Pirate: Earning One Trillion Before Retirement Is Not Too Much!

It's useless to name moves The moves are too long and too ugly. Some of the translated names may not be appropriate. Can't you start with a nice name? Dragon teeth, cloud killing, reverse scale, fire punishment, such simple and affordable things have to be so ugly.

Kahn: Under the Four Emperors, I am invincible, but above the Four Emperors, one for one! ! Is this the rhythm?

Why does it feel like the protagonist is purely a slave to the system? If he doesn't buy it out, as long as he doesn't pay and deprive the protagonist of the ability to buy, he can continue to work and give money to the system. Of course this is just a personal opinion

How should I put it, I always feel that everyone in this book is stupid and not very smart. Am I the only one who feels this way?

He said that after eating the fruit, he had the strength of a general, and then he said with an eagle eye that he had no physical strength! Hey, you can't fight with a general for three days and three nights. You have the nerve to say that you have the strength of a general.

I still don't understand why he forcibly gave the fruit to Blackbeard, saying that it was of little use to him and I wouldn't give it to his men to eat? I might as well use it as a collection!

One million a day is really poisonous. We can accept the fee, but we cannot accept being forced. And this is really outrageous.

This book thoroughly nourishes the system... It is clearly stated that all the products given by the system are rootless things. Even if the potion you drink has already acted on your body, you have to renew it on a daily basis. If you don't have money, you can just recycle it all 🙂🙂🙂

There is so much money in Sky Island, why not go there? Selective forgetting? ?

I'm speechless. Has the author read One Piece? Will he not be lacking in information? Pele is not that devalued, so he just opens his mouth? Tens of billions and hundreds of billions of Baileys.

I want to watch a pirate fanfic about kneeling down and licking the protagonist group. Do you have any recommendations from book friends? It would be better if you can wipe out Luffy or create an era by yourself. Some of the current fanfics are obviously very powerful, but they like to lick the protagonist in various ways. I'm tired of reading it.

There are a bunch of clouds in the comment area who are almost good at it, and their strength will not decrease with age. Have you read the comics? Oda said that he wanted to draw that his strength would not decline with age, but it does not mean that he really did it. In the 438th chapter of the manga, where Garp throws the cannonball, Garp personally admitted that age will affect his strength and that his strength has declined. If you don't know, I suggest you read the manga

To be honest, the latest chapter is very awkward to read, even if it is a fan fiction, but since the background is based on One Piece, please respect the original work. Not to mention other things, the three generals can defeat the Whitebeard Pirates with all their strength. Where did this weird idea come from? From the beginning of the war on top, the navy attacked with all its strength. It is not a problem for Whitebeard to hold down two generals by himself. Isn't it just to consume Whitebeard's physical strength that the navy is doing this, filling in people so crazily? The three generals had to work hard to bite off the old man's white beard. Not to mention there are so many people. The author imagines the strength of the navy to be too powerful. In the middle and lower parts of the force, the Navy did crush the Four Emperors, but the top force was at best equal to the rest. In addition, the World Government was able to suppress the pirates. So afraid that the secret of the great secret treasure would be exposed, wouldn't you have taken action earlier if you had the strength? Why wait for Whitebeard to grow old, use Ace as bait, and execute him in advance, Akainu still uses tricks. Even if you want to highlight the protagonist, even if it is reasonable? After seeing this chapter, I suddenly lost the desire to read further.

Did the author take too much leave and forget the outline and the previous article? The previous article was okay. He was able to suppress the four emperors in the war at the top. Everyone knows how powerful Kahn is. Looking at the updated chapters, the enemy can't even find trouble with the generals. Although it's okay that the enemy is beaten into a dog in the end, but the CP of the intelligence department comes to find trouble later in the article. It feels very retarded. In the latest article, it is specifically written to surpass the general. How incredible. This is how much you look down on Kahn, who was beating the Yonko from above. Dog head life-saving technique

I watched half of it and kept it, but I didn't expect that the person was gone. I can only wish you to be reborn in the pirate world and continue your adventure!

I hope the author can go to a world he likes.

The protagonist now really has no bottom line in order to make money...

How should I put it, author, in Chapter 11, Hawkeye's behavior is not right. Under normal circumstances, unless he provokes Hawkeye, otherwise Hawkeye is usually only interested in swordsmanship masters.

In One Piece, apart from other things, you must have good physical strength. How did the protagonist satisfy the empress when his kidneys were weak after just two hits? No wonder I haven't gone to see the empress. Now that my physical strength is better, why don't I go to see her to learn from each other? Isn't it impossible?

The writing is quite good. I have read the eunuch "Naval Life: Long Seen" before. I hope the pace can be slower. If I directly destroy Brother Ming (Devil Fruit Factory), it will lead to Kaido. The pace is too fast

The starting point is not bad, keep it up

You should know more about it. Five chapters a day would be great. There are several authors on my bookshelf who all earn tens of thousands per day. How could you pull this down?

The most important thing is to keep reading, dear dear friends! Please keep reading and vote for recommendation!

Not bad, come on! Hurry and update to 1 million words

The writing is pretty good, keep it up. What do you mean by adding more?

Oh haha ​​(´-ω-`) There are only three chapters. I will save them first. I can't even invest after reading them.