From Troll Tribe to Elven Empire

It's very good. Come on, author, don't make it unfinished.                                                                                             Although I felt that the setting and foreshadowing were a bit complicated in the early stage, and the writing and language style was a bit uncertain, and I even wanted to give up when it came time to establish a parliamentary system in system construction, but after reading hesitantly, I accepted this language style. The novel is still very good. It is not the usual overbearing protagonist and brainless novel that is common nowadays. It focuses on the development of groups and races, and it will not make people tired from fighting for hegemony all day long. There is a single heroine, there is no emotional drama, but it can be used as a little adjustment, and in the setting of the novel, it also helps the development of the protagonist. It is not a vase decoration, but a complementary companion. It also helps the protagonist have stable emotions and maintain energy on business. I think it is quite reasonable.        ，，，ok，，， The protagonist's personal growth and the development of race and civilization complement each other. I think there is no problem. After all, in this article, the trolls are primitive and simple immortal species without any intrigues or internal conflicts. The protagonist has room for mistakes and growth. Unlike other articles where the plot rhythm is too full, the protagonist's absence will consume the reader's patience, so the protagonist is required to be a perfect product from the beginning and not make stupid mistakes. This article will not consume the reader's emotions too much, so it can basically be viewed with a peaceful mind. The language is straightforward, sometimes like a briefing, and is not very likely to arouse and stimulate the reader's emotions. However, it is okay in this kind of article. After all, the perspective is on racial development and civilization construction, rather than a one-man show of the protagonist's personal invincibility, so it does not matter if there is less psychological description and excitement (the speech at the bottom of the sea is not bad, and it arouses emotions). However, a few supporting characters can be slightly strengthened, such as the psychological changes and research results of the witch doctors who have joined other tribes in the Republic. After all, most of the witch doctors with personalities and achievements currently appearing are from the original tooth tribe. I feel that so many other wise men with profound backgrounds have not been reflected. Or one or two representative characters of other races can be written as a reflection of the diversity of the world, and as embellishments in a bunch of briefings.                                                                                      but for readers who are used to reading fast-food online articles, they probably don't have the patience to read it anymore, but for the reasonable party and the setting party that pay attention to logical autonomy, it is actually quite good. At least for readers like me who are not majoring in science and engineering, they will not find fault with specific technical details. However, in the author's writing, the development of technology and the construction of the system have a complete context to follow. It is not achieved overnight by the protagonist patting his head. It is a collective wisdom and effort and a step-by-step process, which is good. There are also the origins of species, the increase in productivity, changes in production relations, the development of culture and spiritual entertainment, the improvement of various systems, and even the racial character from wild and reckless trolls to learning self-control, and from arrogance to self-confidence and modest elves. They are all reflected in various stages. Various changes are described with specific events and transformations, not just "after years of development, from... To...". After reading the novel, readers will be able to have a clear understanding of the history of the development of trolls and elves, and have an impression of the specific stages, historical events, and various turning points. This is very well-shaped, and the author has carefully thought and designed it.        ，，，，hhhh But I personally feel that I quite like this novel after accepting it. I hope the author will continue to work hard, do a good job in setting up and foreshadowing, and don't ignore the details, let alone fail to write. If it is written according to the current standard, I will order it all.

The author hopes you understand one thing. You are writing a story, not a scientific research report. From the middle of the story to now, I feel that I can only skip and read without delaying the progress of the plot. The scientific research part is really a little short of word count. Sometimes there is even no progress in the scientific research plot. The current one is not even as good as the beginning. I understand that the author is very busy and may not have time to conceive the plot. It is the same if you can spare a few days to write. At least a wonderful plot and a grand structure will consolidate the readers.

Chapter 6 of this book talks about text creation, but jumps directly to square characters? To be honest, I don't quite understand. I feel like it's too fast, maybe I've skipped something important. Writing is the cultural heritage of a race. If this is difficult to describe, I suggest you skip it. There is also a large section at the end that describes how the protagonist creates a magic system from scratch. To be honest, I thought it was a farming novel at first. At first I thought what I wanted to see was how much food the tribe collects every day, how many people can be fed, and how many warriors are there in the tribe? And then directly start writing conjectures and research on spiritual power in Chapters 7 and 8? To be honest, I don't understand. Chapter 16: Literacy and Enlightenment. To be honest, I don't know why the author wrote this. Literacy and compulsory education in modern times is because the country needs a large number of workers. This novel is still a primitive society. Is literacy necessary? How much food can a warrior bring when he goes hunting? How many wild fruits can a troll woman gather when she goes out to gather them? How many idlers can the entire tribe support, or the secondary and tertiary industries? The fourth point is the meeting system written by the author. I think it will work no matter what system the author wants to use to write the story. However, the author did not write much about the previous economic foundation in the novel. I don't know what the basis for this conference system is. How to determine the right to speak? Does the author have an outline? Isn't this conference system just a brainstorm?

