I'm Being Watched by the Players

I strongly suggest the author use fewer ellipses and commas. Too many of them cause frequent pauses within a sentence, which is incredibly awkward. The plot is good, but I'm being poisoned by the ellipses and unnecessary commas.

Since players can be resurrected after being killed, I can simply control them so they can't move and I can't kill them, right?

This looks pretty good, why is nobody here?

It's all thanks to the internet, ugh! Keep updating!

This book shouldn't be without a female lead, right? I haven't watched it yet, but I don't really like shows without a female lead.