After the Ending of Love Saint, I Traveled Through Time

Although Xia Harqin is not very good at naming books, it does not affect the quality of his books. Although the books he writes are not very good at processing in the later stage, it does not prevent his books from being very good in the early stages. After that, the golden finger of the protagonist Wang Mu was designed not to display basic attributes. I like this better, but I don't know what other people's tastes are. After that, you can gain opportunities or do other things by taking action points every month, and it will be like divine help. This book he wrote is also very consistent with the world of immortality in my mind. Unlike other books, Qi Refining Period is really *■weak, not even as good as a mortal, and Harp's book's aura of wisdom is not too strong, so even if Harp has a criminal record, I'm still reading his book. That's all for now.

The plot and creativity of this book are very good, but it is really a pity. The existing problem is that there are too many harem characters, they can no longer be controlled, and there are problems with plot allocation. The author wanted to introduce seven main female protagonists, and at the same time, there was also a plot of a new generation of female protagonists, but it was already a bit messy in the later stages. In fact, if this book only has four female protagonists, the ending of Wang Mu's ascension is acceptable. But the plots of Ying, An Qixiu and Xiao Li have just begun. The emotional investment of each of them is no worse than the first four heroines. It is unacceptable that there is no way to give these characters a good ending. Although I understand that the plot of the author's book has collapsed a bit and it will be difficult to write in the later stage, the rushed ending shows that the author was too careless. I think there are at least three more plots. Xiao Li went down to meet Mr. Tian, ​​helped Ying get out of the dark border, and made a new agreement with An Qixiu. For the author, this is only a dozen chapters. If the plot is finished, it can be considered an end. I won't say anything more after it is finished. I really hope that after reading my comments, the author can revise the book a little and give it a decent ending.

After watching it for so long, I couldn't stand it anymore, so I made a post. It looked a bit poisonous. I looked left and right, and I found that the protagonist was either suffering or on the road to suffering. Especially when I started to get in touch with the female protagonists in the game, the protagonist is also the luckiest person after all in terms of the setting. The result is really It's Qi Luck (the heroine). It has no cards at all, and the world doesn't give you any benefits. It's really a tool. After using it over and over again, it gave me a sense of youthfulness. It would be slightly better if the character in the game is really the protagonist's previous life or has some special settings. But I think the protagonist is really seriously ill, or the kind of person who wants a beautiful woman at the cost of his life. He knows that he will get it for free, but he is lucky enough to do it once, twice, or three times. He still crazyly thinks that nothing will happen. I don't know who gave him the confidence that he can handle it. Is it the author? (The author is indeed good), Bai For the first few times, I didn't have time to stop, but the result was still a waste of time. I really didn't remember it at all. It gave people a sense of separation from the original protagonist setting. It looked like a different person. It can be seen that the author's writing power was limited and the previous foreshadowing was not well written. This is the reason why I was stumped. It's difficult. But the author should work hard.

Did the author write well? Upgrading, fighting monsters, the novice village and the two love lines (the little mermaid and the one who is pretending to be a man) are all very well written. Do you recommend watching it? You can take a look and see if it suits you. Only after reading the testimonials on the book's release did I understand why many of the plots in this book are weird, and the foundation is so poor. The author didn't think too much at the beginning. He pieced together some elements he liked and started writing. This also laid hidden dangers for the future. The problem I see is mainly that two different settings exist and conflict at the same time. Type 1 Playing this game by the male protagonist is not like playing a galgame, but like Sword Art Online-like consciousness projection and the NPC has a highly intelligent AI. The male protagonist plays the game by constantly calculating and trial-and-error in order to get to the ending, but in the process he slowly develops strong feelings for the seven female protagonists. But in this case, it would be easier to write if the male protagonist is invincible in the novice village or has about the same strength as the seven female protagonists, and it is best not to start a new emotional line. The second type completely cuts off the connection between the male protagonist and Dongfang Mu. The male protagonist is simply playing galgame and knows a lot of information to get benefits from the seven female protagonists or solve problems. In this way, the emotional line between Xiao Yu'er and the female senior sister pretending to be a male appears to be more appropriate. There is no need to worry about the heroine killing him all the time, and there will be no Abyss Fish or Hexagram appearing in his plot. When the male protagonist becomes stronger, he can think of a better reason. The problem now is that the two settings seem to exist at the same time. Which setting the male protagonist's behavior and thoughts are based on depends on the author's current mood, or what kind of plot the author wants to write. But this leads to several bugs popping up from time to time, which makes it difficult to watch. Both writing methods have their own advantages and highlights. At present, it seems that the author is more suitable for the latter, that is, upgrading, collecting treasures, and exploring. Personally, I prefer watching the former, emotional dramas, Shura field and the like.