It feels like there are too many settings, and there are too many settings in the main text. You can try to integrate the settings into the plot and promote the plot. The settings are a bit like reading a collection of settings. I quite like the content and discussion angle of the novel. There are just too many settings and it's very tiring to watch.

To be honest, the early novels have an amazing farming style, but later on, whether it's the elfization of the troll tribe, external information collection, or conquests, it feels like the author is just setting up the plot and I can't see where the plot is. The previous one inexplicably described a massacre of a city. I don't know what the author wanted to express? Is it showing off the superiority of the elves? Or show off their modern warfare capabilities? But wasn't it written subtly before that the elf master's specialty is different from traditional magic, and the author's occasional greasy plot settings are acceptable, but I can't even tell from the outline that he is also a fairy.

The advantage is that it is stunning in the early stage. The disadvantage is that it is too scattered and a failure of group portrait writing.

The basic form of early primitive society was the early republic, and there was no distinction between East and West. The basis for maintaining autocratic rule is the military. The basis for the formation of an army is the production of food and weapons. The most important thing is the production of food. Whether it is based on planting or nomadic people, it is based on the stable production of food. Even with a relatively weak material foundation, it is not easy to directly invoke dictatorship, because inheritance is still a big problem. The "Bamboo Book Annals" records that Shun imprisoned Yao and exiled Yao's son; "Han Feizi": Shun forced Yao, and Yu forced Shun. This can also be proved. Therefore, it is somewhat thankless to directly establish a dictatorship without any advance preparation. Although this is in a magical world, the protagonist's force cannot exceed that of other trolls at once. In my opinion, the army or early army stage cannot be bypassed.

The protagonist plays with the parliamentary system in a primitive society? Power and efficiency are directly proportional. If you don't plan to centralize power, you still want to play a bloody battle of wits with primitive people? Do you plan to stay in the deep forest for the rest of your life and never go out?

It was said that popularizing Chinese characters and Chinese language was not good, and too many readers were poisonous, so the initial language settings were modified. Changing to the protagonist only provides ideas related to "hieroglyphs" and "phonetic characters". So, now the trolls in the book speak in troll language, please remember to translate it when you read it. I tried hard to imitate the original feeling of Troll language by simplifying the language, but I only tried it until Chapter 17 and stopped. There are two reasons, 1. It's too difficult 2. The results are a bit different.

Brothers and sisters, don't look at the few chapters I update every day, but I have a lot of words in each chapter. Please give me some to follow up😭

To explain, in the setting, witch doctors are all sages, what they lack is just knowledge. So the protagonist does not have the need or energy to do something that is dominated by one person. Even if you ascend the throne, don't you still have to rely on the people under you to rule? Under the entanglement of interests, efficiency may not be any higher than that of a minority republic. Moreover, we have to be careful all day long to balance the interests of all parties. How tiring. And for the development of civilization, wouldn't it be good to work together as a team? In addition, the book is not purely about the parliamentary system, but a "republic of wise men". Smart witch doctors will get a two-hundred-year "training regime", which is a republican politics belonging to a small elite. Classical mob politics cannot develop in the short term.

My evaluation is that the concept is very good, but I really can't stand it. There are too many complicated and outrageous settings. I feel that the author is a bit like Kong Yiji who doesn't want to take off his long robe, and he doesn't want to rely on golden fingers. He must use his own or researched knowledge to make a round. The author has been burying holes since the first chapter. The author forced himself to increase the difficulty, which caused him to frantically search for information later to fill in the holes. The result is that no one likes to read those complicated and tortured principles. For example, the plant refrigerator. Is it really meaningful to spend a lot of space to explain the principle of this refrigerator? It's still ridiculous to explain it. I think finding a rune that can use water elements and cooling and then using something like a magic core to provide energy is definitely more reliable than a photosynthetic plant refrigerator. Why do you want to use modern technology to solve problems in a world with magic and then use mathematics, physics and chemistry to explain the principles of plant magic? This matter, I think, is really outrageous! The first element of online writing is fun! There is no need to be so entangled in principles. There are too many ways to solve them. What about golden fingers, magical energy, and magical creations? Why do you want to use modern science to explain it? I have read a novel about troll civilization called "The New Empire of Azeroth" in the early stage. The setting seemed very comfortable and refreshing. The protagonist relies directly on divine power to become a leader and a sage, leading the race from barbarism to civilization. This setting seems very effortless. Unfortunately, the emotional line at the end of the book is so disgusting that it falls apart. The main character is a troll who thinks about marrying human women, titans and casting human women every day. It is so disgusting that it ends.

