Starting from the Wild Fox to Seek the Truth

In the current market, novels with this theme are rare. I hope the author can calm down and write slowly. It is a very interesting book and I like it very much.

It can only be said that the protagonist is too stupid and young. If he really meets a serious villain, he will probably be eaten without even his bones.

The writing is okay, but it ruins the fairy spirit of the classical fairy tale a little bit. The names of the protagonist's skills are too rubbish, such as copywriting, sunburst, fire-eating, prayer, sprouting head, and Western magic. These names are suitable for writing Western magic. The names of the classic fairy tale are directly downgraded. , I don't know how to get the names of the exercises, so I copied them from other Xianxia books. Also, Dou Zhan often recites the lines for a long time before using the moves. Dou Zhan pays attention to the uniformity of each shot. In a life-and-death fight, you need to recite the lines for a long time before the move can be executed. Author, do you think this move is suitable for the situation? Is it suitable for a life-and-death fight?

Cultivation of immortals and Taoism, fox ghosts and human affairs. Reading it makes people think of Pu Songling's Strange Stories from a Chinese Studio, except that Pu Songling tells the story from the perspective of a human, while the author tells the story from the perspective of a demon. It's very liao zhai, and it is becoming more and more fascinating. I hope the author will work hard and persevere.

To be honest, the book is written very lightly but also very humane. There are not many books about foxes practicing Taoism. And the book written by you, the author, is enjoyable to read. The only shortcoming is that it is too spicy. Please also write more while maintaining the standard. Haha.

The book is good-looking and makes people and immortals. Everyone should be free and happy instead of just killing people and fighting for treasures. In your book, I saw a different kind of fox fairy, no longer fighting monsters and upgrading.

A nouveau riche native treated everyone as if she were her friend.

It's really great. I'm tired of reading those harem stories about immortal stallions or dual-cultivation stories. This one is great, very good.

Arrange a heroine, the author, a Taoist couple to practice together, 😋I want a husband-protecting treasure

The beginning is really good, but the smell of cultivating immortality disappears later on. Of course it's quite nice.

The writing is very good. The starting point recommends some ugly books, but does not recommend the really good books.

I feel like the plot progresses a little too quickly and lacks logic.

Without explaining anything, where did the God Transformation Clay come from?

Isn't this cheating? The so-called practice of bonding seems to be meaningless.

It was a good start, but the writing was a mess... It was not systematic, and it was impossible to see how the strength was divided... Moreover, the protagonist did things without thinking about the beginning or the end. Earlier, he found that the city god was possessed or colluded with the evil way, but in the end, he just put the sword there and made a formation to block it and ignored it... And he didn't care about others. He didn't take precautions when communicating with others, and he didn't report it to anyone... So he went to practice in the cave for no apparent reason. As a result, there was a problem with the formation, and even the colleagues on the mountaintop didn't know what happened... They even asked the protagonist for help. When I saw these two chapters, I wondered if I had missed something or if the chapter was suddenly deleted... Or something. I didn't even explain, I just hurried over to make a formation and went back to practice in a hurry... The whole city was full of ghosts walking at night, and the city god became a demon. The whole formation was done without looking for anyone to watch... Maybe someone was watching, but who knows if you don't write it... Just jump to someone else to find the protagonist, and then the villain said something inexplicably. We will see each other again and leave... The point is that what the protagonist made with the formation was his own flying sword... And he just threw it there without looking for anyone to look at him or looking at him... In the end, it was taken away by the villain, yes, by the way... People may not like it, because when they took away the ghost gate, the sword was taken away with it. I gave up completely after seeing this... The things written here are all over the place.

You can also write more about daily life. If the plot is too compact, it will cause aesthetic fatigue. You have to combine work and rest to defeat monsters and upgrade. The world view currently displayed is still a bit small. The author can consider it.

It's okay to read the comment section. I'll give it a quick look and hope it's a fairy grass (the last time I read this type was the Deer Demon

Come on, it's a very interesting book

It was okay at first, but then it was all about Shushan. Either write a fanfic honestly, or write your own story. Isn't this plagiarism?

Did the author forget? That parasite is also a seventy-two spirit!

Not bad, not bad, there is a strange wind, and it is a strange wind from an inhuman perspective.

This emperor... Is hopelessly stupid

Has that stone boy plot always been there?

I have finished reading this book. It is very good. I have been following it. I didn't want to read a little bit every day and saved it until the ending. I finished reading it today and found that it is still as exciting as the beginning. In other words, it would have been better if the dozens of chapters at the end were not so vague.

I have been watching it on and off these past few days~

Can you write the next book so that the main character is an immortal from the beginning?

It would be a waste not to write a serious fairy tale

Come on, author! Very well written

The more I watch it, the more it looks like the plot of Shushan.

What a masterpiece! When will the author publish a new book? ? ? ? ?