Douluo: My Martial Spirit Is the Blue Silver Overlord Spear

Is the protagonist a time traveler? Judging from the tone of his voice, it seems that the protagonist is really a 6-year-old child, and the Blue Silver Grass + Blue Silver Overlord Gun has a martial spirit that does not absorb plants. He blindly absorbs animal martial arts like Tang San, which is just a waste of the martial spirit. It is really speechless.

Give the protagonist some soul bone eyes, Erlangshen is so handsome

I like this, as long as the system is not brainless and intelligent, it is fine.

I started writing it last year and still have the manuscript saved, but I hope to come back next month in order to polish the plot.

Well, how should I put it? The first soul ring hunted by a team led by an academy teacher usually involves plants looking for plants (excluding their own choices). After all, in the original work, the three giegies are the experimental subjects of Xiaoan, which is also an experiment on the success of the plant spirit to find animals. I don't necessarily want to argue, but here the teacher directly takes the protagonist to find animal soul beasts without mentioning plants. It's too weird. Come on, author, I hope the logic will be stronger.

It's July! Who are you, the author?

I hope to pay attention next time and it will last longer

So far so good! It exceeds more than 90% of Douluo fan fiction. Nowadays, there are too many junk books written by Douluo fans. They are systematic and mindless. Some of them write multiple female protagonists, and their relationship progress is comparable to that of pornographic novels. They fall in love with the protagonist out of nowhere and don't mind that the protagonist has multiple girlfriends. They are a bunch of mindless people. There are also some who, in order to oppose Tang San, do all kinds of mindless and embarrassing things. Although I don't like Tang San, at least the evil is justified. Don't be evil just for the sake of being black. Some of them took one look at it and Tang San silently thought to himself that there is a way to die. Is this a book that normal people read? There are also some protagonists who are ignorant and look down on in various ways. As a result, they are not as good as Tang San. There are too many similar poisonous points. I really don't know what kind of mentality the authors had when they wrote the books.

Author! I'm on summer vacation, where are you?

Otherwise, I'd better quit. I'm almost in my third year of high school and haven't started updating yet.

Today is the Dragon Boat Festival. Where is your manuscript? It will be July in 8 days!

Ahem

It feels okay, but there was a problem when I went to get the Blue Silver Emperor 🙂🙂

It's already next month, when will it be updated?

Put it this way, I personally feel that the arrangement of soul power is too rough, and there is almost no sense of fighting scenes. Because it is a novel, you cannot afford to name the soul skills, otherwise the sense of the scene will be difficult to describe. Since the first soul skill is an earth-type soul beast, if you want to add armor sundering, let's call the spear skill Mountain Breaking Drill, which adds the ability to sunder armor. Secondly, Zasuole, since it is a domain, it is the Bluesilver Grass that can be controlled within a certain range. The male protagonist can't turn blue silver into a gun, and the blue silver grass in the field can turn into a gun, so it's called a gun array (it can also be called a blue silver gun field) with the added bonus of trapping and locking enemies. Thirdly, since it is a body technique, with virtualization and acceleration, the flash is called Baihuan Shen. You cannot only write the function of the soul skill but not the name of the soul skill. Adding soul skill names will make the fighting scenes better. You can change it. Personal opinion, come on

The previous writing is very good and I love to read it, but you can't stand the part about the 100,000-year-old soul beast Tang San's mother. It's impossible that Tang Hao didn't leave any tricks behind. At least the place where it is placed cannot be reached by you, a flightless soul master. There is also a clear time period for Tang Hao to leave, that is, only Tang San graduates and joins Shrek. You will be there in two years. Aren't you afraid of being hammered to death?