Getting Started with Skills Starts with Clay Sculpture

It's okay. I was almost dissuaded by a female comment in the book review. After reading it carefully, isn't this a normal transformation novel? However, setting too many worldviews and being too complex is a problem. I'm waiting and seeing, but it can be regarded as food for now.

I hope the heroine has a form that can be a human body with a snake tail.

It's quite rare. Isn't it impossible to write about transformation? At least I haven't seen Qidian. It's one of the evil books after all 🙂

How do you say that the current transformation literature can even change the psychology? If a man travels through time and becomes a woman, even if the body changes, will the mentality change?

There's no foreshadowing at all, bro. Why is the protagonist being hunted in both worlds? When I first watched it, I just realized that the two worlds were on the run. Being hunted in reality makes me confused. The protagonist has just changed his body and no one knows him. Is he a prophecy?

Less than 1.4 Meters, how can it be so beautiful? . . At least set it to 1.5 Meters

The style is good, but there's something wrong with the beginning. The first ten chapters not only introduce the world view and background, but also introduce at least three or four groups of people who are targeting the protagonist (the cheap dad, the killer, the sister, the extraordinary person from the original world who targets the protagonist), and even the protagonist's family. It will be tiring to read with so many lines at the beginning. The author arranged for the protagonist to be hunted down as soon as he returned to the original world simply to give the protagonist a motivation to travel between the two worlds. However, this line is a bit too early. It would be better for the protagonist to witness extraordinary power, become curious and then enter the Tao of nature. Personal thoughts, don't worry, maybe there will be more exciting plots later.

Let me give you a word, no one likes to read a book where the protagonists are struggling to survive in two worlds, and the protagonists also need to rest.

The setting is interesting, the writing is okay, and the pace is appropriate. It is still acceptable for men to change into women. If a man transforms into a woman and still falls in love with a man, I cannot accept it.

How should I put it? There are too many riddles, which makes people very annoying to read. The main reason is that the riddles are too abrupt, do you understand? There is no foreshadowing, the plot is very good, and the theme is new, but many people can't accept it. If I neglect it a little bit, I can't understand much of the whole text, so I gave up.

The writing is okay, but it's just water. The writing on making clay sculptures is a bit too detailed, and there are too many words related to clay sculptures. Moreover, the plot progress of the two worlds is half as slow as before. The development of a single world has not been actively promoted, so it doesn't matter if there are a lot of them. This one is a bit too watery. It's just that there's nothing toxic about it. It's not that you can't watch it. You can watch the beginning of the plot, and if you don't want to watch the rest of the plot, you can watch it.

Shen Nong's Poison Identification, the writing of this book is smooth, the plot is smooth, and there are no long paragraphs of setting introduction. Although the protagonist is a man dressed as a woman, there are not many male characters around him, and there is even no male character that he likes, so it is well received.

Are you serious about being 1.37 Meters tall?

The subject matter is quite new, the writing style is acceptable, but the article is protracted and cumbersome, and the author has already run away.

The biggest problem is that the pace is too slow and so far I haven't even gone out to Novice Village. And because the fusion of the two worlds and the main plot will look very messy, I personally feel that the plot in the current world is not very pleasing, as if the routine that made people look uncomfortable eight hundred years ago has been used again. It's like being able to talk about it, and the mismatch of information with my sister leads to a series of cheating plots, which I personally find very annoying.

I was confused, and there was too much plot, so I had no desire to continue reading.

Can you please stop playing stream of consciousness? There are some things that you didn't write down, and we really don't know what the situation is. We read it in a daze, and it's not the kind of daze that digs a hole, but the kind of daze that doesn't know what happened at all. As a reader, I don't even know this matter as well as the characters in your novel. I really want to complain about you!

The modern part is generally written. . . It's a bit out of touch with reality, and the sense of immersion is so poor.

There are imminent crises on both sides of the journey, one after another. Can't there be some relief on one side?

Died because updates are too slow, I'm dying

It's pretty cool, why don't you update it? 🙂🙂

It's very well written, why don't you write it again?

Do you have to use my monthly ticket to urge you to update? QAQ

Did the author run away? Going to cut?

It's been more than nine months and I'm still not happy. What is this author doing?