Dali Temple Small Canteen

The writing style is very good, but after reading most of the content, I have two suggestions. First, there is a lack of description and continuity in the advancement of dialogue scenes. I consider myself not a high-speed reader, but after watching many plots, I can't imagine the scenes and facilities in my mind, such as where the public kitchen of Dali Temple is, where the warehouse is, where the staff dormitories are, whether the kitchen can be visited in an island style, and the clues at the crime scene... These are also part of the world view. Secondly, the suspenseful reasoning plot does not stand up to scrutiny. The process of solving the puzzle is like reading a script. When the time is up, an NPC will tell you everything. Many doubtful points in the case actually need to be explained one by one instead of being mentioned in one stroke. For example, why Master Xing insists on cooking hard dishes for Mrs. Lu's family and must cook the braised pork so red. This was not explained by Master Xing later when he exposed himself. He originally thought this was an important breakthrough point, but it turned out not to be the case. Otherwise, it would be a useless pen. Not only the clues, but also the entry and exit of each character must be explained. For example, Hu Siming was not given an explanation. He never had a chance to appear again after getting food poisoning. When Liu Sanqing closed the case, it was over. Rather than knowing who the murderer was, how the murderer committed the crime was the most important. How did Feng Tong become piece by piece? Why did this group of people want to deal with it through the vegetable market? These are all doubtful points and must be explained. Characters like Lin Fei can think in leaps and bounds to justify themselves, but readers cannot. It is important to reason about the details of the plot, and it is necessary to confirm through the outline that nothing is omitted - especially since the plot driving force of this book comes from the case, not the cooking.

A suggestion to the author: The heroine's character is completely downplayed in this book. There are too few descriptions about the heroine's life experience, emotions, etc. When it comes to the heroine, it is about how to cook in detail. Each meal takes up a chapter. It seems that spending money depends on how to cook. It is not worth reading the whole book. Even if it is a food article, it must at least have the protagonist's story progress, otherwise we can just go to the bookstore and buy a "Gourmet Encyclopedia". The food really took the spotlight. Then there is the "sense of separation between food and investigation" raised by another reader, because there is no intersection between the male and female protagonists on the case in the book. Every time the male protagonist just investigates the case, the female protagonist disappears from the perspective. We readers may prefer to see the heroine, as the protagonist, participate in the investigation and provide ideas or suggestions from a modern perspective. Now the only intersection between the male and female protagonists is eating. The main storyline is not exciting enough, lacks small climaxes, and occasionally has a little baggage, which is mainly due to the male protagonist. The heroine simply cooks, cooks, cooks... After all, as female readers, we would rather see the heroine have more important roles instead of cooking from beginning to end. Even the meal itself takes away the heroine's sense of existence. It seems that the food is more like the protagonist than the heroine. The overall story is quite heartwarming, which is why I have followed it until now, but the main plot (I think it is the twists and turns and development from the female protagonist's perspective) has never existed. I am also tired of always watching the whole chapter of cooking without other content, and I may not renew my subscription in the future. It's not that I want to quit. It makes the author unhappy to write this here. I just want to give the author a suggestion, because there may be many readers who abandon the article halfway and feel the same as me 1. Reduce the description of cooking and the meal itself, make the heroine truly the protagonist, and let her other aspects besides cooking (such as exploring the secret of the family's death) as the main plot. You can put a few villains to provide twists and climaxes. 2. Don't completely separate the investigation from the food. Let the female protagonist participate in the male protagonist's career to some extent, so that the story will look more complete.

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Author, you are writing about Dali Temple, which is a prison. There are some prisoners inside, and they eat well and drink hot food every day. Is it really okay? Earlier, there were people from Dali Temple who said they should eat better to avoid being accused of abusing prisoners when they were transferred to a higher-level prison? ? ? What qualifications do prisoners have to eat well, and what courage do they have to complain to higher-level prisons because of poor food? They really think that they come to prison to eat delicious food and enjoy happiness. Your setting of officials and prisoners eating together can be changed. How can prisoners eat the same meals as officials? Since it is a small canteen, it is only for officials and government officials. How do prisoners have the right to eat well and drink hot food? They are given a different menu every day. It's impossible in modern times, let alone ancient times.

The articles were getting longer and longer, and they were full of profound meanings. It was confusing to read. Originally, the novel was simple and direct, but it was made as if it were political. There was always an insinuation about something that had to be reported to the court. I was really convinced. One case had eight hundred meanings. The article said that there were fewer and fewer delicacies. It was not as good as before, and I was tired of reading it.

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Everyone is talking about making jokes, I just want to say that the popular routines at the moment are just a few, space, rebirth and time travel, etc., They are all the same routine. It is normal to make jokes, but when we meet on a narrow road, the brave one wins! ! ! It doesn't matter if it's a joke, it's just better than the writing style! Why do some writers' novels have very good themes, but they just can't get the flavor out of them? Isn't it a matter of writing style? ? As long as it looks good, everything is easy to say! ! Come on, Pikachu! !

