Hunter Queen: Killer Queen

Let's talk about the conclusion first. This is a very good Hunter fan novel. Don't miss such a good Hunter novel because of early misunderstandings, bro! He is full of the smell of a full-time hunter, which is a bit stronger than the smell of a gourmet hunter from Purple Pig. However, my reading experience is not as good as that of Purple Pig. I am really not a mind-killer. When comparing the three, each has its own merits and it is difficult to distinguish between them. The author's writing style is very good, and the writing style is very hunter-like, but there is a problem with the foreshadowing in the early stage. Early in the reading, I was in a constant state of anger, which reached its peak when Kate appeared. Because I think the character's behavioral logic and thinking logic are wrong. This person should not think or act like this in this situation. This is not the original setting for him in The Hunter! Author: Have you really watched Hunter? Wouldn't it be possible to express yourself and write the same virtues as traditional Chinese online articles? Based on this thought, I wanted to quit the game for a while, but after reading the reviews, it said that it would be better after a few chapters. In addition, I liked the setting very much, so I persisted. After the foreshadowing was revealed, the actions of the original characters were explained and made sense. As for the thinking logic of the original characters, here comes the clever part! The early descriptions of the thinking logic of the characters in the original work were either hints from the author's words, or descriptions based on the protagonist's psychological activities, but the protagonist did not inherit the memory! There is a huge information gap, the protagonist's idea is wrong, and the original character is not broken at all! At this time, I was actually very touched and very happy! From the perspective of foreshadowing, this foreshadowing is very clever and wonderful. However, considering the difficult early reading experience, I really feel that this foreshadowing is annoying, but I cannot deny the excellence of this foreshadowing. In the end, I can only say that this foreshadowing is very strange.

I have read all the content of the update and saw that the author said that the subscription is only 240, so I plan to share my own feelings. New book friends in the future can compare their own situations and needs to decide whether to try it. First of all, I have been reading original novels for about 20 years, but I don't have to say how high-end my taste is. I can only be regarded as an old-timer at best. I will definitely not read cool novels. But if you write well but are not happy at all, then I can't read them either. Personally, when I read novels, the two most important things are the storytelling ability and whether the logic is reasonable and self-consistent. As long as the writing can reach an average level, I won't force it. As for the imagination, I don't care much about it, it's the icing on the cake. Then, I watched JOJO and liked avatars, but I didn't study them specifically. Hunter has never been seen at all. Then let's talk about this book. The protagonist is a time traveler. He is not a kind of behind-the-scenes person who is wise and almost evil, but he is also brave and resourceful, and he can act after making a decision. In addition, he is not lacking in passion and awareness when facing battles. Secondly, the protagonist is not a cold-blooded character, but he can be regarded as decisive in killing. He has his own persistence and bottom line. Generally speaking, in my opinion, he should be very consistent with the views of most people today. Secondly, the protagonist has plug-ins, but it is not a regular system, just add some panels and the like. I personally think there are two. One is to increase the protagonist's strength growth rate. It is not an exaggeration and requires self-cultivation. Another method, in addition to enriching the protagonist's methods, has a greater role in giving the protagonist the possibility of making a comeback from a desperate situation. Finally, the battles in the book are described in detail and vividly. After reading the book carefully, logical online book friends can almost form a concrete image in their minds. Book lovers who like to read ten lines at a glance may not find it suitable and may find it irritating. The overall tone of the battle is that of a battle of wits, rather than a reckless and overpowering one. People who are experienced and like to use their brains are likely to defeat the weak against the strong. I'm not sure about the full-time hunter, but it really has the flavor of JOJO fighting. In general, the main attractions of this book that attract all kinds of book lovers are the world of full-time hunters, JOJO's stand-in, complex and amazing wits, and all kinds of strange and weird abilities. If there is anything that interests you, you can start reading it immediately, and it will definitely not be a loss. Based on the author's ability and the level of this book, although the genre may be a bit niche, 240 subscriptions are really too meager. It would be unrealistic to say tens of thousands, but it should be at least a thousand, right? Book friends who dislike the short word count and want to start writing books as soon as possible. I'm afraid that if the results are bad, the author will cut them off.

After the first few dozen chapters, I felt that the protagonist was useless, being controlled everywhere, and was forced to do dangerous things. He didn't have the strength to resist, and I frowned. Then the protagonist always emphasized that being a bad guy is very disadvantageous. How touching!

