At the Beginning of Dou Po, I Received My Suicide Note

I feel that the writing of this book is okay, at least there are no poisonous points in logic, it has its own framework, and it does not lick Xiaoyan nor deliberately target it (the protagonist I saw before was inexplicably hostile to Xiaoyan, which poisoned me to death). Overall, it is a good Dou Po fan!

There are not many new things. Basically, the skill configuration of Xiao Yan is copied. Three Thousand Thunder, Fen Jue, Alchemist, and even Flame Splitting Wave Ruler are just changed to swords. There are no new tricks in Puppet Dao. They are basically in Shenyin. What is worth reading in this book is the interpersonal relationship. Even the strange fire is the same. This is how I felt when I saw the Black Angle Domain Auction. It won't affect if I jump ten pictures.

In just over twenty chapters, there are only Dou Huang puppets plus dozens or twenty Dou Wang Dou Ling puppets. There are a lot of earth-level martial arts and fighting skills. Xiao Yan's 200 maps are not as good as yours. What's the point of having this map full of numbers as soon as it comes up? The setting is too exaggerated. Xiao Yan, who has an old grandfather, didn't say that he had so many earth-level fighting skills that he would give them away! It is said that the crime of possessing a jade is to show it off everywhere, obviously weak chicken, fighting skills, puppetry skills, especially puppetry, which can change the strength of a country. How can the empire not be jealous, and other forces not jealous? If the show were to be like this, the main character wouldn't survive three episodes. It is better to set up one or two Douwang Douwang puppets, but they are in disrepair and must be invested in magic cores or repaired before they can fight (reserved for critical moments, just like Xiao Yan's medicine dust possession), and put a limit on the hang-up. Also, don't overdo it with fighting skills. Yao Chen, as an alchemist, has so many resources, why didn't he give Xiao Yan a lot of fighting skills? Because things are rare and valuable, writing this way will make the protagonist's struggle more interesting. (I couldn't help complaining about the final matching of fighting skills attributes)

A grass-roots genius has the talent of alchemist and has mastered the strange fire. He does not pay attention to the alchemist and is a bit devalued. This is a big flaw. If it is not corrected later, it will feel like it will collapse. If you don't refine alchemy, where will you get the cultivation resources?

I saw some book friends saying that the author's plot has been watery recently, let me tell you my opinion. I started to get into novels in 12 years old. I accidentally opened a novel on my mother's mobile phone reader and I was addicted to it. I still remember the first novel I got into - Peerless Martial God At that time, because I was still in junior high school, mobile phones and computers were strictly prohibited at home. Every night, I would wait for my mother to fall asleep and secretly take my phone and hide under the quilt to read it for several hours. At that time, I especially liked reading fantasy novels, especially Tudou's. Dou Po was the second book I read. Later I read more and more, and became more and more picky about the quality of the books. Basically, I couldn't find one for a long time, so I had to read the books I had read before, and then I found that the plots that I thought were very passionate and exciting now seem a little middle-of-the-road, but like Tudou, Wangyu and others, the novels written by them are no longer After reading it back, I can still read it The author's Dou Po fan fiction is logically reasonable among the few I have read, the characters have normal IQs, and the plot description is very touching to me. I really like it. I feel that the author has too little sense of water. I finished reading it in three days, and I still feel that it is not enough. The first time I wrote such a long book review, it took me more than ten minutes to write it. I think the author is very impressive for being able to write such a long book. I hope the author will continue writing in this style, and I will continue to follow it.

A lot of Dou Po novels require Xiao Xun'er, and after doing so, the protagonist can be a good brother. Do you think it's strange? If it were you, you would have a girlfriend that you have had since childhood, and she would never leave you and be devoted to you even in the most difficult times. If you suddenly and out of nowhere become close to a friend of yours, and after you get better, and become good friends with you, that is not a disease. So in my personal opinion, Xiao Xun'er's words are not impossible, but you have to move the timeline forward, and the protagonist's time period and plot cannot be developed unless you force it. In that case, I can only wish the author to write better and better Is it worse to be friends with Xiao Yan? It is better than being friends with Tang San. The person's character and later development are all there. I've read many comments saying that being friends with the protagonist means being a dog-licker, but there's a difference between being a dog-licker and being a friend. My personal opinion is that being a dog-licker is mindless, while friends are about helping each other and working together for a win-win situation.

