The Gift of Konoha

When I looked at the chapter titles of the novel, I felt as if the author was despairing of human nature.

It is true that the stronger the hair, the less hair.

I have read more than 200 chapters, which is a complete waste of time. People read novels for entertainment and feel comfortable. After reading this book, I completely added to my own troubles. A sand X reborn Uchiha, with plug-ins. After opening the kaleidoscope, he was almost killed by Danzo, but was saved by Madara instead of Obito. Only after being tricked by Danzo did he realize that Danzo could not stay. After being rescued by Madara, anyone he fights is 50-50. Following the plot, the aggrieved Uchiha is 50-50. If I read your book, I might as well read the original work.

Please bring your own oxygen tank and diving suit to read this book

The name Pig's Feet was just because I was rewatching the teacher's anime when I started typing, so I borrowed it casually. At that time, I did not expect that this book would be signed, and even now it has written more than 100 W words. If I have to talk about the popularity, I have nothing to say, because Pujie is a bad namer, and the names are very casual. Therefore, those who see the name Pig's Feet and think it has something to do with the teacher, but find out that there is no connection at all, and then can't accept it, can just fork this book. Don't use the name Pig's Feet to bully me every day. If you have time, you can click on more and better novels. Finally, the novel is all based on interest. As a college student, do I really expect to eat here? Then he shouldn't starve to death? I'm just saying this because I'm annoyed by some people, and it affects my coding mood. I'm sorry.

The biggest mistake was to let the protagonist learn to fly Thunder God. A divine bug skill that was not reflected at all. If the author doesn't want to use it, just don't let him learn it. Just say that he doesn't have the talent for space. It's very uncomfortable to force him to learn it and then not use it after learning it. Minato flew Thunder God with one hand, making the ninja world feel numb. The protagonist's Flying Thunder God feels like a useless skill with a long CD If you put the Flying Thunder God mark on the person you want to kill, you can kill it whenever you want. Putting a mark on where you want to go is not just about going whenever you want. The amount of chakra is not enough, and it doesn't take long to make a mark. The Yondaime gave Obito a mark after a single shot of the Rasengan. It was basically a smooth shot. You, the Flying Thunder God, are as speechless as the death of the second generation. After all, the second generation still has to stay behind, so he can barely talk about it. You are a carefree person. When you fight, you leave a mark on the opponent. You can leave when you want, and fight when you want. Can't you just leave a mark when you're running around in the ninja world? At that time, it will really be "go wherever you want to go", and the show will be numb. Moreover, this mark has the property of being irremovable (the Ten-Tailed Jinchuuriki seems to be able to do so), so you are not afraid of being ambushed, and it is instantaneous. Wasn't Obito fooled by Yondaime Hide In the final analysis, it's still the same sentence, the protagonist should not learn to fly the Thunder God.

See Chapter 100! Danzo is resurrected with Izanagi! First of all, the prerequisite for using Izanagi is a kaleidoscope and Izanami. You can't just transplant some Sharingan! Secondly, Danzo's kaleidoscope in the real-life anime comes from Shisui's eyes. Shisui has not yet developed yet, so the author should think more about it when writing. Have you forgotten this? Danzo is not that buggy yet. At the current time of anime, there is no kaleidoscope in the world, so Obito comes out to take a break.

The timeline is completely messed up. In the original work, Uchiha Shisui was only less than 3 years older than Uchiha Itachi, but here he is 6 years older. That means Itachi was only 2 years old when the Third Ninja War ended. I just want to ask where the three years in between went? Also, how dare you write that the main character is 7 years old and 1.8 Meters tall?

Adults should not be able to stand this style of writing and thinking 😠

No eunuch! No eunuch! No eunuch! Although it is just a flutter with no sense of existence, it is still a fanfic, but the recent events still touched me a little. I will slowly resume updating after the follow-up. This may be the last bit of stubbornness for people like me, right?

I hate this the most. After rebelling against the village, he didn't kill anyone from Konoha. It's disgusting to watch. When fighting Kakashi and Gai, they won't kill them even if they get hit. It's not interesting at all. Do I still expect to be able to help you in the future?

