I'm Being Watched by the Players

It is strongly recommended that authors use less ellipses and commas. Too many of them will cause a sentence to pause many times, which is extremely uncomfortable. The plot is good, but I was almost poisoned by the ellipses and extra commas.

Since the player can be resurrected after killing him, I will control him so that he cannot move or kill him, that's all.

Isn't this pretty? Why is there no one there?

It's all on the Internet. Damn it. Come on, update.

This book probably doesn't have a heroine, right? I haven't read it yet, but I don't really like it.