Weird Tokyo: the Weird Stories I Wrote Came True

Overall, it's good, with a little something and some ingenuity. The writing style is also good, it has the feel of a Japanese mystery novel, like Kyogokudo style. The characterization is particularly good, but how come the sister dies just by showing her face? ? The villain is a typical pervert who acts both as he is and as he is, but it is a bit delayed, but it is also good-looking, and the rhythm of emotional changes is intensive, so it is acceptable. It reads smoothly and there are no major problems. However, for a novel with a relatively slow main line, it may not be easy for a newcomer to write it, so I hope you can stick with it until it is published.

The whole day was devoted to writing about resurrecting my sister, which is boring compared to the various cool articles on short videos that only have the beginning. There is something interesting about really writing about revenge against society. (It is really unreliable to resurrect my sister with ghost stories, it is better to consider using the Immortal Sand Soul Resurrection System)

I hope that the readers who pass by will not be stingy in their comments and be disrespectful😋

It feels too fragmented, and the impression is quite bad. I don't know what others think. Anyway, I think your recent plot is expecting the cleft woman to appear as a saint. But you have been writing about others. Isn't it a bit indifferent? Write long paragraphs about other things. If you write two chapters a day, it's almost the same. If you write one chapter for several days, I really can't comment 😅

There used to be a book called "I Continue Writing Urban Legends in Tokyo". It was very interesting, but it's a pity 😭

The writing is pretty good, but the updates are too slow. I always feel like I'm going to enter the palace 😭

The author has had the surgery done yesterday at my clinic. 🪖

Scratching my head, it looks surprisingly good. But my idea is to use quantity to accumulate a lot of points first, and then use quality to improve the average level. This is more reasonable. Don't worry about whether others live or die. The main line is resurrection.

It was a book that I was originally very interested in, but it's a pity that it stopped here.

I like the subject matter more, but there are too many inner descriptions

Resurrection sister, are you also Kanzaki Shirou?

To be honest, can we find a heroine who is comparable to the protagonist? The five ghosts are completely incomparable!

It is said that the author's book already has 65,000 words, but the chapters only have 15 chapters. Maybe you can adjust it. When I first clicked on it, it was because I only saw a few pictures, so I thought I would keep it up.

In fact, it is written according to Makima. I wonder if you can feel the sense of substitution Picture source Baidu, infringement and deletion

Did the Spoon Killer lead?

The writing is okay, but there are too few updates.

The author ran away, let's all disperse

Isn't it normal to update twice a day? What's going on with the author?🤔 The new book hasn't been updated twice yet, how will it attract readers later?

If a female subject appears in this type of article, the perception will be reduced.

Is the author lying down? Ten days