You write very carefully, but the old disease of fan authors has come out again. Reading your works was good at the beginning, but in the later period when more and more characters appeared, I often asked, "Who is this?" Who is the author writing about? Something happens that you can't understand. The common problems of fan authors are as follows: First, the common problems of most fan authors are almost exactly the same. They ignore character description and only mention people's names without describing them, making the characters as stiff as puppets. The author does not give a sufficient description of the characters when they first appear. Most of the time, readers only know the names, but do not know their height, height, height, and weight. What is even worse is that sometimes they have to guess whether they are male or female. The author ignores whether readers are familiar with this character and whether they have any impressions of it. Often there is no description or description, just a name and then they suddenly appear. Who is this? ! ! ! Secondly, some characters did not appear in more than ten chapters and then suddenly popped up again. The author only gave them a name, regardless of whether the reader remembered the character or not. It is recommended that you give a few words as a reminder. For example: "The protagonist's special lawyer is so-and-so." "The protagonist's eldest brother XXX" don't just give a name. Ignoring this in fan fiction can be disastrous to the reader's reading experience. Still going to read the book? ! ! Third, some works themselves are a hodgepodge, but not every reader has read comics and movies, or they have read them but it has been so long that they have almost forgotten the plot and characters. Therefore, the author is too simple in describing the characters. Sometimes he only knows their names, and sometimes he uses nicknames. The plot is the same, full of arrogance that I don't need to say, you should know (must read). Even readers who have read comics sometimes feel that this kind of inadequate description is abrupt or has no beginning or end. This is a common problem among many fan authors, who do not consider whether readers still remember the character or have read the work. I can't understand! ! ! Fourth, the reader's reading experience must be fully considered. Just because some characters are familiar does not mean that the author can omit appearance descriptions, character characterizations, or just mention names. It's like a chef cooking meat, and customers complain why it's fat and greasy without seasoning. But the chef said: "There are so many things! You are here to eat meat, the seasoning is not important." Characterization is the seasoning. Some unimportant supporting characters will be boring if they are over-characterized, but at least they should give readers an impression, such as: "A strong one-eyed black man, director of S. H. I. E. L. D., Who likes to appear elusive and suspicious." Just because some characters are familiar to readers doesn't mean you can just give them names and not describe them. At least the reader should be told that this is a one-eyed black man, not Nick Foul, and there will be no physical description at all. To summarize, when you meet the first character you don't know, you will look it up on the Internet. The second, third or even twelfth character only knows the name but not the shape. How will the reader feel? Do you have the patience to check them one by one? Instead of ten readers, only four were left, and the remaining six encountered reading difficulties. Many times, the difference between a master and other authors lies in the number of readers piled up by these countless small details. A good author will pay attention to the reading experience of readers. Even if he submits a paper in college, he will check whether the professors are comfortable reading it. If the reading experience is poor, forget it. If you can't understand it, abandon the book.

Author, I think the biggest failure of your book is the beginning of the Ant King chapter. For people like me who have only watched anime but not read comics, the plot of the Prince's Succession War is not very attractive, and the Ant King chapter you wrote is only over a hundred chapters long. As a reader, I don't like your book enough to follow up every day to read the Prince's Succession War chapter with which I am not familiar with the plot. So I chose to keep it, and then I stopped looking at it😅. I think there are many people in the same situation as me. If you start with a much earlier time period and write in a longer plot time period that we are familiar with, it will be much more enjoyable. If you then write the Succession War chapter, I believe that the results of your writing book will not be much worse than "Hunter: I'm Really Not an Exorcist". After all, most people must have watched the anime or watched the general plot of the anime on Douyin. If your book enters the plot too quickly that most readers are unfamiliar with, many people will choose to abandon the book due to the torment of catching up and little interest in the unfamiliar plot. To be honest, your writing style is no worse than that of "I'm Really Not a Master of Nianzhu", but your grades are much worse. Maybe it's because the opening plot is too late

My name is Joey and I am 15 years old. Her family is in Ker Village in the southeastern part of Ngl Autonomous Country. She is unmarried. I work in an anesthetic organization controlled by Zailo, and I go home before eight o'clock at the latest every day. Don't smoke, don't drink, go to bed at 11pm, and make sure you sleep eight hours a day. Drink a cup of warm milk before going to bed, do twenty minutes of stretching exercises to warm up, and then go to bed. You can basically sleep soundly until dawn. Like a baby, leaving no fatigue or stress behind, just welcome the next day's breakfast. The health check results also showed that I was normal. What I want to explain is that I am a person who pursues inner peace at all times. Don't be obsessed with winning or losing, and don't dwell on worries. Don't make enemies that will keep me awake at night. This is my attitude towards survival in this society. I also know that this is my happiness. Besides, even if I have to fight, I will not lose to anyone. Well, what I mean is, please vote, collect, read, subscribe, and reward, thank you!