Scientific research based on fantasy, the magic system is completely set by the author, and it is not perfect at all, and then science is used to explain the magic. . . . . Unlike him, he likes magic. I think you are fake science, and those who like science think you love fantasy. Nondescript

Does it look good? Is there a Shennong? It looked good so I ordered it all, but I was scared by the bunch of poisonous weeds at Qidian.

The technological development written by the author is too idealistic and is purely based on my thoughts as a green-skinned person.

"Congressman" is too idealistic, even novels dare to write like this, very brave It is still a troll, the setting of dual cultivation of magic and war is interesting, the most important thing is leader + subordinate + battle or tribal conflict attack

Now that I have read Chapter 37, I have learned a lesson (if I also want to write a book), which is not to mess around with settings. Whether it is the accumulation of a large number of boring settings or the assumptions that are not consistent with the actual situation, it consumes people's reading interest. This book shows that the author's writing skills are still very immature, and the perspective is completely focused on the protagonist. In fact, it is somewhat difficult to understand the changes in troll society. In this theme of civilization and progress, the supporting characters are actually the protagonists. In addition, some of the author's words are too modern and divorced from the reality of trolls, creating a sense of separation. It feels like troll warriors are still in primitive society, while witch doctors live in the Renaissance era. One of my favorite settings so far is "Troll Language". Its birth and promotion are both practical and innovative in my opinion, which is what keeps me reading - the author is at least capable of writing this kind of content. In addition, a little bit of insight, the protagonist's Chinese advantage can actually be used. As a cryptographic language or something

It feels like industry has developed and machine tools have been developed. My impression is that of Western fantasy elves, where everyone knows magic and can create magical objects, rather than technological creations that ordinary people can create. Instead of the three-meter-tall elves like the protagonist, operating a bunch of ordinary creations without magic or magic power.

This book uses physics as magic, and I want to complain every time I read it. It feels similar to Stephen Chow's Chocolate Exorcism, and it is messy and messy to read. You either skip it directly or bite the bullet, and you don't feel the fantasy atmosphere and the rise of civilization at all. I always feel that it is too idealistic, but this idealization is completely usable. It is really a book that... Is easy to dismiss.

When did you become an elf? Call me, you troll has no sense

Not listening to readers' advice is the only advice I can give as a reader. Because from the moment the author writes a book, he is screening readers. Those who like the book will stay, and those who don't like it will leave. But if the author changes the setting or plot for readers who make suggestions, then silent readers will leave because of the changed setting and plot. There are the most silent readers in a book. Only a few spoke, and an even smaller minority made suggestions. What happens when you use a minority to represent the majority? The best thing to do is to write according to what you want, without disturbing your thoughts or mood.

I can't stand it anymore. In the tribal era, a few hundred people had a parliamentary system of 80 people. How outrageous is this idea? I can't stand it anymore when I see that system.

Tell a joke. Trolls and elves are together.

Now I have discovered the author's true talent. This writing style was not good at writing articles at the beginning, but it is perfect when writing pornographic articles.

It's well written and feels very flavorful. I have been a bookworm for more than ten years and am tired of reading mindless cool articles. It's a pity that I'm a eunuch.

In the early stages of this book, I almost dissuaded me. In fact, if I revamped the language in the early stage, my grades would improve. Seriously speaking, the audience of this book is readers who deal with farming literature. The fun points for readers like us are: It is a fun point to make others live a better life, it is a fun point to praise your greatness, it is a fun point to lead a group of subordinates, it is a fun point to defeat a group of powerful enemies on the opposite side, and it is also a fun point. It's great to have infrastructure that allows our side to grow a little bit, it's great to bring new things to shock foreigners, it's great to suppress the opponent with high technology, it's great to pretend before going out, and it's cool to do it after going out. Anyway, it's a lot of fun, and this book basically summarizes it, so I was very happy when I read it. It's a pity that the author is a eunuch. I kept chasing the protagonist until the female troll merged into one, and I couldn't accept it. It was too fantasy, and it turned into a mud monster. There were all kinds of poisonous points in front of it that I could ignore. Actually, I have always tolerated the female troll while watching it, because I really can't accept that the main character, a modern person, can actually be combined with a female troll. I gave up the book when I saw this. I have always supported the author, but it actually hurt me mentally. My first comment on Qidian was also made to support the author. I have never commented on books before. Unfortunately, the author is still a eunuch.

The plot is not going well, so I arranged a wife for myself. No wonder I got poor grades.

It's a pity. I think the writing in the early and middle stages was quite good, but there were too many settings and too few stories in the later stages, which made it too boring.

The writing is good. I will reward you with a monthly pass. Why don't you give me a boost?

With such poor grades, he should have been cut off long ago.