Konoha: My Experience in the Ninja World

After watching it for an hour, I suddenly thought, what the hell was I watching? I don't know if there's something wrong with the author's thematic ideas, or if there's something wrong with me. I liked it very much after reading the first 30 chapters, but the more I read the later chapters, the more it hurts me. What's going on? -_-||Other people's novels torture the protagonist, but you torture the readers! It seems like you have completely taken control of the situation, but then you actually start writing daily? There are ideas, there are ideas, and they are all integrated. . . Brother author, do you want to read for yourself what you wrote?

After reading one or two hundred chapters, I collapsed. Is it still related to Naruto? I completely let myself go and wrote nonsense.

When did you absorb divine power and evolve into the Eternal Kaleidoscope?

，， If I remember correctly, Danzo had the outline of Hashirama's face on his right hand after transplanting Hashirama's cells. Then choose a time in public, preferably when there are the most Jonin, to rip off Danzo's bandage, so that Sarutobi doesn't have to do anything but kill Danzo. After all, the third generation and the Hokage advisor are both second-generation students. If they don't kill Danzo, they will deceive the master and destroy the ancestor. After all, Hashirama is still the second-generation brother, and the Sharingan is the blood successor. If this problem is not dealt with well, all the blood successor families in Konoha will be forced to Uchiha. Then, killing Danzo is not the end. As Hokage, you, Sarutobi, cannot just say "I don't know" to Danzo's actions. It is inevitable that your prestige will be severely damaged. Danzo's root expenses must be applied for funds. I can't just say that I want to study Hashirama cells and Sharingan, so there will be a serious reason. If there is a conflict between the factual results and the reasons for the funding application, then it must involve falsifying accounts. The two consultants Sarutobi and Hokage must sign the funding application. In this way, the publicity can drive Sarutobi and Hokage consultants to a dead end. At this time, the third generation of Sarutobi was involved in a huge scandal and could only take the blame and resign. The election of the fifth generation was on the agenda. Due to the negative impact, at this time, we could not play the tricks of Orochimaru and Namikaze Minato. The new Hokage may not necessarily be an Uchiha, but the new Hokage who takes power must win over the Uchiha.         ，，， The most famous Senju of the Warring States Period, Uchiha and Hinata can be called powerful clans in the ninja world, so they must be strong. If they are not strong, how can they protect their clansmen? If they cannot protect their clansmen, they cannot remain strong, so they should have the largest number. But in fact, after the 1, 2, 3 and 4 wars, the Senju disappeared, the Uchiha population was not large before the annihilation, and the Hyuga population was also small. It can also be seen here that the war in the ninja world was cruel, and the wealthy clans became destitute. But in such a cruel war, your Sarutobi family can still overtake others in a roundabout way. The population of other wealthy families has dropped sharply, but your Sarutobi family can still have a positive population growth. Is it possible that your Sarutobi family is a direct blood relative of the Otsutsuki clan, so strong in ninjutsu and body? I can understand why the Hyuga family raised three thousand ninja troops. After all, it is a powerful ninja clan that has been passed down since the Warring States Period. Your Sarutobi family is unknown, how can you surpass the powerful ninja clan? There must be some ulterior PY transaction behind this. Considering that Sarutobi weakened the wealthy Konoha clan, you should be fair and include your Sarutobi family. But in fact, the Sarutobi family has been safely through the wars of 1, 2, 3 and 4 without any illness, and the population can still grow positively. This should be the result of Sarutobi's partiality after becoming Hokage. The wealthy family of Konoha is sent to carry out the most dangerous battles, and the Sarutobi family is sent to carry out the safest missions. You can see Sarutobi's dirty ambition just by looking at Konohamaru's name. So whenever a time traveler goes to Uchiha, the world of Naruto, he should be able to quickly solve the Uchiha family's problems from these perspectives. ps: Only those who traveled one or two years before the night of genocide, or those who do not have golden fingers. If the time of travel is early enough, or the traveler with a strong enough golden finger can ignore it (Welcome to add any deficiencies and raise questions)

The protagonist has achieved things: 1. Obtained the Divine Eye 2. Unified the whole clan's thoughts of fighting to the end 3. Uchiha Fugaku is about to be eliminated as the clan leader 4. Delayed the night of genocide Total time traveled: less than a week

The author really exaggerates the power before opening the eighth door, and there is a problem with the protagonist's physical strength. If you don't open the kaleidoscope, you'll die if you lift the table. If you don't lift the table, it won't be long.

