After Rebirth, I Decided to Return to the Countryside

The heroine is a bit awkward. . Everything else is fine. If the author doesn't know how to write emotional dramas, I would suggest reducing the length of the story. After all, it's for leisure in the countryside. It doesn't matter whether there is a female protagonist or not.

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The protagonist's mouth was covered with feces and urine, and he could not speak. What age is it now? The author is still using this writing method. You are not afraid of pounce, are you?

I give up and wish you all a happy life. I really can't bear to have such a heroine. I personally like the first few pictures without a heroine, but until the heroine appears later, I feel like it's a drama after the heroine appears. I really can't stand it. I really want a brother to say that it's a bit tasteless. It's a pity to abandon it and it's tasteless!

There are too many plots surrounding a few girls, author. In other words: there are too many side plots, and there should be progress in the main plot!

This book does not conform to the mainstream spirit mentioned above. The mainstream advocates doing problems from an early age and then going to a big city to work for entrepreneurs for a lifetime when you grow up. You are no longer playing in your hometown. If everyone is like you, how can entrepreneurs guarantee their employment, exploit whoever is oppressed, and how can they pay for it in advance?

After seeing Chapter 12, I came here to complain: The development of the two worlds is almost the same. The time difference was a few months before the college entrance examination. The original person survived and was admitted to college, but now he failed the college entrance examination due to self-destruction. It is probably due to an oversight by the author that the timelines of the two do not overlap. After four years of college, he joined a self-media company and was responsible for artist signing and video post-processing. He worked for four to five years and was promoted to a middle-to-senior level in the company. With an annual salary of 500,000 yuan, he was at least a department manager, or a vice president in charge of artist management and technical departments. The current owner is an embroidery worker who has been working for more than 4 years. The above differences represent that the original person has experienced 5 more years, as well as corresponding entertainment experience and world development experience. A, if the two worlds start at different points in time, the subsequent development will be very different, which means that the original person has 9 more years of entertainment experience. Although I don't sing myself, being able to join a self-media company and be responsible for artist signings means that I am more interested in entertainment-related things. In 9 years, how many new songs, how many new movies and TV series, how many newly published books, how many new jokes are there in the world... You only need to recall a little bit, eight or nine domestic and foreign movies and TV series? Dozens of Chinese and foreign saliva songs? A new book or two? A few new sketches and jokes? The 9th Spring Festival Gala? The so-called academic qualifications, the so-called starting capital, and your ability to work hard to reach the middle and senior levels of an entertainment company are enough for you to stay in the entertainment industry for a lifetime. It is not an exaggeration to call you a "master". B, it would be more convenient if the development differences between the two worlds are similar, with 5 years of entertainment experience and 5 years of world prophet. With the capabilities of my own executives, what is self-media? You can do whatever you want, it's hard to say if there are too many, a small rich man at the provincial or municipal level can't escape. Another exaggeration, you go to the government and throw yourself into the trap, and use the world's development trend in five years to exchange for your lifetime wealth, it is not too much. Don't worry, it's only 5 years, no one will slice you up. C, no matter how different the world is, there is a lot to be done with the system of "God rewards those who work hard"! The present master is only 22 years old and is young and promising. What should he learn? Get a bachelor's degree in one or two years, take the postgraduate entrance examination, and enter the academic circle? Take the public examination or enter politics? Or simply develop computer embroidery/video editing to the top level. You will also be No. 1 In the industry and an absolute industry leader. Even if you think your IQ is not enough, then develop physical fitness, running, track and field, or even practice martial arts, Sanda, Bagua... Go back to the countryside to make fishing videos? Ruining yourself? I really don't know where the author's idea came from.

The author started acting like a monster after it was put on the shelves After more than 100 chapters, the poison spots began to become denser. It is recommended to skip around chapter 160, as he was poisoned and died . . . There are also poisonous points in the back. Alas, the character design is also flawed. The protagonist is not a human being in daily life, so he should be taken down early. Why is he so ambiguous? You could just change it to a world background where three wives and four concubines can be allowed. Otherwise, the two of them are still ambiguous, which is disgusting. You have given people hope, and then you run to have an affair with the other one. It is very bad!

