in the male protagonist that are not developed. The dialogues are also the same as those written by Xiaobai. It is obvious that the writing before Together was very good. Did someone else write it later?

He didn't sleep for 24 hours and had to go to work, but he didn't die. This male protagonist is so stupid Chapter 145

This doesn't give me a cum

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

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