After Migrating, I Became an Immortal

It's very beautiful. Although the first part is a little dull, it gets better and better later on. The more you write, the better. It's very beautiful!

Map of Tianyuan Realm...

It's not that I want to criticize it, it's just the first few dozen chapters, but I can't stand the rest of it no matter how good it is. Let's put it this way, it's a chronicle. It's the same as not watching it. The key points are not highlighted, there are some poisonous points, and it really doesn't create a character image.

The heroine is awesome. He uses the master's money to support his own family. His old man doesn't care. The heroine is so unconscionable that he can do such a thing. The heroine is indeed related to him, but why should he help the heroine support such a large family? What's more, all the family members have spiritual roots. It's really outrageous. It's really boring to cultivate immortals and bring up a family.

I would like to ask, will the heroine still worry about others in everything in the future? I don't really want to leave because I have no books to read, but it's not acceptable if this is the case.

After reading the early introduction, I felt that this novel was very macro and I wanted to read it +10086, but after reading a paragraph, it felt bland. The author said let us think about it, but as readers, we tend to have shallow fantasy when reading books. If we have deep thoughts, we don't need to read novels. Also, the pet names given by the author are very similar. I have forgotten the name of which pet corresponds to it. I have read the latest chapter and I feel that the protagonist is like a tool man. He goes to ancient times and runs to other interfaces, all in order to connect the world. Moreover, I feel that it is so easy for the protagonist to upgrade. Maybe it is very difficult for the protagonist to upgrade personally in the book world, but we don't feel it in the text. I hope that the follow-up will enrich the character image. In each story, the purpose from the beginning to the end should be rich in the main character, the hardships of the process, and the emotional changes. I hope there are more emotional adjectives, instead of just describing how many people died, and how the feeling was low and sad. A simple and simple personal opinion.

Are you sick? Put no cp tag. Did you change the writer after Chapter 652?🤢🤢🤢

My combat power is so low. I can reach the fourth level by practicing Qi. I can even defeat Nascent Soul by building my foundation. Do you want it to be so low?

The author writes very seriously, but your writing is too plain and feels a bit watery. The heroine is childish and a bit contradictory. The overall feeling is that it is immature and not compact. Come on

I feel that this article is one of the rare fairy tales that gradually gets better and better. There are quite a lot of facts in the beginning, but the writing becomes better and better later on. The plot is not sloppy, and the characters gradually become more fleshed out. . . Even the fighting scenes are getting better and better the more they are written.

It is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away. For example, after reading a few chapters, I didn't know who the protagonist was for a long time, and the description was not focused. Later I thought about writing a group portrait, but each character was not fleshed out and was very bland.

I learned to read the book a long time ago, but I haven't finished the rest. Now that I have taken the time to read it, I suddenly want to say something but don't know how. This article is basically a running account of the heroine's diary. I forgot the details of the plot at the beginning, and basically there were no transitions or anything like that later on. The world plot was also designed to match the heroine's encounters. It's all about where the heroine went, who or something she met, or what secret realm she entered, and then she did something, and then she practiced in seclusion and repeated it. Logically speaking, this article is about cultivating immortals. If we don't ask you not to talk about feelings, you can't be so casual, right? ? ? The heroine met a random person and saved her, and then they went through some experiences together. The heroine fell into love poison and fell in love with the man who had a lust for her, and then they got married. After that, there was a daughter. If this was still the case, I could still barely understand it, but then it would be even more outrageous to go to another planet and encounter an invasion where the heroine was kidnapped and the whole family was saved by a stand-in puppet. He was eliminated by the soul-searching system, the good things in the space were mined, and then he was given a master-servant contract and sent to the slave-fighting beast planet. How long have you been practicing immortality? It's thousands of years, right? Aren't you feeling aggrieved? What's even more outrageous is that after he caught her and saw that she was going to be used as a furnace by others, he rescued her and then asked her to practice well and use it as a material for his own clone. Just before she was about to be made into a clone of an adult, the man also fell into love poison. In the end, he changed her memory and the two became Taoist couples. In the end, it turned out to be a threesome! The heroine also said that after knowing what the meaning of her life will be, then you can tell me what it is? ! What a good article on cultivating immortals. I was stunned to see that women in feudal society could not help themselves. They were like duckweeds and were content with whatever happened. Alas! ! ! ! !

It's okay before Chapter 500, but what's going on after that? A random man was arranged, and it was over in a dozen chapters. The heroine was kidnapped, and there was forced love. In the end, one woman and two men lived happily.

I can't tell the priorities. I don't know who the protagonist is in the first dozens of chapters. Then there is no logic and it's too natural... It's a novice written by a novice. You can't read it with your brain.

After only reading a few dozen chapters, when I saw that the heroine had contracted a space, my first thought was to tell my family. Although it has not been made public for the time being, judging from the posture, I will not hide it in the future because I trust my family! Are you sure this is an adult who traveled through time? Later, all kinds of strange common sense were discovered, such as fresh fish should be eaten the next day after being spit out, and the time-travelling girl next door was sometimes called Dani, sometimes Damei, and sometimes Yunshan...

I bought the article after seeing it without CP, but later on the heroine was poisoned by love, had a relationship with someone, and became a Taoist couple. It was very disgusting! I smashed all my good feelings about the previous article.

I haven't watched it for a long time, have you stopped updating?

Is this book still being updated? I wanted to finish it, but it seems like it won't be updated.

Is this book discontinued? Why not take it off the shelves?

The female protagonist time travels, the female supporting character time traveling + golden finger, the male supporting character time traveling + system, and now there is a personal rebirth, which is really enough. If you want to write a group portrait, don't specify a protagonist. It looks really bad.