First of all, I haven't read this book yet, I just came in here to post In my opinion, when writing a fanfic, you must first clarify one point of view, which is the protagonist. I mean the original protagonist is a dynamite bag, and the relationship is better. Some people say licking, some almost say abuse, no matter what, some people criticize, so first make it clear whether you are with the protagonist, or you are on your own. The second point is Yao Lao. I have seen many fights. Fans, one thing that most fandoms have in common is that they worship Yao Lao as their teacher, but the original protagonist worships Yao Lao as his teacher because Yao Lao made a mistake in the first place and ate people's vindictiveness for three years, so he agreed to become his teacher. What should the protagonist do? So Yao Lao is actually inappropriate to become his teacher. Then there is the heroine, first of all Gu Xun'er. The reason why he and the original protagonist are able to be together is because the original protagonist went to give people to people every day and midnight when he was three or two years old. Warm and nourish the meridians. Only if you continue to have feelings like this, and I think the original work is also about a chaste and fierce woman who cannot find you halfway, forget this. Then there is Ya Fei. The original work of this girl is very scheming. If you are starting a harem, I do not recommend adding her, it may make your harem uneasy. Then there is Yun Yun and Medusa. These two people share a problem. If they grow up with the power Yun Yun is fine, but whether Medusa favors the snake people or you will deviate from the character. Yun Yun also has a problem. Nalan Yanran, if you want to accept Lan Yanran, how to deal with the conflict between them is your key. Otherwise, it is very likely to be a poisonous point. The remaining heroine is not a big problem. There is also the last question, what does the protagonist practice?

I haven't seen the paid chapters yet, but I have read more than 40 chapters. The plot is reasonable and the supporting characters are not outwitted. It can be regarded as the fairy grass in Dou Po fan fiction. It's just that the author has some problems with the order of sentences. Please check carefully when sending it out. It's all ordered. I hope the author will continue to write like this.

The comic version of Yun Yun is really pretty

Alas, the writing is actually quite good, and it's pretty good among Dou Po fandoms, but as soon as I saw the Little Medical Fairy appear, I felt like giving up. The main character is always flirting with other people. I'm not saying that I'm not allowed to find girls, I just feel like I let myself go as soon as I see a beautiful woman, and my loser mentality is revealed. Just like Qin Shi and others, no matter how the protagonist starts the game, he will become a bitch when he encounters Yan Lingji or Jing Salamander.

After reading this book, I suggest you read Dou Po again. This book just changed the protagonist and copied the rest.

