Swallowed Star: Gale Sword Master

The fairy author actually invited the poisonous god from ancient times and the parents of the heroine with a villainous face. I have really seen each other for a long time. How long has it been? The Internet has developed to the present, and you have successfully reminded me of ancient memories. The mother-in-law shows off all kinds of tricks. Do you want to be with my daughter? If that doesn't work, my daughter will have to find Mr. Xx, who is powerful. In the end, the protagonist worked hard to marry the heroine, and the mother-in-law enjoyed the success and the supreme treatment. It was really intoxicating. . .

Unbelievably, the protagonist cheated on her after one year of marriage; Afterwards, she got pregnant with the protagonist's child; What's even more unbelievable is that the protagonist didn't know that he had a child. I skipped and read it, and after hundreds of thousands of words, the protagonist even became a domain lord and still didn't know that he had a child; The most outrageous thing is that the author probably forgot about it. As mentioned before, there was no plot or ending at the end of the writing, and the character just disappeared.

Can you please stop writing emotional dramas? I think Swallowing Starry Sky fandoms are here to watch this. The stories about sisters and girlfriends written are really blunt. Please @ me when the big brother in the back sees that he writes normally. Thank you.

For fan fiction or other novels, I only have one suggestion right now. If you can't write about sisters, family plots, or emotional scenes, just don't write them.

The routine of ancient novels uses the star-swallowing skin, and even if you are scolded, you will not come out to refute it. The old guy comes back to the world and makes every village a bitch.

The difference between you and Luo Feng's wife, Xu Xin, is hundreds of times and billions of times. This is the gap between you and the platinum-level god. He is a bullshit. You should watch your plot and compare it with others. There is a world of difference between them. One is in the sky and the other is in the abyss.

I didn't watch it as soon as I came out of the Sword Realm. The realm that swallows the world is the realm of laws. What did you write?

Nervous? Devouring this world of cultivation and testing has been written by you like a bloody city. Who in the world of cultivation likes to see this from you? Wouldn't it be nice if you just started reading urban literature?

This introduction successfully aroused my desire to read the comment section and see someone scolding the author. As expected, it turned out to be a lot of poison, more poisonous than I thought.

Chapter 68: Kuro Rikutsuna inexplicably guessed out of thin air that he found the treasure and did not restrain his desires, so he deserved to die. Why are you so disgusting? You just bring in private goods.