A Worthy Guardian Knight of the Divine Throne

This book would be better titled "(I am the simp of both Long Haochen and his wife who is devoted to him)," because it's so frustrating and disgusting. The protagonist is servile Threatened everywhere Schemes are still unbearable

If your fanfiction has no flaws, then you've done a great job. You're awesome! Regarding the problematic parts, I mentioned it before the book was published. Readers are paying to read it, so I guarantee quality first. If there are many reader feedbacks within 48 hours, the author will go back and revise, delete, or rewrite. I deleted and rewrote one chapter before.

This is a story about a protagonist who suffers abuse, a "loser" story, and the author of this fanfiction is doing this. Why is reading fanfiction supposed to be about enjoyment? This author makes me want to keep reading at all.

The protagonist schemes all the way through, and I know he has neither talent nor background (resources), so he has no choice. But couldn't he have had a better cheat code or started with over 70 internal spiritual power? Wouldn't it be better if we saw less scheming and more sincerity between friends?

I didn't expect readers to find a flaw: the protagonist doesn't gain attribute points or have a system. The author didn't want to write a mindless wish-fulfillment story; instead, they wanted to seize opportunities and influence the story's development. The author wrote each chapter carefully and didn't follow the crowd later on. Why criticize so many of these flaws?

I'm not here for a story about torturing the protagonist; I read novels for the thrill and excitement. Long Haochen was already at level 9 in his early twenties and level 5 at 14, while the protagonist is over twenty and only at level 5, maybe even only level 3 at 14. The beginning was somewhat readable, but later, in his twenties, even if he wasn't going to be at level 9, he should at least be at level 7 or something, otherwise, who would read fanfiction?

It's a headache. I can't say the writing is bad, but it constantly suppresses the protagonist, and the "golden finger" (advantage point) isn't very good either. The 56 level of inner spiritual power is enough to deter a lot of readers, and among the four or five books on Qidian, this is the only one with an inner spiritual power below 70! It's like the 5.6 Level innate soul power in Douluo Continent.

Sigh, learn your lesson. If there aren't any exciting moments in the early stages of a fanfic, who's going to read it? You don't think anyone'll wait for you until later, do you?

Seriously, this book deserves no popularity. There's no major poison, but constant minor ones. I tolerated the first dozen or so chapters, but the auction scene around chapter 20 was truly toxic; I just couldn't take it anymore. It really feels like the author just graduated from middle school.

Doesn't it feel like I'm being a bit too accommodating to Long Haochen? It feels like I'm professionally helping Long Haochen avoid trouble. Does it mean I have to keep taking care of Long Haochen after we split up? Why should I? Just because he's the protagonist of the original work?