Since the author is a novice and this is his first time writing something, there are many places where the rhythm is not well grasped, so new readers will skip the battle plot because it is really too wordy. There is also the issue of currency. For daily meals, shopping, etc., You can bring in the purchasing power of RMB. When it comes to bounties or compensation, it is Naruto's currency. In short, there will be bugs, but I try to reduce them as much as possible. So, please squirt! Just sauce! Bow! Thank you!

Sure enough, Bennon almost died inside, and he no longer dared to look at his fans except for those great masters.

I'm convinced. It's so cheating in the early stage, but in the mid-term, I'm like a fool. I've been cleansed by the third generation. I'm convinced.

After reading so many trolls about the author, I was wondering, are you just such a stud? I think the author's writing is pretty good. Although there are some common sense errors in the middle, I am a newcomer after all. Do you all have such dark minds? I think the author's approach from different angles is very novel. Come on, author! Take good care of you!

Can anyone tell me, can Saitama kill Madara with one punch?

The biggest failure of this book is that the protagonist doesn't kill Danzo right away. Because the author basically doesn't want to change the original work at all, he just inserts the protagonist into Naruto, and then replays Naruto as a spectator. This kind of fandom is the most boring

The wandering dragon should return to the sea, and the sea will not welcome me.

Why is it Shizune? Isn't Tsunade nice?

He was reborn into a family of psychopaths, and ended up becoming a psychopath himself. There is really no other protagonist like this.

I boasted too much and the writing was not very good. Bad review.

The writing is very good, but the combat method is too un-Uchiha It reminds me that the disaster is still the protagonist of that book

Is the author prepared to kneel down and lick Konoha's bitch for free? There is internal strife before all the tailed beasts are collected?

The protagonist lives in the middle of the village, and Shisui lives at the end of the street. Maybe Uchiha has a fake ancestral land. . .

Is it too outrageous to be an 8-year-old Jonin? Kakashi didn't become a Jonin until he was 12 years old, and Obito didn't become a Kage until he was 13-14 years old. However, his Kage level is a bit weak, and there is nothing else besides Kamui.

It's really not very well written, so I won't subscribe. But some people in the comment area are obviously scumbags, and the plots they complain about are different from what is written in the book. It is really disgusting. This book is on the passing line, and there is no particularly stupid plot. However, I only want to subscribe to books with a score of 80 or above, so I'm sorry. The shortcomings in my opinion are only the title of the second part in the previous part, the dragging of the fighting makes people want to jump, and the fact that they are already on the opposite side of Konoha, but they only dare to kill Danzo Sandai and dare not kill popular characters (especially when they can be killed, they deliberately let them go, but they also have to write that the protagonist is determined to kill them).

The protagonist's position is different from that of most Naruto stories. After being ambushed by Danzo, he was rescued by Uchiha Madara and replaced Obito. I am used to reading novels about joining Konoha's side. The author of this book changed the perspective. The protagonist joins Madara's side and cooperates with Nagato to implement the peace plan in his heart. It's quite interesting. I hope that the protagonist Saitama can be more cold and witty, and can stand out more clearly. Design more of the growth experiences of Akatsuki members, describe the darkness of the ninja world, and the cruelty of ninjas as tools. Reflect the justice of the protagonist. How about simply writing a protagonist in the form of a demon king, who kills decisively, those who obey will prosper and those who resist will perish, and transform the ninja world according to his own ideas.

Author, your battle description is too poor. I suggest you read the battle chapter of Samsara Paradise. You can write battle scenes that allow you to imagine the scene yourself. If you don't know how to write about emotions, don't write about it. It's too forced. There is a kind of novel called abstinent male protagonist, which can also be brilliant.

After reading the introduction, I didn't go in and read it. I just scolded him as garbage and shit.

My tried-and-tested skills of reading questions and chapters failed in this crappy book. Who knows what the titles are about. I almost thought I was reading various prefaces to the Death manga.