The Life of Cultivating Immortals Through the Panel of the Strange World

I stopped watching when I saw Pig's Feet joining the Demon Slayer Division! This kind of novel likes to treat people like dogs!

There are still quite a lot of flaws! The title greatly affects the reading experience. As a Taoist priest, the protagonist calls himself a boy rather than a poor Taoist; others call him brother rather than a Taoist priest. It shows that the author actually does not agree with the protagonist's profession at all. Just because the protagonist has a source of force, half of the character design collapsed first. Besides, the protagonist, as the sole heir to the Taoist temple and the abbot of the Taoist temple, does not reflect his character (it is definitely different between those who have inheritance and those who practice casually)). He easily agreed to join the Demon Slayer Division, but once he got there, he was just a little short of a starting point. If he had a golden finger, why not develop his own strength first and then join the imperial court? At least the status is different. I haven't watched it since...

You can gain soul power by killing monsters, and when you meet that fox, you will say that it is not the one who killed it. The conflict with Xu Shi was too straightforward and intellectually depressing.

After reading a few chapters, I knew the outline of the book. If it wasn't interesting, I clicked on it. The author could cut it. I really couldn't stand it.

As soon as I saw the Demon Slayer, I didn't want to watch it anymore.

Junk books like this kind of books tend to be included in the government. The government is the biggest evil, much worse than evil ghosts. This kind of junk book will be blocked immediately.

Don't you check if the author writes a novel? The front and back don't match up. At the beginning, it was said that the great commander was at least innate. Later it was said that it was the peak of the day after tomorrow. The realm is not up to par. Also, people who are at the peak of physical training cannot beat those who are at the late stage of qi training. Why didn't you mention that there is no difference between physical and qi training when you introduced it? Now you are teasing me

As soon as I saw the compound surname, I gave up and returned him as the commander-in-chief. Haha, I saw that he was a fool. Vulgar

I saw a lot of mistakes in the sentences. I really want to correct them for you.

The plot is a bit bland, and the writing generally has no major flaws but nothing outstanding. The characterization is not outstanding. For example, if you describe a pig's trotters as a foodie, write more details about pig's trotters, cooking and enjoying food, and don't write too much about pig's trotters, buying a house, making chili and other daily chores. You It has become a running story now. The description of helping the fox wash his hands, make his bed and wipe his mouth is a failure. I believe the author is a lover of small animals, but it is difficult to reconcile the modern plot of raising dogs and cats into the weird background of cultivators and cannibals. Moreover, they are other people's pets. It is difficult to imagine pigs. While hunting monsters and adding some points, the Holy Virgin washes the fox's hands to prevent it from eating unhygienic food. Not to mention monsters, it is impossible for people to be hygienic in the wild environment. If you want to portray a pig with mysophobia, then all of them must be clean. Just describe one characteristic of the character. You are writing about too many people. The objects have no characteristics. In the end, the plot of the story is relatively bland, with the hero saving the beauty, and the second generation slapping each other in the face and enmity, which is a bit far-fetched. Especially the pig's feet have a legacy, take a leave to watch, and then come back without breaking through the innateness. Didn't his master let the innate descend from the mountain and have the inheritance, but don't kill monsters to add points? Also, your inheritance is too far-fetched. The ancestor's inheritance is not in the temple, and you encountered it in the mountains dozens of miles away. Can't you just stay in the temple? It's only reasonable to be a bit of a test in the audience. Do you think it's embarrassing for your ancestral secret treasure to be in Lao Wang's house next door? Finally, Goldfinger, you have such an awesome point-adding upgrade system, but you still have to take various medicines and practice. Isn't it nice to add points to kill monsters? Then why did you design this golden finger? It means that you can obviously make money by trading stocks at home, but you have to move bricks...

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Thanks to the author for taking me back to ten years ago

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The fighting was briefly touched upon, but the plot was written too immaturely.

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Half step, half step...😰

It's well written, not that radical, more casual, keep up the good work

Nowadays, most authors don't know how to write fighting scenes. They are mediocre, without any sense of expectation or excitement. It's like reading an outline.

Beautiful boss, second generation provocation. Can it get any more cliche?

Author, your name is Cultivation of Immortality in a Weird World, so you should have more new settings than traditional Cultivation of Immortality. You cannot use the template of Cultivation of Immortality in the past. If readers always know the subsequent plot, it will really be meaningless.

It is as bland as water, the protagonist and plot are not well developed, there are no swords and swords and children in the world, and there is no desolation, suffering, joys and sorrows. It's like playing a role-playing game, just level up all the way and you're done! The author's writing style and plot creation need to be improved, otherwise the article will be quite ugly. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

The author is asking for an update. Can you give me a book group?

The plot is quite good, and the pace is comfortable to watch, but the number of words is too small. I guess I won't be able to read it much.

This book is almost dead, because there is not enough reading, no recommendation, and the new book period has passed. Now it is equivalent to running naked. If you continue to read, there is still a chance to save it. I hope everyone will support it. It is best to spend a few minutes every day to read the new chapters. Thank you Xiuxian!