Konoha: Start by Getting the Emulator

There is no such thing as a happy life simulator, it's just a big dream that a poor boy had before he was seriously injured by Iwa Ninja.

I think this article is quite good, but there are a few points that I would like to explain: (1) The protagonist is a time traveler, but I have never watched Naruto. To be honest, although some people say they are time travellers, they have never seen Naruto, so they are no different from natives. However, after looking at the author's handling and writing style, I feel quite comfortable. In the beginning, the protagonist has not read the original work and made choices based on his own judgment. I feel that based on the existing conditions, the judgment made is quite reasonable. For example, it was initially speculated that Orochimaru was the Fourth Hokage. Also, the protagonist does not know that this is an anime, does not know the dark side of the village, and does not know the plot. However, he still has deep feelings for the village and has good expectations for the village. Therefore, at the beginning, he just wanted to survive the war and survive. But because of the deep feelings, when the simulator first simulates the results, the protagonist must be very uncomfortable and shocked inside, so only one eye can naturally change from two magatama to three magatama. Therefore, the protagonist's emotional changes and attitude changes later on are quite natural. In the end, the story is spoiled through the simulator and Naruto who traveled to the past. I feel that it doesn't matter to the protagonist whether he knows the plot of the anime or not. The protagonist already knows everything anyway. If you don't know, you can also use the simulator to advance the plot. (2)About the simulator in the article that keeps simulating all kinds of weird ways to die when the anti-addiction is not lifted. Some people think it is outrageous and think that the simulator drives high and low in the article, which feels like a poisonous point. The most specific explanation of the simulator is actually in Chapter 48, which seems to be this chapter. Sorry, typing is inconvenient. I am afraid that after exiting and coming in again, I will have to type again and change the format. It will be very troublesome. You can find it yourself, probably Chapter 48. When the anti-addiction mode of the simulator in the article is not released, although the protagonist is simulated, the simulated personality is random, so there are various outrageous ways to die in the article. This is explained in Chapter 48 later, and the things simulated later are pretty good, and there is no feeling of driving high and going low. In the beginning, in war, you died quickly, and the shortcomings caused by random personalities during simulation were not so conspicuous. But after the war ended, when the anti-addiction was not lifted, there were no fights, and it was not so easy to die, the disadvantages of random character simulation came out, so some of the deaths were very funny, but they did live for a long time, and then slowly killed themselves. After the anti-addiction is lifted later, I think the upgrade of the simulator is quite reasonable. There are limits, there is balance. If it doesn't appear, you can simulate it casually and get too much, which will lead to crashes later. The current solution is that only by saving more coins can the simulation time be longer, get better ratings, and get better rewards. Moreover, the protagonist does not blindly accumulate coins. Before setting off on a mission, or when he is unsure, when the coins are sufficient, he will also conduct a short-term simulation for a year to see and explore the dangers. In short, I think the author wrote it very well. Instead, I find it strange why there are so few monthly tickets. Before reading this article, I had just read an article about a simulator and an Uchiha. He was poisoned and died, and other people still had a lot of monthly tickets. I was very puzzled. So when I read the author's article later, I think some parts were handled quite well. Even when I first watched it, I was very confused, why did it die so quickly, why was there such a thing as hemophobia, etc. At that time, I thought it was outrageous, so I wanted to give up. I felt that this was what others said, start high and go low, and I was speechless at the time. I wanted to click on the book review to complain, but fortunately the author liked to reply to this chapter and said that I saw the author's explanation, so I read it again. But I still want to @author here, can't these explanations be interspersed in the first few chapters in advance? This way readers won't walk away with doubts or thinking it's a poisonous point. In short, come on, author!

It can be said that there are some problems with the plot. It makes Uchiha look like trash. Is the author just kidding himself?

Hinata

1. There are too many abilities, and everything behind is a mess. 2. The indigenous protagonist was successfully persuaded to retreat. Goodbye.

The author must have been a newcomer when he wrote it, either a native or an omniscient time traveler. Who would be stupid to read this kind of time traveler who doesn't know the plot? After all, if you read a Naruto fanfic, you must have seen Naruto. If you let someone who has never seen Naruto be the protagonist, I will also be convinced.

A native, not a time traveler, doesn't understand the plot, and has no sense of immersion!

You are not suitable for light novels, so give up.