After reading more than 200 chapters, you can stop reading. . . The protagonist takes Tsunade under his wing. Shizune, Kurenai, and Mrs. Mikoto all have a crush on the protagonist (ambiguously). The protagonist is like a fisherman. It gradually became crooked later on. (It was all booked. When I saw a male protagonist on the character card, I was careless and didn't dodge. When I saw Tsunade openly appearing in front of the protagonist, I felt numb. Just because Tsunade was lying in bed, the protagonist came to shout. I was so careless that a Sannin forgot to put on his clothes. He chased people away naked (absolute, really amazing, the subjugation operation controlled me too) Mainly because the protagonist took advantage and acted, really. , Very funny, pretending to be a victim while eating tofu, this is PUA Summary, it was okay before Chapter 210, the protagonist is very capable, fanning the flames and love to watch (but part of it is repeating what has been said over and over again (my thesis is deja vu), but it is understandable, a bit like a brainwashing operation (whether it is scolding the third generation, or encouraging before going to the battlefield, and promoting the will of fire) 210，，，（，，），Let yourself go back, right? (I've said it several times before). Since you have been leaving from the beginning and have never decided to stay here, why are you messing around with women? The protagonist has changed dramatically before and after Chapter 210 (or around Chapter 220). There is a strong sense of dissonance. It feels like a powerful person who only pursues power has jumped to the erotic LSP (just like the difference between Ningji in the original world and Ningji in the limited monthly reading)

The author made several low-level errors in intelligence cognition. 1. The Uchiha genocide occurred one year after the death of Uchiha Shisui. 2. In Chapter 70, Naruto's eldest son and daughter-in-law didn't die in the Nine-Tails Rebellion. If they had died here, Konohamaru, the youngest, would be as good as Naruto!

The author crazily included personal information in the book, and all kinds of criticisms were too deviant from the topic to be honest. We are here to read and relax, not to take political classes. We can just briefly mention this kind of thing, and the more important thing is to advance the progress of the story.

Run, it's poisonous Your protagonist has no strength, and he wants to run out of the village after forcing Sarutobi. I really don't believe that the Sandai and Danzo can't do anything, they are just freeloaders. Is the ANBU just a decoration? To put it bluntly, what's wrong with you claiming justice? The power of the ninja world is king. As the strongest ninja village in Konoha, would a daimyo who provides the economy consider offending the Hokage of this village? What does the internal conflict of a village have to do with my daimyo? It's even more hilarious when you say that Sarutobi wants to kill the daimyo. As a Kage, and the number one ninja village, would you take a daimyo seriously? It's just an ATM assistant in name only.

There's a lot of nonsense and the protagonist is weak. Some people say it's a cool novel. Is it cool? Where is the fun?

There seems to be someone in the comment area who is still trying to clear up Itachi Uchiha.

Brothers, the lockdown is about to start again, so go buy groceries...

Tell a joke, what is your education, identity and experience? Writing about politics is pure clown🤡

The poisonous point of writing novels with pig's feet is mentioned again and again. If you want to ignore the past, the author has to remind you from time to time that novels written with pig's feet are really addictive. I guess it is the author who has substituted pig's feet for the writer. During the crisis of genocide, it would be okay if Pigfoot wrote a novel under the arrangement of the author so that the author could enjoy himself. But logically speaking, what normal person would still be in the mood to read a novel written by Pigfoot if he did not prepare for war under the crisis of genocide? In the thirty-something chapters, during the climax of the genocide crisis, there are many places where pig trotters are written. The novel is so beautiful. The tribesmen in the genocide crisis love to read it. I can't ignore it even if I want to, because it is mentioned again and again from time to time. It is really poisonous!