Xiao Yan is a real genius. Tudou said that Xiao Yan's talent is not top-notch, which refers to hardware talent (physical constitution + soul power talent), but Xiao Yan's software talent (mainly refers to brain and comprehension talent (learning ability and creativity), refining talent, and mentality adjustment talent (what Tudou himself said in the chapter of Fighting the Ancient Demon) , although I don't understand why this is called talent)) Invincible, software talent is reflected as follows: In terms of learning ability, Xiao Yan quickly learned and practiced the fighting skills that others had to learn for several years. The most typical example is that it took him so many years to practice the Three Thousand Thunder Phantom Body before he became famous. Let's look at Xiao Yan again; in terms of creativity, Xiao Yan has nothing that other fighters have created of their own. Yan Dou Master created his own fire lotus and went his own way; his talent in refining medicine is top-notch in the world. He refined medicine at the age of 16 and reached the peak of the fourth level at the age of 17. Eight years after Yao Lao left, he studied by himself and mastered what Yao Lao had learned all his life and rose to the eighth level. The key point is that Xiao Yan's refining medicine is just a side job. He spends most of his time fighting and running around. , Refining medicine and just sharpening a gun in battle can improve it so quickly. This brain is simply amazing; of course, there is no medicine old Xiao Yan who would stop fighting kings and kings. This is normal, because although Xiao Yan has a good brain, strong understanding and talent, and is at the top of the Tudou universe, he is not strong enough to understand the truth of everything he sees like the ruthless emperor in "Shading the Sky". Create your own skills to achieve the point of breaking the monopoly of resources from scratch, from 0 to 1. Xiao Yan is still limited by resources, and his character is not good in the early stage. If he does not meet Yao Lao, he will only waste his peerless talent, and his understanding talent will not be explored. He is like a Tsinghua University Peking University seedling, you let him be born in a remote mountain valley If he does not have access to good educational resources or even textbooks, he may only be able to get an ordinary undergraduate degree. For example, if he is born in a poor peasant family in an era when book resources and knowledge were monopolized by aristocratic families (such as the Han Dynasty), he will be a commoner all his life. In the age of society, if he has the opportunity to come into contact with book knowledge, he will soar into the sky. Yao Lao is Xiao Yan's guide. Only after discovering Xiao Yan's diamond, Xiao Yan has the opportunity to convert his talent into strength; in the sports world, talent determines your upper limit. Without talent, it is useless to practice until you vomit, even if you practice until you vomit blood. Effort is the process of turning talent into strength. Bolt is an example. Top talent + top effort. Everyone basically ignores Xiao Yan's software talent. Now think about Xiao Yan's comprehensive talent. It is really abnormal. If Xiao Yan's success as emperor is not due to luck, then is it too much to say that the century-old dominance is still attributed to luck? A bunch of big guys in the world have been stuck in the late stage of the Holy Grade for who knows how many years. The so-called divine bloodline is nothing compared to them. In this way, comparing the divine bloodline with Xiao Yan's talent is an insult to Xiao Yan; in addition, don't many people like to say that Xiao Yan relies on medicine and resources? First, are these resources really much more than those of the Imperial Clan? Second, think about it, did Xiao Yan get those resources as a rice bug like the genius of the Imperial Clan, or did he earn them himself? Xiao Yan is an alchemist, the top productivity in Dou Qi Continent, and has the ability to create value. Xiao Yan refines many elixirs by himself, and many resources are obtained by relying on his alchemy skills to create value for others. In the Tianshan Blood Pool, he used alchemy skills to cure diseases with gold and stone in exchange for the best resources, and he used them to create value for his ancestors. The full version of the Three Mysterious Transformations of Heavenly Fire was obtained by refining medicine for Burning Flame Valley. His medicine refining skills allow him to create value for others, trade to obtain resources, improve himself and his relatives and friends, and use them to build forces. In this way, he can also be criticized by others for relying on resources. How can you make those rice bugs of the ancient race feel embarrassed? I know that many people like to belittle Xiao Yan's talent because they want to say that Xiao Yan is just an ordinary person on earth. Don't you know that after three days of separation, he should be treated with admiration? You know the allusion of Wu Xia Amon, some people can only realize their talents in a specific environment and the right field. If the football king Messi was born in China, which factory might he be turning screws in now? Many people want to be Xiao Yan, and try every means to convince themselves that Xiao Yan's talent is generally just good luck and perseverance, so he reaches the top and experiences the feeling of a counterattack, right? I was like this when I was a kid. Now that I have played the game many times and grown up, I realize that I was terribly wrong. I ignored Xiao Yan's software talent, his brain and understanding talent, although they are nothing compared to the ruthless emperor in "Zhetian" (the ruthless emperor was born in a waste body, and his cultivation is better than ordinary people). It is countless times more difficult to pass the test, but with full brains and understanding), but in the Tudou Universe, it is really top-notch. There are three people in Douqi Continent who can compete with Xiao Yan in software talent, Huang Quan, Jinglian and Xiao Xuan, especially Huang Quan, who does not have the Dou Emperor bloodline to reach the Half Emperor (the bloodline begins to mutate), Xiao Xuan gathers them all The half-emperors who have the blood of the whole clan, Emperor Soul and Gu Yuan have the blood of Dou Emperor and the resources of the entire clan have only been at the peak of nine stars for thousands of years. These three people are also talented in software, but they cannot refine medicine and do not have the ability to create value like Xiao Yan. Sometimes creating value is much more useful than fighting. This can be achieved The ability to directly contribute and benefit everyone. Now that I think about Xiao Yan's software talent, we are not allowed to compete with Xiao Yan. It's just like we can't compete with people like Newton, Maxwell, Einstein, and Bohr. In a word: we don't have the brains.

