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It's a very satisfying Douluo fanfic, but here's a suggestion: I don't recommend too many martial arts. After all, it's a cool novel. Sometimes the soul skills are just too confusing to read. Try to keep it simple and it'll be fun to read and play. 😜😜 I hope it will be more refined.

It is recommended that you stop reading it after seeing Wang Feng being sealed. If it is a good article, it will be a good article. Don't make so many bells and whistles. Come up with another ending yourself or follow your routine. Don't make the plot collapse by connecting to Douluo 2. The plot after the seal I guess the author himself doesn't even know how to write about Forced Douluo 2. I didn't read much of the rest of it, but you can skip the messy part in the middle and write directly about what happened in the divine world. I guess there are a lot of people like me who won't read it when they see the seal.

It was very nice until the end of Dou 1, but the beginning of Dou 2 is the biggest failure of the book, and then it becomes uninteresting.

The Seven-in-One turns out to be like this

How do you define a masterpiece? Four days ago, I stumbled upon this novel, and I couldn't stop reading the ending. Overall, I was very sad to see this book ending in a hurry. Reading a novel is like living in that world for a lifetime, and then watching the people and objects in it gradually grow old until the ending, which gives people a sense of melancholy. Actually, this book ended in my heart after the Lord of Hell confessed everything, so I still don't have many regrets after reading it. The important thing is that many key plots of Dou Yi Dou Er have been changed, which satisfies my fantasy as a fan of the original novel. To be honest, the author's writing style is not very outstanding, and the plot development is indeed weak in the later stages. This is easy to understand. The early stage is equivalent to building a house on the Douluo framework, and the later stage is equivalent to building a tall building on the ground. It is difficult to finish under such a large framework. But many settings have reached the level that I think a masterpiece should be. I write book reviews or analyses, and I like lists to make it easier for everyone to read. Plot highlights (just give a few examples): Family lines: 1. Tell Tang San that his father has been paying attention to him silently. 2. Mediated the relationship between Bibi Dong and Qian Renxue. 3. Bibi Dong implements a marriage policy, allowing the titled Douluo of that year to establish a family, which will still be popular after ten thousand years, and their achievements will last forever. Love Line: 1. Inspiring Ma Hongjun to eventually become the first-level God of Fire, no longer the Phoenix God, and Bai Chenxiang was able to enter the divine realm. 2. Change the love line of Huo Wu, and he and Feng Xiaotian finally get married. 3. Actively persuade the master, which is more in line with the plot, and eventually he and Liu Erlong become partners. 4. Change the love line between Ning Rongrong and Zhu Zhuqing, but the cooperation of Netherworld White Tiger still exists and will not forcefully separate the two families. Supporting Character Line: 1. Su Yuntao, the character who initially led the protagonist to awaken the martial spirit. Thousands of years have passed, and descendants are still guiding the soul master. 2. Yao Lao appears in advance, Xiao Yan and Xun'er express their feelings to each other, and practice the Burning Technique together 3. Enrich the plot of Shi Nian and defeat Shi Nian in advance. Filling in the pit: 1. Through Ma Hongjun's dialogue, the origin of Ma Xiaotao's evil fire phoenix thousands of years later is explained. 2. Fundamentally explains the origin of Douluo Continent, the origin of the God Realm, and the origin of everything. 3. Explained the whereabouts of the Gold and Silver Dragon King and the origin of the Void Battlefield. 4. Explained the crisis in the God Realm and Douluo Continent, unfolded the plot, and explained the principle of time and space turbulence. 5. Explained the world line conflict between Emperor Tian and other ferocious beasts, including Tianmeng Ice Silkworm, including Silver Dragon King, thousands of years ago. 6. Explained the origin of the soul core that Dou Er only has, and also explained the problem of the soul core of the soul beast. 7. Explains the difference between the cultivation level of the soul beast and the year of cultivation, and explains the specific issues of the soul beast's transformation and soul beast's intelligence. 8. After Xiao Wu was caught by Er Ming, he helped Xiao Wu smooth things over. World Line: 1. Changed Bibi Dong's concept, and also made other empires recognize Wuhun Palace. In the end, the Wuhun Federation was established to achieve harmony and win-win results. 2. Bibi Dong became a god and survived, and established the future management model of the Douluo world. 3. Qian Renxue's divine throne was not broken, and Hu Liena also had a better development ending. 4. Using the energy overflow from the five-color sacred mountain, it depicts the five battles between humans and spirit beasts over ten thousand years, which is wonderful. Moreover, it does not conflict with the original plot, and even cleverly speeds up the process. I wrote a few random things above, but overall they are very thoughtful. Until Wang Feng was sealed, I felt that this series of plots made up for a lot of Dou Yi's shortcomings, and I could accept the ending at that time. Write so much first.