The annihilation of the Uchiha clan was secretly planned by Obito. There is no way the protagonist could get Kakashi's Sharingan. The author who dared to write this probably didn't consider Obito.

The protagonist has been using modern technology throughout the whole process. He is always connected by phone, wireless earphones are used during fights, and he is always connected by voice recorders and cameras. Konoha had these technologies when the Uchiha were not exterminated? Why don't I remember that the third generation often called each other? Everyone has a phone.

I have read more than a hundred chapters. The old lady's foot-binding cloth is smelly and long.

Chapter 50 or 60: The pig's feet have no strength, and they keep beeping and talking, which is quite boring. Forget about talking, the progress is extremely slow!

Regarding me traveling to a Naruto world, I have been running around for 50 chapters without having to fight a single time, and I have never used my golden finger once. I would like to ask my friends who have finished reading, how many chapters does it take for the protagonist to start fighting? I don't want to watch Zui Dun anymore.

It's so brainless. It would be better to change the name to Uchiha Mouth King. Fugaku is stupid, Itachi is bad, Danzo the Third is stupid and bad, and the Uchiha family is White Lotus. I'm really convinced. The writing is not good.

Black, I won't reject this point of view, but it must be justified or not deviate from the character. You see, the descriptions of Itachi, Sandaime and others are simply black for the sake of being black. I think they can have their own interests or psychological hatred for Uchiha, but there is no need to repeatedly use some words to deliberately discredit them.

After reading Chapter 20, in a world with transformation skills, who are you going to laugh to death if you use the video to report to the Hokage that they are going to rebel?

I really got better and better as I wrote and gave speeches over and over again, but the content of the speeches was still pretty much the same. I could deliver five or six chapters in each speech, which really made me vomit. Some things were really fun to write for the first time, but it was boring to write them over and over again.

Is this book really worth reading? The characters have nothing to do with the original work. I can't even say how much the characters' personalities have been changed. Really, saying that what you wrote is shit is just a compliment. I have nothing to say, nothing to say. For the first time in so many years of reading a novel, I feel that I lack the language and do not know how to curse.

After reading Chapter 70, the old lady's foot-binding cloth is smelly, long, and full of nonsense. You are going to rebel at the beginning, and you haven't even started 70 cards yet?

It's too watery. I wrote more than 60 chapters in one night of genocide and didn't finish it.

I skipped the chapters for free. The protagonist himself said that the revolutionary coup was not a treat for dinner, but he ended up going to a showdown with the major ninja clans and the top management of Konoha to expose Danzo's Sharingan? Shouldn't this kind of conclusive evidence be used as a warning? As a result, it flourished and then declined. If you go to mobilize the masses, you will just march around and make trouble. Brother, what you are doing can be called forced labor in ancient China, so just let it go? I have been reading fanfics for so many years, and I feel that there are very few Naruto fanfics that can surpass the old book "The Strongest Naruto" in 2009. It's also a black-shen canzheng fighting style. How do people balance the upgrading of martial arts and the political fighting and clan fighting at the same time? At that time, it was still early for the finale of Naruto, but the author could just rely on his own settings and logical lines to justify himself, and the pace was not sluggish, and he had a very good grasp of it. A big problem with this book is that I think the main plot collapsed from the beginning. You have a system in your hand that can make you stronger as long as you work hard. In theory, you should develop slowly, try your best to take advantage of the upgrading practice flow and feel more comfortable. As a result, the time you traveled through was the eve of the genocide. You didn't have time to develop your liver, so you could only keep writing intrigues to delay time. In my opinion, it is childish and childish, and the writing is very intellectually depressing; the liver upgrade is not exciting and boring; the rhythm is not good, as book friends said, there is too much nonsense, a genocide incident can last for more than 60 chapters, and the impression is too bad. Anyway, I'll stop here. I won't follow the plot anymore. The new book will be friendly.

Who is the heroine? It can't be Tsunade, right? Too old or

The data on new books is quite poor. I don't know if I can make it to the next round of recommendations. I sat there all afternoon and couldn't figure out the words. I'll update it later.