Cultivation of Immortality Begins with the Appearance of Ancestors

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Goodbye, give up. I had to endure the forced concessions in the past, but I really couldn't bear it when I founded the Xia Dynasty. The founder of the Xia Dynasty inherited the title of another country. Are you a descendant of the Xia Dynasty? You are just a descendant of the Taoist tradition, but you don't know how many generations have passed, and how many layers have separated you. If you are still an Immortal Xia, you are the Later Xia. The Xia Dynasty that surpasses the original is also the Later Xia. I have never heard that the unified country will be founded with the name of the old Dynasty. It's okay to have to inherit the cause and effect of the Xia Dynasty. Wherever the intention is, the protagonist pattern will be like that, return the Holy King and the Human Emperor.

If you can follow the path of Zhu Yuanzhang, forget it if you don't. It's okay to follow the path of Li Yuan of the Tang Dynasty. Why should you seek to usurp the throne and win the country unfairly, and then return to being a sage? Besides, it has been four hundred years since the Great Qian Dynasty, and the introduction also said that it was the last year of the dynasty, and the land annexation was complete. , The resources have been allocated, and a new dynasty will be started step by step without a catastrophe, and the new dynasty will directly usurp the throne. How many resources and land will there be in the new dynasty? As for increasing crop yields and treating the symptoms but not the root cause, there is a saying that the Zhumen's wine and meat smelly road will freeze the bones to death, no matter how high the yield is Quantity, the land belongs to the landlords, the harvest is high, the granaries are rotten, and they are not given to the farmers. Take a shortcut first to find out that the world is governing, super difficult, the emperor does not say that it is difficult to rule the world, and it is even more difficult to rule the world. Liu Xiu's son of luck also failed in his order to conquer the land. Well, there were many reasons why Emperor Yang of the Sui Dynasty built the Grand Canal and conquered Korea several times. One of the reasons was that Yang Jian usurped the throne and the world's resources and land were not redistributed. There were many powerful families. Yang Guang wanted to conquer them, but he was turned into a weak king who subjugated the country.

I saw in Chapter 8 that a small magistrate dared to deal with the local tyrants, and there was a magistrate and a county captain in his family. The description in the book was not that the world was in chaos, but that it was the end of the dynasty. Whether he was not afraid of death or he didn't know how to write the word "death", he dared to deal with the powerful tyrants in the county, and he died suddenly in minutes.

Let me save you a trick: the protagonist's plug-in can use his own incense to make a pool in the fairy world explode with good things, but the protagonist cannot get it in the mortal world. Then a fairy takes the good things and gives feedback to the protagonist with some fairy garbage to encourage him.

A county magistrate is in conflict with the family of a state magistrate? No brainer, right? What are you writing

Many times, I always feel that the protagonist's character is based on Tang San's description, and he wants to mess with others, and he says I didn't mean to mess with you. Moreover, he could just wait quietly for the Qian Dynasty to cause trouble and perish on his own, but he still had to engage in some sneaky things, and there was no grandeur in doing things. He still wanted to imitate the sages and saints.

I felt depressed after reading Chapter 8 and took a look at the comment section. Sure enough, there are still a lot of normal people, but I saw some readers who were so busy helping the author with his thoughts. Yuan, I feel ridiculous every time I see them.

Interpersonal relationships are really annoying, so hurry up and practice immortality. The interactions between the seven aunts and eight aunts and other relatives seemed very tiring.

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A rural landowner always thinks about rebellion, and a county magistrate dares to offend the magistrate's family. . . . . I also don't understand class in this world. . . . . .

The character development of the protagonist is a complete failure. He talks about following the holy way, but in fact he is not as good as Sima Yi. He is a hypocrite and a villain. He wants to do big things but cherishes his own life. He does small tricks secretly.

The writing is really pretentious and upright. If you don't have that level, you shouldn't write this kind of routine. It looks really awkward.

On the one hand, he is upright and upright, but on the other hand, he is acting like a sneaky villain. He also wants to conquer the world, and he also wants to be the number one scholar. On the one hand, the exercises shape the Dao system, and on the other hand, there is the Qiqiao exquisite mind. You can use whatever you want if no scholar in the world can cultivate it. A protagonist with a bit of character.

The rags of the mortal world turn into various precious treasures in the heavenly world. Which world has the highest status? There is no inflation in the world all day long

The writing is okay, but the main character has evil intentions and feels very awkward.

I can't stand it anymore after reading about 300 chapters. People say that if you want to be like Buddhas, dragons, elephants, you must first serve all sentient beings. Whether it is in the workplace or in officialdom, everyone is watching whether you do something or not. Like the protagonist, who hides behind and watches others in front and then thinks about stealing. Who will obey you if you take the fruits of others? After all, the protagonist also worked for someone else. After the emperor died, he bullied the orphans and widows of others. He was not even as good as Sima Yi. After all, Sima Yi personally led troops to fight. How dare you call him a holy king?

If you write about cultivating immortals, just cultivate immortals. Don't write about martial arts, such as practicing the bones and skin of the body externally and practicing the breath internally. What kind of skill, iron cloth shirt! When you look at it, you feel like you are in the water. Nowadays, there are many books that start with martial arts and body training. How many of them have good results? Too much is bad!

This book can be said to be readable, that is, it can be read twice, and it cannot be read after reading too much. Let's analyze it briefly. After all, the starting point is becoming more and more divergent, and there is too much homogeneity. 1. Golden Finger was quite fresh at first, but then it became mentally retarded and completely ignored the wisdom of those immortals. 2. The wording in the novel, the words were intermittent and always abrupt, and some adjectives were forcibly inserted, which made the feeling of reading the book torn apart 3. The protagonist is quite confident and mature. If the sects of the system don't learn, they are just trying to figure it out on their own. There are sects and relatives behind the immortal system and the Shinto system. If you don't understand the good books, you don't understand the world system. How can you be an immortal? Are you blind to immortals?

You have turned a prehistoric myth into an official novel. Compared with your previous books, it is completely different. There is a huge difference...

How can a county magistrate fight against a family that knows the state? The county magistrate has a backstage. How much real power does his backstage have? Can you easily control a state magistrate? And how can a governor of a state be without factions? Who needs more attention? There is another county magistrate who wants to kill the county captain directly in the name of failure in suppressing bandits? Where is the brain? What kind of family in the county can kill the magistrate? Is there really a family that is not afraid of official retaliation? The plaque given by the emperor was stained with blood? There is nothing wrong with the officials in this county, so why should the emperor be regarded as such? This book is actually very suitable for what I want to read, the flow of luck and the flow of hegemony. But after reading it three or four times, I just couldn't stand it anymore. Every time it was about thirty or forty chapters, I didn't want to read it anymore. The various incongruities are really annoying.

The more I read, the more something was wrong. Before I could subscribe to the chapter, I turned to the back catalog and ordered the two chapters of Proclaiming the Emperor to see. When can Sima Yi and his like be called holy kings? Nausea!

It's quite disgusting that the protagonist usurps the throne. The original emperor didn't treat him very badly. He just seizes the throne. It's quite disdainful. There are also many female protagonists who I really hate.

There are a lot of bad sentences and it's very hard to read.

King Yu has said that as one of the Three Sovereigns and Five Emperors, he has a quota for each Era in the eleventh sequence. He often exchanges this quota for resources. Then the remaining Three Sovereigns and Four Emperors must also have quotas. It is impossible that all the quotas in the hands of this Era will be used. It can also be exchanged for resources.

It is recommended that the author create more female protagonists, just 3. Most of them will like to read it. Of course, the prerequisite is that each female protagonist can be written well.