Sixteen Years Old, the Fourth Generation Mizukage

The comment section is so scary. It's rare to see an author who dares to be so imaginative. I haven't seen the follow-up development yet. The writing is obviously very good, the logic is clear, and the writing is good. Don't be accused of being autistic.

I just discovered this book from Daodu yesterday, and spent one night and one day today. After reading this book, it is generally good, except for the lack of water and the soil enhancement at the end. It's pretty good among similar works. Let's put it this way, it's pretty good for me to read it in one sitting. After all, I haven't encountered any points that are particularly toxic to me. That's it for the time being. I look forward to the follow-up. Come on! ! !

1. It is a normal phenomenon in business behavior to release the intelligence you want to release to your subordinates and enemies, and then achieve your goals through real intelligence and certain guidance. Therefore, if you are a big-mouthed person, you can think more about whether there are people around you who look big-mouthed but benefit yourself 2. During the period when it is unable to create an actual monopoly, there is a strong enemy that attracts most of the competitors' targets and ensures its smooth development. After the strong enemy is exhausted from dealing with competitors, and after itself grows, it will reap the benefits. Pig's feet are currently in this state. Refer to the Kuomintang and the Communist Party's Anti-Japanese War

That being said, overall it looks pretty good. It's not as bad as the guy in the comment section said. Finally, I saw the descendants of Otsutsuki except Senju, Uchiha, Hinata, and Uzumaki 😏😏 The poisonous point that the old man said is nothing more than the time travel of Hinata Hanabi, and the original characters Keeping these two points in mind 😏 I think it's okay, not considered poisonous. Hanabi's time travel brings Lin's death back on track. The main question is why Hanabi is Hanabi, which is not a big problem 😏 Maybe the author likes this character. The purpose of keeping the original work is to maintain the plot. If Kakashi, Obito, Minato, and Kushina are all killed by you, then the plot will no longer be Hokage. Then why should I read this? Isn't the purpose of fan fiction to show a sense of participation in the original work? I hope the author can take it step by step and finish writing safely. There are too few Naruto stories about corpse bones.

This book is very suitable to my taste, and it is also unique among various fan fictions. It no longer only focuses on the plot of the original work, but also adds my own originality in many aspects. It is more refreshing and less toxic. I will always support it.

It's well written. It's the first time I've seen such a well-written fan drama. I can see that the group portraits are good and the plot is reasonable. Many fans insist on keeping the same plot as the original, which is so boring

In the early stage, I tolerated not killing people with names and surnames. Finally, I killed one person, and it was Danzo, an ally! I can't bear it, are you an undercover agent of Konoha~

The protagonist is probably an undercover agent of Konoha. After watching Naruto, you didn't keep Danzo to weaken Konoha's strength?

I have never read Naruto and thought this book was quite good, but I don't quite understand what the people in the comment section were so disgusted with. If you don't like the way the protagonist behaves, you don't have to watch it. Ideological assimilation is the best thing.

Some people think that fans like to focus on the poisonous points, but it is really unnecessary. If all the fans follow the original Naruto character timeline and pay close attention to the details, what new ideas can be written in the fanfiction? I can only write like this after going over and over again

Flying Thunder God plus Rasengan. Do you think it is speed plus power? Impossible. Flying Thunder God is a space ninjutsu, not a speed ninjutsu. It uses flexibility and does not add speed. The power is only the Rasengan.

It's obvious that the combat effectiveness has improved very quickly, but he still feels inexplicably unhappy. Now I suddenly understand that the protagonist is very good at boasting, but his record is always the result of fighting against others, and there is nothing to show for the record of killing any named enemy. An enemy of Minato Minato's level cannot be killed, but what about one of Akimichi Choza's level? It's outrageous that there are so few records of Zhenzhan...

Did the author offend anyone? I get trolled when I write it straight, I get trolled when I write it backwards, I get trolled when I write in circles, basically every article contains all kinds of harsh words...

It's not bad, but it's a bit baffling for Hinata Hanabi to travel to the era of pig's feet.

Ah? Why did you kill Danzo? The protagonist is not from Konoha, so it's better to keep Danzo. If you cooperate with him, Konoha will be ruined sooner or later.

Everything else is okay, but the ninjas of Konoha are too strong. They deliberately set off the main character 55, and they don't include killing the supporting ninjas of Konoha during the fights. They even wrote about Mist Ninja as a fan, but they were afraid of rewriting. You are not writing a fan of Konoha Ninjas.

