My Magical Industry
我的魔法工业
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 694k Words
- Genre
- Western Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Sword & Sorcery
- Updated
- 3y ago
- English
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Synopsis
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284Chapters
2.8kRecommendations
22.7kFans
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Striving in a World of Realistic Illusions
Even with a golden finger, success still comes from hard work that makes sense. That includes the knowledge and wisdom accumulated in a previous life, of course. ...Could the protagonist really fail to survive in a new world or unfamiliar environment by relying on their brains alone? I read these for the protagonist's intelligence and courage. At the very least, historical fiction shouldn't have a System. That's that...
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Fantasy and History
Fantasy and historical works that interest me, along with a few others.
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Reader comments 18
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Hey everyone, wasn't the spinning jenny the symbol of the First Industrial Revolution?!
Overall, it has great potential. The writing and plot are good, but the details may not hold up to scrutiny. The biggest problem right now is the poor performance. Your tags aren't working well; nobody searches for "industry," and there are tons of books about mages that don't find you. You need to add tags like "lord-farming," "farming novels," and "magic" to get better results.
Brothers, my contract application failed yesterday, and I was ready to write offline, but a big shot pulled a fast one on me, and I'm about to get a contract! Those of you who haven't invested yet, hurry up and do it!
Sigh, is the author trying to have the protagonist magically replicate the current industrial system in another world? Isn't that just pointless? Stop talking about science all the time. I've noticed many authors don't even know what science means. They treat it as a type of technology.
The biggest problem with this book is that it's boring. Author, don't you understand that what readers want to see isn't a bunch of boring settings and explanations built on fantasy, or how the protagonist is holed up in the lab working on "magical mechanisms"?
Some minor issues after reading the free chapters. 1. Cost issues are a common problem in almost all farming-themed novels. They spend money extravagantly, and although the benefits brought by new industries are revolutionary, such high costs will soon lead to losses. Moreover, the protagonist is clearly following a technology diffusion-oriented route.
I'm already incredibly annoyed by those nobles and that royal woman; their interests are completely out of sync with the protagonist's, and they're actually obstacles in every way. I suggest cultivating a new bourgeoisie as soon as possible, then stripping the nobles of their rights and the royal family of their power, turning them into mere symbols—that would be the best outcome for the royal family and nobles.
That was too simplistic, and too smooth.
If you were to create your own lord, a story like this would probably be quite enjoyable. It's a pity it's only three pages long, about assisting a princess to ascend the throne.
A small idea
Although the author didn't write it, given that even the king was offering free magic students, yet the number of students was still so small, I speculate that learning magic requires innate talent. Let's consider a small scenario: The protagonist invents a magical engine and a series of magical machines.