After the Migration, I Started Cultivating Immortality

Map of Tianyuan Realm...

It's not that I want to criticize it, it's just the first few dozen chapters, but I can't stand the rest of it no matter how good it is. Let's put it this way, it's a chronicle. It's the same as not watching it. The key points are not highlighted, there are some poisonous points, and it really doesn't create a character image.

The heroine is awesome. He uses the master's money to support his own family. His old man doesn't care. The heroine is so unconscionable that he can do such a thing. The heroine is indeed related to him, but why should he help the heroine support such a large family? What's more, all the family members have spiritual roots. It's really outrageous. It's really boring to cultivate immortals and bring up a family.

I would like to ask, will the heroine still worry about others in everything in the future? I don't really want to leave because I have no books to read, but it's not acceptable if this is the case.

After reading the early introduction, I felt that this novel was very macro and I wanted to read it +10086, but after reading a paragraph, it felt bland. The author said let us think about it, but as readers, we tend to have shallow fantasy when reading books. If we have deep thoughts, we don't need to read novels. Also, the pet names given by the author are very similar. I have forgotten the name of which pet corresponds to it. I have read the latest chapter and I feel that the protagonist is like a tool man. He goes to ancient times and runs to other interfaces, all in order to connect the world. Moreover, I feel that it is so easy for the protagonist to upgrade. Maybe it is very difficult for the protagonist to upgrade personally in the book world, but we don't feel it in the text. I hope that the follow-up will enrich the character image. In each story, the purpose from the beginning to the end should be rich in the main character, the hardships of the process, and the emotional changes. I hope there are more emotional adjectives, instead of just describing how many people died, and how the feeling was low and sad. A simple and simple personal opinion.

Are you sick? Put no cp tag. Did you change the writer after Chapter 652?🤢🤢🤢

My combat power is so low. I can reach the fourth level by practicing Qi. I can even defeat Nascent Soul by building my foundation. Do you want it to be so low?

I feel that this article is one of the rare fairy tales that gradually gets better and better. There are quite a lot of facts in the beginning, but the writing becomes better and better later on. The plot is not sloppy, and the characters gradually become more fleshed out. . . Even the fighting scenes are getting better and better the more they are written.

The author writes very seriously, but your writing is too plain and feels a bit watery. The heroine is childish and a bit contradictory. The overall feeling is that it is immature and not compact. Come on

It is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away. For example, after reading a few chapters, I didn't know who the protagonist was for a long time, and the description was not focused. Later I thought about writing a group portrait, but each character was not fleshed out and was very bland.