What does this book say? In the early stage, it was always said that the protagonist knew the original work, but later on, all the basic adventures in the cave were taken away by others. The resources you have belong to you, and the resources of others are always given to you by others. What others give, you have to pay back, okay? You just want the protagonist to rely on the royal family, right? I had a good opportunity to become financially independent, but I missed it. I really don't know why the author likes to treat people like dogs so much. Whether it's the royal family's life-saving grace or parenting grace, wait until you are strong enough to repay the favor. It is obviously impossible for the protagonist to wander around the northwest continent all the time. He will go to Zhongzhou sooner or later. However, the protagonist is still weak and has the opportunity to become stronger. You missed the opportunity to become stronger. You also said that other residual pictures are useless and cannot be saved. What do those people say? Why can't you take this residual map? As long as you don't talk nonsense, who knows you have residual pictures, and there is no GPS positioning system on them. Moreover, it is said that the collection of remaining pictures is incomplete, so what can I say? Anyone who has read the original work will know where these 4 residual pictures are, so just take your time to find them. Now it's good, many family members know about it. In the later stage, the silence will definitely become more and more thorough. Will they be given to them at that time? Some people told me to lick the dog, but I didn't tell two people to start a fight and then spray all kinds of things. I accepted it. I can't stand this book anymore. I'll see you guys by chance.

Can you please stop clinging to that puppet? It is of no use from beginning to end. It is better to write Xiao Yan himself as a Dou Zong at the Dou Emperor level and create a Dou Zong level. He also boasts that he is better than a human puppet. However, after hundreds of chapters, let alone the Dou Zun level, he does not even have a Dou Zong. It would be better to just write that the protagonist picks up a seriously injured monster at the peak of Dou Zong, kills the beast puppet, and adds some materials to make his body comparable to that of Dou Zong. In this way, he can at least have the power to protect himself when he gets to Zhongzhou.

The most outrageous thing about the author is that the protagonist easily breaks through the Heaven Realm, and then the Heaven Realm Egg is useless. With the soul cultivation in the middle stage of the Heaven Realm, he is worried that he can't beat the Nine-Star Dou Zun. The Dou Zun in front of the mid-level Dou Sage is nothing, and the low-level Dou Sage can be killed instantly.

For me, the only poisonous point is the puppet master. It is better to refine the weapon. This puppet gives me the feeling that it is different from the Heavenly Demon Puppet. Ignore it or just watch the Heavenly Demon Puppet.

I came across this book again. Recalling it, I quit the Puppet Master Legacy before, but after the royal family adopted the protagonist, my inexplicable relationship with the protagonist made me feel weird from the beginning. The author seems to keep emphasizing in the article that the protagonist is very talented, so the royal family invests in it to form a good relationship, and the protagonist also has the idea of ​​being owed a favor. But isn't the prerequisite for investment that the other party is powerful (it is impossible to switch to another family, such as Xiao Yan and the Miter family in the early stage of the original work) or strong (has the capital to have an equal dialogue, such as Xiao Yan and the Ye family in the original work). For example, the protagonist in the article is an orphan adopted by Jia Xingtian. Whether it is practicing skills or training resources, even the beginning of cultivation is provided by the royal family. Isn't that just a talent cultivated by the royal family? As a time traveler, the protagonist has a big heart and will not be bound by the Garma royal family. I can understand that he will definitely break away from the Garma royal family later on and become independent. But for the Garma royal family, how could it be possible for the Garma royal family to cultivate the protagonist from the beginning and then become independent? Normally speaking, whether it is to wait for the protagonist to become stronger (around the young Dou Wang) to recruit a consort or to serve as a member of the royal family, it should be impossible for the protagonist to leave the Douzong and become independent. But the article gave me the feeling that the royal family's attitude was towards an outsider with equal status rather than one of their own.