I'm not looking for trouble, nor am I a hater. I'm just an ordinary passerby who once liked this author's work. I really want to ask: Has the author been robbed? What are these written about? 😅🤔😓😵

The comic books are getting better and better, and I am more than 30 years old. Recently, the book shortage is so bad that I am almost growing hairy. I browse through the library to pick out a few books to read, but I can't stand it after reading the beginning. Maybe it is because I am getting older. The current authors are too young, and there is already a generation gap...

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Chapter 480 was quite interesting before, but I was very confused after reading chapters 490-520. Why did there suddenly be no plot at all, it was just blockbuster dialogues, and the sentences were getting longer and longer, as if it was a different author... I haven't had time to read it after chapter 520, and I hope it will return to the original excitement.

The writing style has changed a lot since then. Although I don't know what happened to the author in the third dimension, it's really a pity that the writing was so good before. It's such a pity that I feel uncomfortable in my heart.

Only a little cook with superb cooking skills can have a happy life of delicious food.

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The content is a bit like the Imperial Canteen...

All the posts I complained about before have been deleted. Haha, what does it look like at the end? Don't you have any points? Don't you know why so many readers complain? I have time to delete the post, but don't know how to improve it? It's still a dead pig that's not afraid of being scalded by boiling water. Just think of how you can pick it up a little bit.

I can't stand it anymore. The same thing is said over and over again. Everyone talks in a long way. The same point of view is discussed over and over again. It makes me impatient. What's wrong with you, author?

I also read a book called Imperial Canteen...

The author was simply stunned and speechless! You can obviously explain it clearly in one sentence, but you have to take it apart and repeat it over and over again. It's hard to open your mouth. It's been repeated tens of thousands of times, just like a child who is still learning Chinese and has to teach the Analects to college students. Isn't this the unspeakable situation faced by our readers? At the beginning, more than 900 chapters were fully ordered, and it has been like this since chapter 480. Does anyone know how to refund?

It's chapter 19, but there seems to be no plot? There were only one article after another of delicacies, which made my mouth water in the lonely midnight 😍. Moreover, it is suitable for both north and south, both salty and sweet. I don't know if the author is an expert on paper or if he really knows everything. Even if he just memorizes a recipe, he is amazing👍. It may not be a work that everyone likes, but it is very attractive to foodies.

It feels very petty and pretentious. Things that can be expressed in two sentences must be expressed in a roundabout way. The heroine and the hero are all portrayed as having nothing to do and appear to be very profound. The one who kept turning over and over just couldn't speak human language. It feels like it's pretending to be very thoughtful, and the plot is extremely procrastinating. I probably can't write it to make up the word count. Can't stand it. Abandon abandon abandon

After listening to more than 700 chapters, the early stage was okay. If I put a little water in the early stage, I can say that the writing style is like this. However, the later stage is seriously watered. It makes sense again and again. Inexplicably, every character who appears needs to be deeply described in words and deeds. The plot is like a foot wrap. You don't know where it is going. The main plot can't be advanced for a long time, and the food can't be advanced for a long time. It's rotten.

People who read it are so old that they can no longer stand it after reading more than 500 chapters. Not to mention the plot of the male and female protagonists are separated as if from two books. The inexplicable use of long and long dialogues between the characters to "reason", "analyze human nature" and "debate" is really exhausting for people to watch. There is no emotional development between the male and female protagonists, the case becomes more and more mysterious, and the solution is solved through words. After reading one chapter, I felt lonely, and there was only a long and smelly dialogue like a foot wrap.

I persisted until I reached chapter 527. Originally, the food + case lines were both unique and interesting. After chapter 400, it became more and more lengthy and cumbersome. The progress of the dialogue and story had to be dragged out for a long time. It made me dizzy and couldn't read it. If it was to extend the progress, it would be really disappointing 😭

He is so eloquent that he talks nonsense and talks about the same thing over and over again. I can't stand it anymore, it's a waste of time

I've caught up with the latest, and I think it's okay. I just don't know who this real Judge is. Did the craftsman who made the candy man get the book accidentally, or was it given to him by someone?

Monthly tickets are offered, please improve.

I saw a lot of complaints. I want to say that there is no need to read more than 500 chapters. The author has already shown the abnormality from the beginning. Cultural workers must be literate. Can lifelike describe people? If you don't know, check it out first. I haven't even graduated from elementary school.

There are over a thousand chapters 🙂 I stopped reading this book after the male and female protagonists confessed their love.

Is there any kind-hearted person who can tell me what's going on with the heroine's father? I'm exhausted from chasing the article.