Shocking: I'm Actually a Spirit Talisman!

Not transforming is extremely poisonous. You have traveled through time, so how could you not want to transform! Just like you suddenly become a book, would you like to become a book for the rest of your life? ?

The author's writing is okay, but this style is too demanding for writing. First of all, the protagonist wants too much. As a talisman, there is a need to protect oneself and become stronger. At the same time, the protagonist also likes to help others and be happy with the situation, etc. This is not impossible, but difficult to write. If the main plot is simpler, for example, the goal is to survive and become stronger, and it is driven by profit to obtain the merits of jade talismans, etc. Or, being strong to begin with, being willing to help others, and just being happy with the situation is just a way of playing games in the world. In this way, readers' expectations are simple, and the author's plot is easy to arrange. Now this is equivalent to portraying complex characters reasonably and satisfying readers with different ideas, which requires very high writing standards. Then it is that as a tool, it does not improve the ability of teammates themselves, that is, the ability to be a "grandpa". In this way, a lot of room for manipulation is lost in the plot, and it becomes difficult to portray supporting characters. For example, if you say that you should stay with a person for a long time, because its own level is basically fixed, it will be frustrating to wait for a long time; if you don't follow, it will test your writing skills if you can still sketch the characters at a glance. In addition, many impactful structures are difficult to write.

I have read a book about becoming a talisman before. It was poorly written and ended in 18 chapters. At the end, not many people read it. I think this book is pretty good and I hope I can stick with it.

I think it's pretty good. Some places are a bit awkward in writing, but the flaws don't hide the good points The main character is a traditional fairy tale, not a social fairy tale. Different from the Demon Sword and the Soul Banner, the protagonist of this book does not have the function of binding the master. The protagonist is more free to have fun and follow whoever he wants, so the host will basically not die. It seems more relaxed. I like this better. Because of the magic sword, as soon as the Soul Banner changes its owner, I start to guess how this person will die. Sometimes it's quite uncomfortable to see a favorite character die Then this weapon series is a group drama, just watching the story of the supporting characters. I hope the author will write better as he writes

This book tells us the consequences of a magical weapon becoming intelligent. Fellow Taoists, please remember that if a weapon becomes intelligent, you will be killed as soon as possible.

Are they innocent people who receive stolen goods and stolen money?

Is there no one to take care of building a temple in the capital? Even the Earth City God came out to explain what it means. It means that the gods of heaven and earth in this area are full and have entered the stock society. Everyone is starting to get involved for the sake of incense. You, a novice with no feet, actually want to build a temple.

The gods in this book are so cool. It should be a basic operation for a small god to move mountains and reclaim seas. Even if he is bullied by the Aza monster, he can still be called a boss. He is the leader in the system😏

The way the protagonist gets new abilities is too crude. Even if you add a system, it would be better than this method. What's the difference between someone giving you 10,000 yuan first and then borrowing 10,000 yuan from you? Change it, otherwise it will be difficult to become a high-quality product.

In essence, it is still the flow of cultivating immortals, not the flow of weapons like the magic sword and the soul banner.