This novel is indeed good, and the author, a fifth-level writer, is definitely worth reading. However, I hope the author will not be like the author of a popular simulator novel some time ago. He wrote well in the early stage and attracted a large number of readers. Later updates were too slow and lost most readers. Even after many readers gained weight, the simulator craze passed and they did not want to click in. I hope the author can be like the author of Douluo Dalu, who wrote 10 chapters a day. I believe this Code wording will definitely make this novel achieve very good results, and it can also become a platinum author What I am more worried about is that other writers will see the setting of this book, plagiarize, and write faster and better books than this book, so that no one will subscribe to this novel later In short, the setting of this novel is indeed unique. I hope to seize the trend, update quickly, and establish my position as soon as possible.

You like the naughty girl You, the eccentric Master Mu, and the righteous Yan Jianxian. This is the first book I paid to read, but I won't have time to read it in a few days. I am under a lot of pressure in my senior year of high school, so I can only read it in the past few days due to the epidemic.

It hasn't been updated today. Will it be sent again after the change?

The author's writing skills are still poor (of course it's better than most newcomers). I can see that you put a lot of thought into this article about cultivating immortals. It shouldn't be a eunuch (it's not as difficult to write as the previous one). I think the main problem with this book is the personalities of the supporting characters. There are not many supporting characters in this book that I can remember. Su Yu counts one, Gu Yaonv also counts, Xiaoxiao Huo counts as one, and the rest are gone. Even among the elders in Novice Village, few impressed me deeply, although the book said that they traveled to a real world. But it still feels the same as in the game. The supporting characters are like NPCs. They just give out and accept tasks. There is a book called Lian Yuan. I remember all the supporting characters in it. I can name at least 12 now. Each of them has a distinctive personality and is flesh and blood, just like real people. Of course this cannot be learned in one go, but I hope the author can pay attention to the description of the characters, stories, and concepts. I will work harder in the future and strive to be like a home pig one day. It's really troublesome. Go away.

Well, how can I put it this way, I still like the plot of the seven heroines. There are also stories about their emotional lines~ But other characters such as Ao Qing, Moon God, Gu Witch, etc., Judging from your attitude as the author, it seems that you are also going to have a harem. But their characterization is not as interesting as the seven heroines, and there are few related plots. The only one who has more descriptions about Witch Gu is that she posted it herself. She is so sentimental~ My idea is, if we really want to accept them, can we increase the bond between them and Wang Mu, and have more interactive plots~ Let Wang Mu likes them, and also makes readers like them~ Otherwise, it feels like these people are incomparable to the seven heroines, and they are incomparable to Piaomiaoxu~ It is not easy for the major immortals to accept each other, can they still accept them? If you are not careful, your character will be ruined~ The most comfortable thing is to have a harem that is reasonable and reasonable.

I think the quality of this book is excellent, but the name has delayed the book, so I changed the name. .

Why on earth do these heroines want to kill the protagonist? The protagonist and the BOSS died together. Not only did the heroines go to hell together, they can't resent the protagonist after a thousand years. What's the point of shouting and killing like this? It's not entirely the protagonist's fault for not being able to fulfill the agreement. The protagonist is here to protect the world, but the most important part of the world must be the heroines. Now that the protagonist has died for this and cannot keep the appointment, the heroines have to resent, shout and kill, and want to turn the protagonist into a human tool. This makes no sense! I died for you in my previous life, and I will be killed by you in this life... I am a little unhappy, did I make a mistake, a little unwilling, a little angry, I feel... Is it a little... Not worth it, ugh

Extremely disappointed. Not as good as a eunuch. Worse than a eunuch. If I had known earlier, I wouldn't have ordered all of them From now on, this author's books will be considered blacklisted.