Regarding suppressing the protagonist's strength, I think it's okay. If Killer Queen is an arm to Yoshikage Kira, it is an add-on to the protagonist who has no memory of Yoshikage Kira. The protagonist's understanding of Killer Queen is limited to her abilities. To fully utilize Killer Queen's abilities, it will definitely take some training.

Prince War is actually about raising voodoos. In ancient times, raising voodoos meant putting various poisons in jars and feeding them stimulating drugs so that they could devour each other. At the beginning of the prince war, the princes were all fed something by the corrupted mind beast. I guess it must be something with burning talent. The princes are so talented. The price should be that only one can survive in the end. Maybe even 200,000 people on the ship may be sacrifices. The last one will become an immortal and invincible existence.

After reading half of the content, I only have one thought. This book is neither brainless nor arrogant. It contains content that is not found in comics. I think the outline is perfect and has never collapsed. With this achievement, I can continue to write fan fiction and brain-burning battles. I have come to a conclusion-the author is Togashi himself?

The early writing was okay, but the succession battle dragged on too much. The cesspit should be opened as soon as possible, otherwise it will jump. If you have to go and hang out in it, is it sick? How long should you wait? As for the gatekeeper's permission that Kurapika promised, I don't believe there is no other way to get it. I have to go through the muddy waters of the succession war. Teams that join the Defike, Gold, and Hunter Associations can also enter the Dark Continent. The light, strange and green colors of the Dark Continent are the most attractive. But the inheritance war is really stinky and long. I suggest you don't write more than 100 chapters for a big stage. If you don't agree with it enough, just send it to me.

Regarding the growth of the avatar, the growth of the avatar is actually the development of the avatar's abilities. Only the growth of the Platinum Star has been completed, which means that the abilities and potential of the Platinum Star have been fully developed. Back to Killer Queen, Killer Queen's ability is to make bombs and remote control bombs. The first bomb on her right hand has strong attack power and high concealment. It is definitely the best substitute for assassination. Her weakness is that she can only make one bomb at a time. There is a skull badge on the back of her right hand. I think this badge reflects the manufacturing and remote control abilities. The second bomb has a skull badge on the back of its left hand. After the left hand badge is released, it becomes a mobile bomb. It is a long-distance control avatar. It launches attacks based on heat energy and is very hard. Killer Queen has 12 skull badges on her body, left and right hands, left and right shoulders, 2 belts, and 3 on each left and right foot. Personally, I feel that only by developing all 12 badges can she grow like a platinum star. I suggest that the author develops a bombing plane using the release mind and badges on the left and right shoulders. It can bomb and conduct long-distance reconnaissance at the same time. It does not need to explode continuously like a bombing tank. It explodes once, just like a consumable, and the badges are automatically restored every 12 hours. The one above the badge on the belt can emit smoke for escape in times of crisis, and the smoke can form a dust explosion. The badge under the belt can be used to deal with mid-range, emitting laser explosions, and has strong penetrating power to deal with opponents who want to get close. The 2 types of bombs on the belt are used every 12 hours. The 6 badges on the feet and 2 underwater submarine bombs can also be used for reconnaissance. They can be exploded remotely. The badges will automatically recover in 12 hours after they explode. Two bombing motorcycles, characterized by high speed, can only be exploded once against fast opponents, and the badge will be automatically restored every 12 hours. Two explosive mines are powerful and can ambush enemies. The badge will be automatically restored in 12 hours.

The characterization is really bad, I have forgotten many of the characters, but you often only mention names in your articles without describing the characters. It's very tiring to read. Don't think that the reader's memory is that good. You want to know how long the hunter stopped updating?

