Cultivation of Immortality Begins with the Outer Elders

How should I put it? Since you said earlier that there was factional competition, your master spent a lot of resources to mention the predecessor to foundation building. When your master was about to die, even though he was arranging his funeral, he was also worried that his faction would be suppressed, otherwise he would not let the eldest disciple go all out to build the elixir. Moreover, There are so many true disciples, except for senior brother and senior sister, you are the only one who has something to take, and you were hunting down three evil cultivator brothers for the disciples you don't know. But now you don't stand up and carry the banner and protect the brothers of your master lineage, and you go to retreat to practice. Your character is obviously inconsistent.

It's okay to kill monsters and increase physical fitness, but I can't stand it anymore if I kill people and explode equipment.

It looks good and feels comfortable to look at. Recommended by a ten-year-old bookworm.

Don't write about hiding your cultivation.

I can still read it, but to be honest, the writing is a little worse. In terms of plot, it's not very amazing, it's quite cliche, with level-leap challenges, the protagonist is invincible, and basically all his enemies are killed instantly, but at least he's at the same level as you!

The beginning is very good, but if your disciple is deposed and you feel aggrieved, why do you want to become an immortal?

Has your cultivation level increased too quickly? I'm afraid it won't be over after just one or two hundred chapters.

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It's pretty good. Why didn't it suddenly stop updating?

It's very well written, keep it up and it will become popular

It feels like an old man, and many readers will not like it.

Why is it not updated? Please update.

The explanation is unclear. Now that you have advanced and your lifespan has increased, why do you still look so old? Since there is a panel and you can know the other party's information, why is it so troublesome to catch a secret?