Knowledge of Dharma and Immortal Path

，，；， For example: the protagonist handles the conflict with his apprentice (who practices martial arts and medicine) without being too weak or overdoing it. It is just right, relieving his anger without feeling oppressive and in line with his age and experience. The character descriptions and descriptions are very appropriate. The distinction between teenagers and adults is very clear. Everything they say and do is consistent with their age. There is no sense of inconsistency between being sinister and cunning at a young age or being naive and childish at a much older age. For example: when the waiter in a bookstore suppressed the protagonist, he belittled the protagonist and appeased the customers in the store. He also quickly hired security personnel to control the situation, leaving the protagonist with nowhere to vent. This is the basic operation of a worker in a mature society. The protagonist's obsession with eating meat is vividly written: a young boy works tirelessly to eat meat every meal, and finally achieves his wish.（，，）       ，，，，      Be sure to subscribe and support when it is released😁

This book is really a rare breath of fresh air, just like the soldier assault in the TV series. There is no mention of a woman in the book, let alone the female protagonist. The male protagonist doesn't even have a mother, only a father. It's amazing.

The medical books that I have been reading for the past 40 chapters can obviously be read in a few chapters. To become an apprentice, you have to go to the bookstore to read the book. Who wants to read this is super boring. I have worked so hard to become an apprentice. This golden finger is quite novel, but the pace is too slow.

The subscription is open, this is the cultivation of immortality in my heart! Comfortable. The trainees are all complaining, and the disciples are saying yes. People who are used to eating fast food are not qualified to comment, especially those who make bad remarks, so just take care of yourself!

Fascinating and wonderfully written. Come on

The writing is average and there are no side quests yet

The protagonist is a white-eyed wolf! ! !                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   To See The Protagonist has succeeded in cultivation, and when he goes back to avenge the destruction of the small sect, he turns out not to have touched a single enemy, and has not avenged any revenge,  It can be said that the leader of the sect is trying his best to train the protagonist. He provides food, clothing, housing and transportation. He depends on his skills and has mutual benefits with his classmates. Even during the warning period, when the protagonist visits his mother's grave, the sect will send experts to drive to escort him. Later, if the sect is to be wiped out, they will also send out members to save the seeds. Look at the remaining classmates who are either dead or useless. Well, a genius trained by a sect like the protagonist will definitely die if he stays, and he will be intercepted and killed by enemies later. As a result, the protagonist is now successful in cultivation. Talking about revenge, he went back to take care of the living ones, and did not mention the revenge of the dead elders and classmates... Does co-writing The Revenge of the Family have nothing to do with the protagonist? The protagonist is getting rid of a bunch of ungrateful baggage and is enjoying cultivating immortality alone, right?

The concept, conception, and writing are not bad, and it can be said to be of a good level. However, this cheat is a bit too weird. I don't understand medicine, but this cheat is like, you read the math book, and then the cheat converts the formula into humans. For example, the Dirichlet function jumps out and shouts to eat me. I attack with rational numbers, and then I attack with irrational numbers with my backhand. Taylor's formula pops up, watch me Taylor launch an attack. It's a bit awkward to gain knowledge by defeating enemies, and writing too many words is a bit like having too many words. It is recommended to take it with you later

In fact, this book is rare and does not contain a lot of intrigue. The protagonist's character is also a very pure and simple person. The people the protagonist knows, or those around him, are not very snobbish. So when I was reading this book, the worldview behind it was also revealed a little bit. For example, it was obvious that it was the village and town where the protagonist was located. It could be clearly felt nearby that it was gradually not very peaceful, and that there was a kind of chaos coming. So when I know that the protagonist has a pretty good relationship with the people around him, especially the protagonist's character is not indifferent or cold-blooded, plus I know that the protagonist will gradually become stronger in the future, but it is only his individual, and his personal power will increase, because This is a slow-burning book, and the world is not peaceful, so when I read this book, I will feel that the protagonist is powerful. When he slowly walks out of here, people around him will die and grow old, which makes me feel that the protagonist will have a sense of loneliness in the future, and he will experience this kind of life and death. So I will have a feeling of sadness for the protagonist, but this is the life he has to experience. This is how I feel. Although there were some plots that made me feel that the author was reading this book, but when I was reading the book, I felt that the character of the protagonist also saw the environment in the book. When I had this feeling of sadness, this was this book. The only thing that made me feel this novel and see the shadow of a literary work.