(Yes, you don't have to care about how many female protagonists there are. Why, for example: Holy shit, there's not one: Zhu Zhuqing. Holy shit, there's not one: Ning Rongrong. Holy shit, there's not one: Qian Renxue. Holy shit, there's not one: Hu Liena. Holy shit, there's not one: Bibi Dong, etc.) (Don't tell me, I've accepted them all) (I don't want to complain, and I'm not exclusive) (The quality of the writing is good, no matter how much, there will be votes later)

The early stage was quite good, the characters were almost the same as the original, the fights were quite intelligent, there was no brainless licking, and the plot was not bad, but after the sealing, it was not so good, and it felt like a new person had been replaced. Several chapters were written about the definition of a soul core. When I entered the Dark Demon Realm, I talked about various anime worlds. I was confused when I read it. It felt more and more mysterious as it was written. It was said to be about Douluo 2, but it really has nothing to do with Douluo. The later period is too similar to those mindless immortal cultivation novels I have read before. What kind of exercises and systems can be written in one chapter? The updates are also very slow now. Maybe the author's mind is a bit messed up. I have written it up to this. I hope the author will try not to write so many things, fix the pitfalls, and have a happy ending.

The original Wuhun Palace supports civilian soul masters and maintains the balance of the continent. Unfortunately, Bibi Dong appears (it is also pitiful, I hope the author will give a good ending), and it goes against the protagonist, and it collapses. As for the Tang Sect and Shrek Academy, they have changed from the oppressed to the new oppressors, but they do not have the spirit of Wuhun Palace to maintain the mainland. It is a pity.                                                                                                                                                                        Intentionally defeated the Wuhun Palace, and then the first Shrek Seven Monsters successfully became gods. The huge power of the Wuhun Palace was directly disintegrated and divided between the two empires. Although Tang San left the Tang Sect, the Tang Sect has been concentrating on development and didn't pay attention to the news of the evil soul master. The evil soul masters lost the Wuhun Palace, where their suppression and killing capital was destroyed (one of the former gathering places for evil soul masters), and gradually began to become rampant. Once the evil soul masters obtained the resources for training, their strength would explode, and soul masters of the same level were no match for them. Personally, I think (don't criticize if you don't like it), what Tang San did wrong was not supporting an organization similar to Wuhun Palace. Wuhun Palace can always ensure the safety of Douluo Continent because of its contribution. Corruption will definitely occur as time goes by, Tang San is eager for revenge, and as a result, the evil spirit masters in the world are devastated. In the third generation, the evil soul masters were still not completely wiped out by Huo Yuhao. The soul tower was originally designed to coordinate the relationship between soul beasts and humans, but it still failed to prevent internal corruption and the remnants of the evil soul masters from destroying the world. This trap must have something to do with Tang San. For personal vendetta (this can't be wrong, revenge must be avenged, he didn't expect it to be so deep, since Wang Feng is not a modern person after all), it led to the proliferation of evil soul masters in Douluo Continent. I think it's a good idea for the author to write about Wang Feng helping a certain person or force to unify and develop the Douluo Continent. It can reduce some bad situations in the future (at least the advantages should outweigh the disadvantages).

