From The Great Feng Nightwatchers to the Myriad Heavens

The protagonist's IQ is 0... He has a golden finger but doesn't use it. How can he practice like others? I'm really speechless.

The pressure was quite severe. . . . What level is Yangshen? . . What level is Da Feng? . . . Are you trying to pull it to a flat line???? The writing quality is there, but the level is not correct 😒😒😒😒

You can write Chen Dong's book without being invincible, without qualifications, without humanity, but you can't without integrity.

I feel like the protagonist Xu Qi'an is a dog-licker, and the nanny is the protagonist. You have a system that is so much better than Xu Qian's, he is just a time traveler, don't you care? Advance your layout, improve your strength and then fight the boss. I wonder what use Xu Qian has to the protagonist? Calling 666 as a younger brother? There is no need to spend too much time on Xu Qian, just write a little bit. You even confessed your identity as a time traveler to him. You two are from the same earth. Are you so nice to him? Zhu Tianliu has many opportunities to travel to the parallel world of the earth, and Xu Qi'an is not special at all.

The protagonist, who is completely brainless, tries not to improve his strength, but just plays for fun, and ends up getting beaten up and called daddy. It grosses me out. Grass.

You can just copy the original text of Tomb of Gods. The protagonist doesn't have to appear. I can copy the original text of Chen Dong for several days in a row. I can also write this novel.

!!!! Da Feng fellow, I'll go!!!! I'm really excited now!!!!! Is this a lifetime series?! Really, The Watcher is the most satisfying novel I have read in so many years. I really miss the days when I stayed up late to watch Dafeng. I still can't forget the determination of "a young man whose promise is worth a thousand pieces of gold" and his passion for "Wei Gong, I won't be an official anymore". The courageous chivalry of "Asking for the Future" is Xu Tongluo's salute to the east after killing his superior with his sword. It is Xu Tongluo's inheritance of the Tsing Yi that kills the foolish emperor for the sake of peace in the world. It is Xu Yinluo's single-handed formation to cut a way for the people behind him! It is the tearful expression of "I am celebrating a year, I have nothing to do today, I just listen to music on the hook",,,, and there are many, many more. This book may be criticized by many people, but it is also the juvenile detainee in my heart. It is almost the pinnacle of the cool literature genre. So I am really looking forward to the author of this fanfic writing that feeling. Come on, author!!!

It looked okay from the front, but the first world grossed me out, like a nanny. Damn, is Ning Caichen his father? I didn't talk about it when I came to give him money. We have only known each other for a few days and we have a good relationship. After defeating the tree demon, he actually gave me a skill. I just want to say that if you lick a dog, you will die a good death.

The protagonist doesn't participate in the plot at all. Even if he does, it's just a trivial plot. It's not exciting, doesn't show off, doesn't accept girls, and it's boring to watch.

You should be bolder when you write Da Feng. Don't be afraid of the original author. After reading more than ten chapters, I still feel like you can't let go.