Spiritual Qi Revival: I Fabricated Historical Myths

To be honest, gradually marginalizing the protagonist and making it a behind-the-scenes story might be better. The protagonist personally getting involved and showing off has made the story less appealing. By now, Nero, King Arthur, Lu Bu, and Zhuge Liang's personalities have almost been eroded; they've become nothing more than summoned creatures. In the previous chapter, Nero was shown wielding a sword against a god; in the next chapter, he's at the protagonist's beck and call.

The protagonist shouldn't be like a clueless fool; that's no longer fashionable. It's better to stay behind the scenes, manipulating and leading the times.

The viewing experience has deteriorated significantly since the protagonist intervened and started showing off. As the mastermind, the protagonist inevitably occupies a large portion of the screen time, and his intervention in many self-arranged events only makes the viewer feel that the protagonist lacks control, giving the impression that he's truly orchestrating everything.

There's only one drawback: the main character leaves the story. The appeal of this kind of story lies in the main character's setup, then creating several characters around them, rather than the main character revolving around the story.

That's enough, I just couldn't take it anymore. Ever since the author expanded the world-building, the plot has completely veered towards fantasy and martial arts. I subscribed to this book based on the core premise of replacing Earth's ancient history with Chinese history, but the so-called replacement and coverage is just a sham, a fake summoning scheme.

The pacing of this book is like a car speeding at 360 mph on a highway. Suddenly, the protagonist joins a department, becomes a leader, and is sent abroad on missions. Everything happens abruptly, without any plot twists. One minute he's struggling to make ends meet with his sister, and the next he's incredibly passionate about the government and the country. If I were struggling to survive, I couldn't understand such fervent love for the government.

I think it will end badly around 300,000 words. What do you guys think?

It completely fell apart later on. The premise was quite good, covering the Three Kingdoms, the Han Dynasty, and other parts of Chinese history as the main storyline. But now they're ignoring the main storyline, and the protagonist, still at the Innate Realm, is already dealing with Void Demons. It's getting more and more chaotic, and I really can't stand reading it anymore.

I think there's absolutely no need to write about those everyday events. It's enough to leave them behind the scenes. The fact that we have to bring out the main characters to show off makes me a bit confused. Moreover, the situation is getting bigger and bigger, and it's hard to control. This is only the early stage. In the later stages, even a single breath can obliterate the Great Dao.

Let's all guess how long it will take to finish this novel. Normally, a novel like this would only last a maximum of 100,000 words. I'd say even 100,000 words wouldn't get published.