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You always complain that Realm looks very messy. I have changed everything back to the original. I lost a lot of my brain cells in order to compile the description of Realm. Now that I have changed it all, I feel a little heartbroken!

If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write them. Lu Xueqi likes the protagonist to be incomprehensible and write like an inflatable doll. Baguio likes Zhang Xiaofan mainly because he shares joys and sorrows in the Blood Cave. If the plot is changed, can Zhang Xiaofan be loved at first sight because of his good looks? What are you writing? Childish characterization

Something doesn't feel right when I read it, a novel about cultivating immortals! Doesn't that mean that the master is a teacher and the strong is respected? But here you are, the protagonist is obviously the number one in the sect, but he is shorter than others. And if you ask a second realm person to be the leader and lead a sect with thousands of people, are you sure you can conquer both the inside and outside? Shock surroundings? The overall feeling is: the protagonist is too soft. He has one foot in the fairyland, but he salutes the novice and calls him senior every day. The key is that the novices know that the protagonist is very high, but they take it as a matter of course. What's even more outrageous is that he is always on call, which makes the strong man lose his face...

Recently, there was a small recommendation, and the number of people who read it suddenly increased a lot, and many people criticized it. The author is a complete newcomer, and this is his first novel. It will definitely not satisfy everyone. You can just read it reluctantly. I will also accept your reasonable suggestions. I hope you will be merciful. Thank you!

Does the power of plot revision mean that no matter how the protagonist struggles, the big hands behind the scenes can dial the plot back to the original? Wouldn't it be better if the protagonist lay flat? It's easier to write this way.

Nowadays, novice authors often suppress the word count of the main character and want to write a thousand or hundreds of chapters. I think if you can write five or six hundred chapters and keep readers interested in reading, you are already very successful.

The author likes his own ➕ setting so much that he changes it too much and it's ridiculous

I think this is what Xue Qi looks like in my heart

Recently, many people have said that the Ya of my Tian Ya Sword is written as Tian Xie Sword. The author has changed it, and the spells of various sword techniques have been changed. I hope everyone can give me more opinions. I can change it if you see it. I hope everyone can support it.

After reading the free chapter, let me talk about the main poisonous point of this book: the author is too single-minded when describing the characters, and his facial expressions are solid. His mentality has not changed with the growth of age, status and cultivation, and he is still so naive and simple. For example: It is hard to imagine that an elder from Shangqing (forty or fifty years old) would blush from time to time; it is also hard for me to imagine that the protagonist would immediately panic and explain quickly because of a small question from others (students with lower cultivation and status than himself). Anyway, after reading the free chapter, the biggest impression I have on the protagonist is that his mentality is always 18 and there is no growth at all. For adults with social experience, it is difficult to have a sense of substitution and the readability is extremely poor.

Come on, learn more from other Zhu Xian fans and wait for it to be released.

Here is a unified reply to the realm question. The author has not changed the original work, but only depicted a small realm that was not subdivided in the original work. It is available in the related work, please go and take a look! Thanks!

Do you think it is inconsistent? The secrets of cultivating immortals can be passed on casually and told directly. The most important thing is that the protagonist can reopen a peak. It is outrageous. He has broken the thousand-year rules of Qingyun Sect. It is a bit far-fetched to open a peak if he wants to.

The setting is so weird that I even doubted whether what I was watching was a Zhu Xian fanfic.

The original work is full of ancient ferocious beasts from the Treasure House of the Heavenly Emperor, and the ferocity of the beast gods, heaven and earth, etc. The introduction of traditional realm settings is too clear and seems like a minion. For example, the Dou Emperor rides a horse, giving people a strange sense of disparity. Expanding the worldview is not like forcing combat power to sew together advanced maps. It is not without reason that there are so many bugs in the fantasy map-changing and upgrading text, let alone the continuation of it by fans. Since we are all Zhu Xian fans, we can just continue to write like the World Changing fans.

Adding too many custom settings will make your head hurt. The four great sword techniques of Zhu Xian are the Divine Sword Controlling Thunder, Killing Ghosts and Gods, and the Seven Star Sword Technique. The fourth one is not mentioned, but it is very likely that the Zhu Xian Sword Formation is also considered a sword technique. And for each small realm, you have to add an alias, which is unnecessary. It would be more useful to complete the names of Tianyin Temple, Fenxiang Valley, and Demon Sect realm.

Your main question is that you can obviously learn it once and record it on the system, so why not learn it all? Are you right about Goldfinger? Write down the exercises and learn them all, or don't write them down! You don't have to practice the exercises to the highest level, but you still have to know them! Have you never heard that mountain stones can be used to attack jade? Why do people with higher levels of cultivation read more books? And you are not human and can forget! You have a golden finger! There is no such thing as biting off more than others can chew! Almighty or not! Everyone is unhappy with you!

Tianya Sword, Tianya (ya) is not Tianxie, so don't write half of it if you don't know the characters.

I don't know what the author thinks. The protagonist's physique is a Yin-Yang spirit body. The protagonist has been inherited by the Yin-Yang Sect, Ji-Yang Zhenjue, Ji-Yin Zhenjue, and Yin-Yang Wuji, but he only practices Ji-Yang Zhenjue and Yin-Yang Wuji, but not Ji-Yin Zhenjue. All the protagonist's Taoist methods are derived from Tai Chi Yin-Yang.

Come on, I wish the author to become a white master writer!

There are too few updates, not enough to read.

So far, I feel good, and I am very concerned about the plot development after changing the map, and the cheat function! Come on, voted!

The protagonist of the author will not really marry that person named Shen. Xue Qi is enough. The protagonist is also a time traveler after all. Monogamy is the right way. It feels a bit inappropriate to go to another one. This is my suggestion.

It can be written but there are too few updates. But come on!

It doesn't feel like a Qingyun fan, it feels like I'm reading an ordinary novel about cultivating immortals, not very exciting.

I think it would be better to change my brother's name to the word "chess" next to the character "". The homophony is good, but it doesn't have to be the same as my mother's. After all, he is a boy, and Qi is mostly a girl's name.

Oh my god, someone liked and commented and took a look, only to find that there is an update!

In the early stage, the chapter about getting the inheritance of Yin Yang Sect was a little bit poisonous. Generally speaking, it has jumped out of the plot of Zhu Xian, especially in the later stage, it is already food and fodder!