The latest chapter was a bit disturbing to read. The Randing Sect destroyed the sect that trained the protagonist. The elder was killed, the master and brothers were killed and laid to bed. It also caused me and my fellow sects to escape and become separated, and almost died in the pursuit of robbers. The protagonist has the ability and strength to avenge such a great hatred. However, after the protagonist comes back, he is indifferent to the enemies of the Randing Sect. The first thing he does when he comes back is to show off his identity as a magical immortal in front of everyone. Look, I am an immortal and I am so powerful. Faced with the benefactor, the instructor gives you some money to finish the work, do you need this little money? Give him a few initiations and teach him some true skills. Will you die? As a sect, the protagonist has to fight tooth and nail to retain the seeds. I don't see the protagonist having any sense of responsibility for the sect. After the magic is achieved, the Qinghe Medicine Sect is like a white-eyed wolf. These chapters of the Hui Qinghe Sect are really disgusting to read. As the book friend in the post below said, they created a sect with sentimental and righteous people, but lacked a ruthless and unrighteous protagonist. The characters of the sect are really well written and eye-catching.

Very interesting cheats, the pace of the article is not impatient or impatient, it's worth reading.

To write about indigenous people, you have to be confident that your writing skills are good.

It's well written, but to be honest, the natives don't really get into it.

The protagonist's experience of successfully cultivating immortality by imitating the meridians of a demon is really beautiful. I thought that the protagonist would be the first person to cultivate immortality in this world, and this would start the myth of human beings cultivating immortality. Who knew there would be other immortal cultivators in the future, or what kind of imperial court would direct those cultivators, and it would suddenly fall into a cliche. It's a pity.

The contract has been signed, there is an outline, and the manuscript is saved, so feel free to collect and read it!

The protagonist's ambition and vision should also gradually improve. Don't just eat meat.

The indigenous protagonist is the biggest flaw. I basically have no desire to read on.

To be honest, this is a slow book, but it is too slow. This is the biggest drawback of this book. I feel like the author was slow to write this book and seemed a bit smug? About complacency, I have to put a question mark on this point. I'm not sure. Why? There are more than 100 pictures, but the world view of this book has not yet been spread out. Everyone who clicks on this book knows that it is a novel about cultivating immortality. There are more than 100 pictures. The aspect of cultivating immortality outside the world has not been written yet. The more than 100 pictures are still in the secular world. We all know that this is a slow-burning book. The world view is slowly unfolding. We can also understand that the author wants to write about the protagonist and strive to grow step by step. We can also accept it. However, if you don't write about the problem of cultivating immortality, the main structure of the secular world that introduces the world must be known to everyone. At the very least, what is the name of the continent you are on? At the very least, you are the largest organization thousands of miles away and you have to name it. I don't know what the author thinks, and I don't know how other readers feel. I just take it as my own. When I read this book, I felt that the county where the protagonist is located is like a small island, and this island is just such a county. Outside this island is a sea, solitary. I don't know what is around the sea. There may be other islands, but I don't know what islands there are in the four weeks. I don't know the name of the largest island. Or it is mentioned briefly in the book, but I don't feel deeply. It is a kind of fantasy novel. Uniquely, your village is very weak and there are ferocious monsters outside. Have you ever felt this way? Have you ever discovered that in the county where the protagonist of this book is located, the largest organization is the sect where the protagonist is located? There is no mention of the village chief, county chief, or school. Moreover, when other sects come to attack the protagonist's place, there is no so-called village chief or larger organization to help or warn. Is this the biggest poisonous point of this book? Other sects come to attack the protagonist's sect, and the dead are dead. It feels like the protagonist's family is the only one in the county where the protagonist lives, and the protagonist's family has not visited his home, so it has a fantasy style, that is, one village has the same surname, and they are all related by relatives. Because you are a martial artist and a cultivator. It is not the kind of ancient fantasy where the two sects are fighting. There is no more powerful or neutral organization to speak out and tell you not to go too far or something? There are more than 100 pictures. A sect comes to attack the protagonist's sect. They only want to fight or negotiate. There are no other ideas. Don't you want to ask other people for help? Really like what I said before, a village feels like an island. The sea four weeks away is very dangerous. I don't know what the enemy or the organization is. This is too much to say that it is slow, and it also feels like the author is blindly pursuing one step at a time, blindly pursuing a certain point, and neglecting other things.