I don't understand the author's mentality. Why don't you write about your return to the village and become the owner of the game? This is just a few chapters long, and there are only a few videos where emotional lines are added, and the writing is so embarrassing that it looks like a running account. The scariest thing is writing several chapters in a row. Why don't we just meet for dinner? It's so long, I fast forwarded and didn't even finish it. Forget it, I'm tired, let's destroy it!

Judging from the title, it was about doing a TikTok live broadcast or something, so I just gave up, it was inexplicably annoying.

The author should write down the character relationships, name, skill list, and proficiency on a separate piece of paper. Take a look at it when you have nothing to do. The inconsistency is really unbearable! !

It's a waste of this talent, dogs can use it better than you.

There is no limit to increasing proficiency without cultivating immortality. What a waste.

Recently, I feel that the plot of writing a book is dragging, as if the protagonist is very happy with the entanglement of multiple female protagonists, including the original main business, how to develop it, what's the matter? Are you going to change your article?

If you really can't do it, go have a relationship and then come back and write a romantic drama!

This novel made me understand what it means: it's tasteless to eat, it's a pity to throw it away

Although this book talks about returning to the countryside, it is written too calmly, and there is no progress at all in the heroine's ambiguity, which is a bit embarrassing. This is not logical. Could it be that the protagonist is preparing to leave the mortal world? And I don't believe that the system that an ordinary person gets can be so peaceful. It seemed like it just gave him a reason to resign. An ordinary person got a golden finger, but he didn't use it at all and just let nature take its course. This is not logical. Also, it's not like the protagonist is going back to the countryside, it's just like the protagonist has found a place to shoot a video, just to shoot a video. It makes people look like the protagonist, who just found a place to shoot the video. Did something. You raise cats and dogs to make videos, you grow vegetables to make videos, you fish to make videos, and you fish to make videos. So your book is not about returning to the countryside, but about changing jobs.

After reading the first fifty chapters, there is no key point. It talks about making money by making videos, but the details of the videos are eaten by you? The rest is all a running account. After reading Chapter 50, I felt lonely. Interacting with the heroine was also awkward as hell.

It's not interesting, it's too bland. You've written the system, but you're not happy with the writing at all.

The system has no sense of existence at all. It just gave the protagonist a reason to resign, and then the system went offline. The protagonist also made no effort to strengthen himself. The heroine written later was also a bit too stiff, and the protagonist is only about 20, and everyone around him wants to introduce him to blind dates and partners.

1. It's not that I can't write ordinary prose, but the author obviously can't write it well! 2. If you have this system, instead of doing it yourself, you should do scientific research or something! You chose the wrong subject! 3. It's still a matter of writing power. It's too watery and flat and I can't stand it.

When a normal person gets the proficiency system, shouldn't their first thought be immortality? No matter how hard it is to study biological sciences, after all, who didn't want to be a scientist when they were young?

I couldn't stand it after reading Chapter 14. When I looked at the comments, they were all negative.

The main character's fan count data has always been inconsistent. It was 28 million before, and suddenly it became 24 million. Did the author rely on his brain to set the data?

Another licking pig's feet when he sees a woman being immobile

Book friends who like slow-paced local literature can help vote. This book combines some of the author's own experiences in rural areas. I hope you will like it!

Chapter 159: I can't stand it any longer, so I retreat, I retreat.

If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write them. There are so many pro-cCP people now. After all, they are poisoned.

Gradually, the author deviated from the original intention of describing the protagonist. The original description was that of a Buddhist who returned to the countryside to make money through videos and then lived a leisurely life. But gradually the protagonist changed. At first, he said that he gradually fell in love with Chen Wei. Good guy, he brought his best friend to see you, and he also hooked up with his best friend, so he stepped on both sides of the aisle and called it natural. Then there are participating in exhibitions, nutrient solutions, and setting up factories. This really makes people speechless. What's the point of earning so much? With your orchids and videos, it's not difficult to earn tens of millions a year. The system is your key, do this and do that all day long. Also, the intelligence is not improved enough and you can't think of a solution? Don't you want to think about exercises online?

This writer is really confused about numbers. The number of fans is 25.5 Million to 23 million, and 17 million in a few chapters. It is completely negative growth. It is true that the number of fans has increased again.