It's a personal impression of hunters. The hunter world created by Togashi Old Thief is different from most anime in terms of combat power index. Is the Ant King scary? It really doesn't matter to V5. A country with a huge population can cultivate a few personnel who can only meet the Ant King once in their lifetime to seal his telekinesis ability. It's very simple. A full-time hunter is not a world where one's personal will prevails over all sentient beings. It is more about a battle of wits to understand the nature of mind, perfect one's abilities, and become a hexagonal warrior. The development direction of Jojo's substitute mind can be developed in the direction of Requiem, or a complex and changeable contract can be designed to complete the evolution and transcend heaven like Diaoye.

The writing is good, but it is still a common problem among fan authors, neglecting characterization. For example, Boku did not give any appearance description when he appeared. If you have a bad memory, you will have to read the book to find out who you are talking about. Although I know some of them, novels that do not depict characters are a big failure because they limit the scope of readers. A good fan must be understandable by laymen.

It's a pity that the telekinesis system is written in a mess. Many hunter fans have the same problem. They always want to write about the abilities as if they are awesome, but in reality, in the eyes of readers, they are just flashy and completely divorced from the telekinesis system.

The poison started in Chapter 31, and it was still very poisonous. No wonder the grades were so bad. From the beginning, it looked pretty good. Even if I hadn't read the ant chapter, I could still read it, but in the end I was poisoned.

Although the author said that Killer Queen's abilities have not been weakened, and that there is an explanation in chapter 61, it turns out that I am still a very impatient person, and I cannot endure the weakening of dozens of chapters. It can only be said that I am not suitable for this book.

I quite like the setting, but unfortunately I just thought the Hunter's Prince station was boring and criticized it. The animation was not done, and I didn't finish reading the manga. The only chapters I like about Hunter are Ants and Brigade. It's a pity that the author skipped two of them.

Participating in the crusade is a bit reluctant given the current strength of the protagonist, but it is still possible to expand the advantage. First, try to let Burns temporarily join the team as a bomb tool man, and use the bee bomb to assassinate the leader of the division when the chimera ants are divided to earn merits. White, then develop the golden experience to cure Kate against Catwoman, Gon and Nakushuto hold off Yupi, Killua and Mo Laowu hold off Butterfly Man, the protagonist and Nobu roam to support and assassinate, and the most important thing is to prevent the three guards from leaving to recover. To keep the ant king alive, you can also take a risk and wait for the roses to burn for a while, then let them go and let them die neatly. The above are all the best situations. The variable is whether the Kate ant king will be born prematurely if he does not eat the ant king this time, killing the queen, penguins, and the chameleon. If the ability is given to the ant king, there is no need to fight. Even if the queen ant does not die, she may go against the racial instinct and give birth to more three-guard level chimera ants. Compared with the three guards of the ant king directly conjoined, it is nothing. It can only depend on how ruthless the loser is.

It is a good fan work if it adheres to the original work and adds a little bit of secondary setting. Generally speaking, the highlight of this novel should be the battle of wits. Maybe it's because I've watched too many Peerless Assassins and Wild Fighting Mages, but it's actually a very good experience to watch the battle of wits again! In the end, the question of whether to write a heroine or not is very uncomfortable. If I finish writing this work, it will become better. If I fail to write it, I will move on to the next one. If you don't write and maintain the status quo, it won't collapse or suddenly sublimate.

I just finished posting and was worried about signing the contract, so I signed the contract. Then I continued to write 😊 To edit~😳 Just leave the picture, it's very handsome, hahaha 🤭 By the way, do you want to guess what type Joey is? 🤓

It ended so hastily, as if it was cut in half

The protagonist is a battle of wits and courage against the air. He makes various calculations and then finds out that he is still reckless.

The author's combat design is severely hampered by his vague descriptions and frequent typos and omissions.

Vote for you, don't die again, it would be too bad to die while you are raising it.

The reason for the huge difference in performance is that the game started with the hellish difficulty of the Ant King Chapter, which discouraged many people. It would have been better if the game had started a few years before the plot started.

Come on, author, I think old thief Togashi should come over and read the book you wrote, then he will know how to draw further.

Great. You are finally resurrected.

I am the only hunter fic I have read, and one has written a Dark Continent chapter, but the protagonist's ability makes me not interested in reading it 🙂

The protagonist can actually design a telekinesis ability that randomly pulls over an ordinary person under desperate conditions. Wouldn't that make him invincible?