This book will never be a hit. Because the early stage is too rough, the content of dozens of chapters can be compressed into less than 10 chapters. Chapter 200, is there any trace of cultivating immortality? There are two pieces of content before it is put on the shelves: 1. A martial arts apprentice learns to collect herbs; 2. A medicinal apprentice learns to collect herbs. I wrote 200 chapters with 2 sentences of content. I just wrote it, but the key point is that it didn't create anything exciting. Character image? Background worldview?

The research after turning to immortality was too scientific and lacked the spirit of immortality. If you have a golden finger, you won't accumulate much knowledge of all kinds, and you'll stumble along the way, which is pure stupidity. I can't hold on any longer, so I move away.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, it is obvious that the author is an experienced author, there is no poisonous point, and the writing style is also very good. But! I still can't stand it anymore, because from these ten chapters, it can be seen that the author is a super-competitive person! Get a batch of water!

The progress is a bit slow, more than 70 chapters.

I'm still interested in watching the martial arts training part, but I can't stand the part about cultivating immortals. The supporting characters feel like they have no souls. Chun Chun is a passerby who only says a few words during the journey of cultivating immortals. I haven't watched the rest of it, and I have no interest in watching it anymore. I'll save it for when I'm interested.

Rather than hating the indigenous protagonist, I hate the naive, stupid protagonist. I still prefer the protagonist Su Hui

At chapter 172, the biggest problem with this book is the character of the protagonist. First of all, commercial writing must have a protagonist that can be accepted by readers. It turns out that your protagonist is not the strategist in traditional immortality novels, nor is he a ruthless destroyer of flowers, nor is he a man of great wisdom and perseverance, or even an ordinary ordinary person. He is a child, and he is still a naive child. It is said that children from poor families become masters early. It doesn't matter that this child has been poor for more than ten years and is still a fool. This kid who practiced martial arts and escaped has gone through so many things and is still a fool. He is neither a holy mother nor bitter and hateful, he is just plain stupid. And judging from the plot you described and the environmental background of the protagonist, it is simply impossible for him to be so stupid, so stupid and stupid, that he would die early. Therefore, the protagonist's character does not conform to normal logic, and it is extremely embarrassing to watch. This book is like shit mixed with rice. I didn't feel it at first, but the more I read, the more disgusting it became.

And personal thoughts about the golden finger of this book   The golden finger set by the author is that the protagonist can interact with the book through his thoughts and form a thought space. Fight the figures within to gain knowledge. But judging from the chapters I have read so far, the author ignores two descriptions: 1. The protagonist has no description of the process of self-reading, and relies entirely on shadows to obtain knowledge. It lacks the normal path for people to obtain knowledge, which feels inconsistent... 2. The corresponding growth of the protagonist after acquiring knowledge is not reflected. After studying a book, according to the author's description, it is a very high-level mastery. Since it is mastery, it must be helpful in understanding similar books, but it is still a shame, and the previous knowledge is completely useless. For example, the three medical books for beginners to learn medicine lay the foundation for subsequent learning of internal skills, but the protagonists all understand them very well, and they are not helpful at all for learning internal skills. They are still beating people in a rigid manner. After all the learning, it is just the completion of learning, which feels a bit illogical...

Good book. Mortal is a classic, and the writing rhythm is very good so far. I hope the protagonist can read more and wisely, gradually grow up, and draw the protagonist to life instead of being a static person.

This book is definitely worth reading in the early stages, but after 100, it becomes too wordy. A knowledge point is often introduced over and over again every few chapters, and the plot progresses too slowly. . At that time, I kept following this book and posted the above review for more than 300 chapters. Marriage was deleted by the author and banned! I knew this book was going to be cool! !

Come on, author! ! ! I finished watching it all over again in the blink of an eye! ! ! ! It's simply not enough! ! ! !

I would like to ask, is the protagonist a local aborigine? Still……?