I don't know why the author set up a puppet sect. He also said he was better than an alchemist, how could that be possible? To be honest, it is a profession that has been relegated to the garbage bin from history and is not even mentioned in the original novel. Being eliminated can only mean that you are rubbish. Dou Po just has no source energy. Why do you still need source energy to make a puppet? Will it be eliminated if the source energy is gone? 😰😰

The author said that the female characters are almost enough. After all, there are already many. When the time comes, I will elaborate on it and write more daily life. After looking at it, it seems that there is still a royal sister missing. My personal favorite character is Medusa Yunyun Yafei, who has a curvy front and back. 🤭

Yaoye

After searching for so long, this is the latest one, and there are one or two other books that Dou Po fans can read. The other ones are either torturing Xiao Yan, and the male protagonist is as double-standard as a certain god king, or the protagonist is too smelly, a mindless bulldozer, and the female protagonist has a broken design.

I feel that this image is quite suitable for the protagonist

It feels like the protagonist is a bit of a pick-me-up, with three strange fires, a soul close to the peak of the spiritual realm, Dou Zong strength, and unable to refine an eighth-grade elixir. Isn't it just where this talent comes from that gives him the confidence to compete with Xiao Yan for a chance, forgetting that the Soul Emperor will destroy the world later, right?

The plot is rigorous and has very few flaws. It can be said to be my favorite Dou Po fanfic from Qidian. I hope the author can work hard and perform normally in the future.

Although the author updates quickly, I still feel it is not enough. I will give you the monthly pass of gkd😊.

The writing was good, nothing harmful, and I gave it a small ticket.

The ordinary first one!

Objective comments: From a comprehensive perspective of writing, character setting, plot design, and respect for the original work, the Dou Po fan fiction I have read ranks among the top three, and it is a high-quality work. The biggest charm of Dou Po fan fiction is to use information gaps to play with the soul clan, manipulate the relationship between ancient races, and the author has done a good job in this regard. Thank you to the author. Disadvantages: There are two biggest flaws. One is that Yao Lao, as an old fox, was tricked into handing over Fen Jue, which slightly weakened Yao Lao's strength. I personally don't like this part. Fen Jue is the top secret among top secrets and is the lifeblood of his precious apprentice Xiao Yan. There is absolutely no possibility of sharing it. The other is that Chen Guan in the medicine world is too hasty to break through the Emperor Soul. Even if a ray of residual soul can provide you with the impact of the Emperor Soul, the energy it can provide you is very limited, not to mention that you have to be distracted to resist the Void Swallowing Flame, which can give Chen Guan the help of soul energy. The help is very small and the transformation takes time. (Refer to the original book How long it took Xiao Yan to advance to the Imperial Soul in the Tomb of Heaven) How could it be possible to succeed in an instant and initially enter the Imperial Soul? Why should it be on an equal footing with the Ancient Yuanhun Emperor who has been cultivating the Imperial Soul for thousands of years? In the final analysis, the second half is a bit too hasty. The Battle of Saints and the Ancient Race is the last big burning point of the fight. It is completely possible to arrange a few more battles between the parties. The battle of the Soul Clan to seize the jade, the frontal and counter-attack battle to seize the jade, the ambush battle, and the battle of the Ancient Emperor's Cave can all be arranged. Let this group of high-level Saints fight a few more games. It can also extend the length and also allow the Battle of Saints. It is more substantial and plump, and it also allows the harem group to be more powerful in the end and participate in more (although the last few battles in the original book, Xun'er, Medusa, Qinglin, and the little medical fairy are all soy sauce, but the fans can definitely improve it) I can only say that the final battle is really not enough. I hope the author can consider it in the new book and write more about the imperial clan battles in the Saint Fighting stage.

The pressure on the protagonist's combat power was too harsh. He used heavenly materials and earthly treasures when he broke through the Douzong and had the Poison Pill. The Little Medical Immortal condensed the poison elixir to get the seven-star Douzong and then refined the Nether Poison Fire and went into retreat for almost a year to get the one-star Douzun. Moreover, the author sometimes updates the content so far apart that the context is inconsistent. Now I can hardly read it anymore.

Yes, today is exactly the 100th place.