What I saw was that... I was so looking forward to rescuing Nohara Lin. You can just write a fireworks time travel and drag the protagonist... If you take the eyes, I will respect you as a man. In the end, there was no hair left, so I had to write Nohara Rin to death forcibly. It's simply extremely poisonous. What's the point of adding this fireworks time-travel plot? What's the purpose? !

After reading ten chapters, I just felt baffled. First, a fireworks show from the later life was used to add soy sauce. It was said that the result of preventing Obito's blackening was actually promoting Obito's blackening and forcibly integrating it with the original work. If not, Kakashi will be killed or captured, Konoha's tailed beast will lose control of Nohara Ringg or be sealed again, and it is not certain that Konoha is prepared. Or maybe you can save it yourself. In the end, he insisted on intercepting the protagonist so that Kakashi could kill Nohara Rin just like in the original work and let Obito see the kaleidoscope, which was the worst achievement, otherwise it would have been 3 magatama at most. The most outrageous thing is that the protagonist initially thought of saving the two jounin and a few ninjas taking the blame, but because he was intercepted and the jounin died, the protagonist just smiled crookedly, which was just what I wanted, just enough to take the blame. The idea of ​​co-writing at the beginning was just for fun. No matter whether the two jounin were saved or not, he had to take the blame to complete the goal, right? The key is still conflicting, and there are no other operations or explanations in between.

Is Obito stepping up so hard? ? Just one extra blood chakra eye and fight with the main character's true form for a whole day and a night? ? Can his physical skills be as good as the protagonist's? Can Ninjutsu be as good as the protagonist's? Is the illusion protagonist worse than Obito? ? How come your Kamui can transform into a Super Sailor? ? ? Even if Ben is resurrected and beaten or not, the protagonist will say that after being taught by Ben for a few days and adding the double blood chakra, Obito becomes the number one in the ninja world? ?

"Decisive Killing", "IQ Online", "Easy" 🤫

After reading these posts, I was persuaded to quit seven or eight times, but I can't figure out why I keep recommending them every day. After reading it, I felt that these people are too impetuous to read. If they can't accept the creations of fans, they will just go away and watch your anime. I almost missed a good book. Why is Obito opening Susanoo? It's unreasonable for someone to die in front of their beloved. After reading it, I think there is nothing wrong with it. Don't be affected by the post. Only after reading it yourself will you decide whether it is good or not to your taste.

In fact, when I look at Obito's strengthening of Obito, it doesn't matter to me, but there is one point that makes me very uncomfortable. How can Obito pull out the Thunder-Turkish Alliance in a short time? And even if the two countries of Lei and Earth have done this, what are the considerations for cooperating with Gen? Why should a terrorist organization cooperate with two major countries? What benefits can be paid? Why do you win people's trust? How does he introduce his purpose? If we just talk about collecting tailed beasts, why should Leitu cooperate with him since he also has tailed beasts? Okay, let's forget about this problem, then the next question is, the joint action of the Three Kingdoms of Thunder and Earth, from understanding and discussion to decision-making to mobilization and maneuvering, a series of processes were quickly completed in a short time. There was no news at all from the three major countries in the ninja world plus a neutral organization. Are the decision-making levels of the two countries of Thunder and Earth too awesome? This level of management is not at the same level as the Three Kingdoms of Wind, Fire and Water. Compared to other countries, the managers are useless. The protagonist has to consider other blood-stained families in the village to implement a policy, and has to exchange interests. Look at the shadow of the two countries of Thunder and Earth. They can implement whatever orders they want, and everything from decision-making to implementation can be done in one go in a short time. Isn't it too outrageous? The protagonist with this level of administration can reform the ninja world. His level is much higher than that of the protagonist.

Thinking on the bright side, maybe something happened to the author.

I don't watch many Naruto fandoms, because I've only watched half of the Naruto show itself, and I'm not too keen on the settings in it. But the writing in this book is really good. I don't know how many subscriptions there are, but it is definitely top-notch among fandoms. It feels like watching Pirates and Salted Fish Kuro before, it's great

Brother, the main character is Mizukage, why do you write so many plots about Konoha? . .

I think the writing is passable, it's good to pass the time, it's a bit interesting, and it's already at the forefront among Naruto fans.

I haven't read the subscription chapter yet, but I have subscribed to all the subsequent articles. I almost missed it when I read the comment section before, but at least it was well written, much better than most Naruto fanfics. It's normal to run out of inspiration, and you'll just have to make adjustments later. The author must persevere. If the author can finish writing, I will subscribe to it.

It's so well written. The last Naruto fanfic I could read was Konoha: Ninja Life, and I read it twice! This book is also a masterpiece! Come on, author! ! !

Is the author still around? Can you complete the update? My previous account is fully subscribed to this. Very good book