After reading the first two chapters, I have some questions. Is the protagonist a time traveler? Unlike, because he didn't know the system was vigilant and asked the system who created such a meaningless question, a normal time traveler would definitely accept it immediately for the sake of strength and survival. So the protagonist is a native, but the ability of the natives to accept and familiarize themselves with the operation is not normal. It is meaningless to conclude that this is a small game without using it. What is the basis for this judgment? After simulating it once, I found out how powerful this simulator is. I felt a little embarrassed.

Shennong, where is Shennong! Shennong is coming to test the medicine!

How could a time traveler die so easily if he knew the plot? I admit that it is easy to die in the beginning. You can admit that time travelers are a bit arrogant, but they have died so many times in the simulator, and they still died after acquiring various skills. This is not the way to suppress the protagonist

Even if the protagonist has never watched Naruto, he should at least have heard of some of its plots, right? No matter more or less, you will have seen some plots of Naruto in various software, various apps, and various videos, right? I've never seen it before and it's too exaggerated.

The time traveler doesn't know the kaleidoscope! Then what are you doing with the Uchiha clan? How great to go to the Shimura Clan!

No, a time traveler who doesn't know anything, why should he travel through time? It's the 21st century, in the information age, you should have heard of the basic protagonists and villains of various anime. It feels like I want to write an invincible novel, but I don't dare to make the protagonist invincible. A few golden legends. It is not reflected at all. God rewards hard work = hard work will be rewarded. I won't talk about your ninjutsu connection. There is no laning experience for killing people or anything else. Physical endurance is not added after exercise. Chakra consumption recovery and total amount are not added. It does not reflect the strong character of the golden legend at all.

I found that Naruto fans have a common problem. Every time I write about the plot of Loulan, I only focus on the dragon veins and it is too utilitarian. The plot always becomes perfunctory and feels like I am rushing to get it done.

1. Although he is a time traveler, he behaves almost like an aboriginal. It was unpleasant to watch.

I really can't stand it after reaching Chapter 50. What on earth are you writing? There is a plug-in simulator That's all the time travellers? You might as well just write it as aboriginal-_-||

I can't handle it until chapter 40. It's best to just change it to the natives. It's okay at the beginning, but I saw Fugaku Kaleidoscope. Although I haven't watched Naruto's Time Traveler, I dare say that at least 4 of the 10 young people born in the 90s definitely know Naruto Kaleidoscope. Who dares to say that no one has seen it or doesn't know about it. It's so poisonous. Although I haven't watched Naruto, I know that this is a forced selection of readers. Well written but not for me, the details are great. It's just that I was chosen by Sai and couldn't bear it anymore.

Author, your first chapter, the protagonist complains that Konoha doesn't care about these war orphans But, the protagonist is from the Uchiha clan, he belongs to the ninja clan, although his parents are gone, he should be taken care of by the ninja clan themselves You Konoha went to take care of them, are you plotting the limits of blood succession and family secrets? , Or want to train a dead soldier? It is impossible to intervene, not even to give money. Forget it if you are a civilian ninja. Ninja clan, Konoha bypasses the ninja clan to show kindness to a single orphan. Take a look at it. If it was Danzo who did it, do you think it must be Danzo looking for a dead warrior or Konoha swallowing up other people's inheritance?

This messy exam had better end as soon as possible. How is it possible for a big country to take part in such an exam? If you are strong, you will be intercepted and killed later; if you are weak, you will lose customer reputation. The exposure of intelligence is even more troublesome.

Is the protagonist a time traveler? If not, he knew all about flashes and those skills, but if it was true, Obito didn't even know them.

This should not be refined

In 263~264, the name of the five-tailed King Mu was mistakenly written as the name of the four-tailed Sun Wukong.

I can't say this book is bad, I can only say that everyone has different tastes. Anyway, I found this book quite frustrating. The protagonist is a qualified ninja. I used to remember that people often complained about Tang San from Douluo Continent. He often said: This person has a way to die. Although the three views are a bit wrong, he is not angry. I read the book and looked at the protagonist as if he was suffering. I was speechless.

The opening chapter is off-putting, so I don't recommend reading it.

The protagonist can be more selfish. This is human nature. You don't have to make the character you want to kill annoying as hell. The most important thing is that the original character design has been changed too much. The personal ethics of successful people since ancient times are actually not that important. Think about Emperor Taizong of the Tang Dynasty and Emperor Taizu of the Song Dynasty. They were undoubtedly wise kings.

My nephew at home is sick today, so the update will be late, sorry.

Ah, the protagonist is a bit low-key😏

Please take a leave in advance. I have something to do tonight, so I'm not sure if I'll update in time.

Cool article, if you are interested in conspiracy theories, you can read it