Is this the ending of Love Saint? I didn't get the ending of Love Saint back then, and school started when I was more than halfway through the game. I only played the Yaksha solo line, I also played the Shi Yan ending, I played the Feng Chui Xue ending, and finally I also played the Heavenly King line and Love Saint ending, but I didn't finish it.

I was attracted by the title of the book, but it turns out that this fairy tale has very few harem scenes, and the emotional scenes are very boring, with no sugar at all. Later brothers can withdraw.

Let me put it bluntly, if you open the harem reasonably, I can still watch it. That Gu Yuqing forced himself on me, which made me extremely disgusted. Author, please go ahead and enjoy yourself and leave.

This book is a masterpiece, this book is unfinished, just be a human being, big brother

It's a little bit clear. It's a bit like a type of book that was very popular before. It's probably similar to a peerless demon who is shown his memories only to find out that he wants to save the world. However, the author's writing style is very powerful and will not make people bored. However, if this routine is repeated too many times, it may make it uncomfortable to read.

If the later period is as good as the early and middle period, I believe the author will soon become a great writer.

According to the setting of this book, the heroines are all the top bosses in the world. It is great luck for ordinary people to be involved with one of them. Now there are several protagonists together, and their relationship is so subtle that it is difficult for people to think about it. They are all top bosses with good brains, so according to the current progress, there is only one more, maybe there is no need to have another one. Now the protagonist is Minglang, and there is such a thing as cause and effect in this world, so the author should hurry up and break it. I want to watch Shura Field (✧∇✧)

The latest chapter is so exciting to watch. You know that the villain opposite has his own memory and is pretending to be himself to pick up girls. You just watch without doing anything or notifying the other heroines. You are speechless. And forget about the other supporting characters who didn't have much description. The third princess must have had a crush on the male protagonist in the previous plot. She was also asked to give in to the villain. I don't know if it was a foreshadowing or a reversal. If the villain changes gender, the plot will feel very poisonous. If you wait until this plot is over and continue to follow it, everyone will be numb.

It's so beautiful, I want to update it ten times a day!

Many people may think that since it is a harem novel, the male protagonist should have the same love for all the female protagonists, but in fact, the male protagonist of a good-looking harem novel must have individual preferences, so that it can be prioritized, good-looking, more vivid, and have more different plots.

There's something about it, and I ended it without reading the twenty or thirty chapters. Blocked and never seen again.

Female protagonist cover

It's so well written that I pressed the fast forward button immediately. I'm a eunuch. Aren't you afraid of dying alone in reality?

No, what about the extra story? It's okay to finish the story in a hurry without explaining the heroines. I don't expect to be able to collect them all. Why not spend a chapter or two to give each girl a good ending?

You can let go of the book's title. It's a classic twist on hiding one's identity. After reading the first hundred chapters, there's basically no emotional drama. It's just a training account.

When are you going to take off your vest? I want to see Shura Field.

Damn it, I just realized that the books I was chasing were all yours, and I wasted my money 😭

Well, we can probably guess some of the plot behind it 😁 The routine is still a bit old-fashioned, and it never changes away from its original principles. 😁 First of all, I don't understand the setting issue. I hope the author can send a post to respond. 😁 After the game protagonist Dongfang Mu conquered the seven female protagonists a thousand years ago, is the female protagonist still pure now? Also, according to the author's settings, Wang Mu spent a lot of effort to perfectly clear the first dungeon, and he was very sure of the character of each heroine (otherwise he would not be able to complete the strategy perfectly) 😁 I hope the author can describe the characters of the seven heroines in more detail (the quirky little witch, the chivalrous girl full of justice, the cold-hearted palace lord, the seductive succubus). I want to see each heroine have her own characteristics, so that people can't help but think of this when reading this type of book. Names, such as Chen Hansheng and Shen Youchu 😭 When describing emotions, you must think carefully before writing, especially this kind of harem novel. The emotions must be delicate, otherwise it will be very easy to collapse later 😭 Finally, a reminder, don't be too old, don't hesitate when it's time to push, don't be jabbering,