To be honest, it's quite irritating to see the protagonist entangled with Ning Rongrong and Zhu Zhuqing. I really hate harem stories, ugh. But this is the author's book after all, and I'm just giving some suggestions. All I can say is that not many people who watch Douluo like the harem. (Probably?) Anyway, that's how I am. I read half of the pirated copies in order to get the original version, but I haven't ordered them all yet. If I have a harem, I can only make sure to fill in the chapters before the harem, and forget about the rest. Alas 😟

After listening to more than a dozen chapters, I couldn't listen anymore. The plot didn't make sense at all, and it was very laborious to play a minor role in a god's costume. Then both Tang Hao and the master became mentally retarded. They let go of the protagonist who was more awesome than Tang San. I couldn't listen anymore, so I canceled it. There is nothing wrong with the anchor, Shapi novel!

The writing is okay, but the main character's martial spirit is too flashy. In addition, the current protagonists are all dumbfounded. They just like to hang the heroine, and they don't want to accept it. I have read four or five hundred chapters. Of course, the author is not easy, so I bought some genuine chapters. After all, I think everyone's comments are really funny. I laugh when I read the comments. No matter what the progress is, No, so writing about the heroine feels a bit redundant. She doesn't want it for herself, and she doesn't give it to others. The heroine takes the initiative and hangs others up. Hey, this is a bit poisonous. I have tolerated playing a titled Douluo at level 40 or above, and I have tolerated the bells and whistles of martial arts. You also tolerated telling Tang San your identity as a time traveler. What are you doing hanging up the heroine? Do you appear to be a more upright gentleman?

(The author's general direction and construction have been completed), (Good quality is enough) (I don't know why the requirements are so high) (If I write in a mess, I'm afraid you can't stand it) (I'm pursuing quality, okay, if there are many chapters and good quality, it won't taste good)

It's this kind of setting of avatars picking up girls, don't you think it's very... Don't say it's all about you, I don't believe you didn't react at all! And this book doesn't go to other worlds? Start with Douluo and then end with Douluo? No way! Can the Pangu Ax and Chaos Qinglian be used in this Douluo? I hope I can finish Douluo and go to other worlds! (Just a little suggestion, if you think it's bad, just think I'm farting)

*Ah! Chapter ten knelt down. It is indeed a cool article. My lower limit of IQ was abruptly cut in half. When people have no brains? There are so many poisonous points that I don't know where to start.

Chapter 15 Abandoned! It's so awkward to read! At the age of six, if you don't have a soul ring, you have to beat the rhythm of level 26. It seems that it is easy to kill level 30, and you carry hundreds of kilograms of weight on your body! This is the rhythm of destroying Douluo at level 50!

Everyone has their own favorite books. I like reading this book very much. If you don't like it, you can read other books. What's wrong with having a harem?

It was okay in the beginning, but after the Star Dou Shenshan, I feel that the author's writing power has declined very quickly, and it has become a brainless stallion flow.

This should be regarded as the best Douluo fanfic. Anyway, the few books I have read are much inferior to this one. The updates are fast and the quality is high. The characters are also very well created. I fell in love with it.

The plot has gotten better recently, but the foreplay when we first arrived in the Dark Demon Realm was a bit too long. However, it is really not easy to control such a huge world view, and this recent part is indeed good to watch. At least it gave me the feeling of wanting to keep reading like the first thousand chapters.

After watching it, it started to feel a bit sudden from the sealed part. The Dark Demon Realm at the back is quite innovative, and the multiverse is also very interesting. The ending is a bit sloppy, but it's understandable, but it's really a pity.

After reading hundreds of chapters, the elite competition is over. What impressed me the most was Ning Rongrong. She was really an aggressive and proud woman, and she gradually grew into the person I like. Her pride has not disappeared, and she has tempered her edge for the sake of her lover. She was a kind girl from the beginning, and the hard outer shell completely blocked her softness, but now she is not, she is beautiful, strong, and knows more about how to behave. But she is Ning Rongrong, and she may not be able to be so-called gentle and virtuous in her life. I like her very much. Obviously the author should be a boy, but I couldn't help but raise the corners of my mouth when I saw them you described. So sweet and so skillful! And those modes of getting along always bring back some memories for me.

😂The protagonist jumps repeatedly between the Wuhun Palace and various major sects. I have to admire the author for writing very good fan fiction with few poisonous points. If the fan fiction written by other authors is really poisonous to a certain extent, the plot will definitely collapse. The subsequent plot is just a one-man show and brainless bragging. I have to admire the author's writing style to activate the aura of collective intelligence. After paired with the right amount of ginger juice, he is invincible. I recommend it d(ŐдŐ๑)

I really admire the author. When I first read this book, it only had 500,000 or 600,000 words, and now it's close to 4 million. It's really amazing!

The latest book review in 21 years, the starting point of this book is very good, especially the description of scientific exercise, which helps the protagonist group to train very well. The description of the boss of the Seven Monsters is reasonable and generous. Unfortunately, it becomes more and more biased later on. Don't mind the mother and daughter in the harem, you can skip it. Maybe I am a CP party member of the original novel. I was disgusted from the moment Rongrong suddenly appeared to win favor with the protagonist. This is not to say that the writing was not good because it was not worthy of the Oscar. The Oscar is just like us in reality. After meeting a beautiful girl, we rely on our own efforts to finally embrace the beauty. But now I can't write about feeling sorry for Oscar☹ No one can refute the efforts of Oscar in the original book. It's a pity that I didn't have a good wife in the book to fulfill my diaosi dream.

In fact, the writing style is not bad, and it is easy and entertaining to read But the author of Chapter 30 is completely over-the-top, and the hook is too much Only the level 99 Titled Douluo Nine Treasure Glazed Tile Tower can increase all attributes by 100%, and your level 10 soul master's one skill can increase all attributes by 100%. Ning Rongrong can jump off the cliff directly, life is boring, and you can't catch up with others after working hard all your life. Level strength I can't imagine the expressions of Ning Rongrong and the Nine Treasure Glazed Sect Master when they learned about this skill, just like Kishimoto can't imagine Naruto's expression when he saw Jiraiya of the Earth A skill of the 10th level soul master can increase the level of the 99th level titled Douluo Nine Treasures Glazed Pagoda. Once this skill is used, it will definitely shock the soul master world. Ning Rongrong's father is known as the number one auxiliary soul master in Douluo Continent. He has wanted to break through level 80 all his life, so that his all attributes can increase by more than 80%. One of your level 10 soul master's skills will be 100%. As long as the skill is used, Bibi Dong will definitely come to arrest him personally in the next chapter. You are still a chicken, and you want to enter Shrek Academy. It's impossible, you will definitely be outbid. Dong Zhao was put under house arrest and trained in person to become the royal assistant for himself and Qian Renxue If the author really wrote this, it's not that he couldn't read it to see how to fight back. The problem is that the author didn't think that such a buggy skill would shock the soul master world and attract Bibi Dong's attention If you start with the same 10% increase as Ning Rongrong, your upgrade The first level adds 10% increase. One skill is equivalent to Ning Rongrong's three skills. I think you are an enhanced version of Ning Rongrong. You can directly increase the increase by 100%. Who can stand this? Be careful of being sliced and studied, a rural child, who can protect you, how can you count on Tang Hao, you are not someone else's son If you want to show off, can you wait until you have the ability to protect yourself? I can accept you playing a Titled Douluo at level 80. Then you can start showing off at level 10. Pretending that even the villain can't see your specialness, regardless of you, is too demoralizing.

To be honest, there are two chapters updated every day, every 24 o'clock. It's really not good to do this. It's exactly the same as that anime with two episodes a week, 6 minutes in the beginning and 4 minutes in the end.

By the time Dou Er arrived, I was completely bored I was tired of aesthetics.

Come on as an author and don't stop updating

I don't know if the author is a girl. The plot related to "Girls' Sixth Sense" in this novel is something I have never read before (maybe it's because I don't read well...?), But it is interesting and I will praise it~

Who has been accepted in Dou Erli? ? ?