As a Mortal, I Am Li Tianzun

The writing in the front is average, and a little bit toxic in some places, but it is much better in the back. I guess the author was in a hurry to start the book and didn't think about it carefully. I hope to continue to work hard and keep up the writing, and the more I write, the more exciting it will be!

The pace is very fast, and some parts in the early stage felt unsatisfactory, but after it was put on the shelves, it felt more and more exciting. I hope the author will control the speed a little later, take into account the original plot and the original plot, and the more he writes, the more exciting it will be! 😁😁😁 By the way, when will the 500 average be released? I'm waiting for the author to greatly evolve the Third Beast! Two chapters are really not enough! ! !

This kind of Five Elements Sword Formation is a bit too old-fashioned. It was like this when I watched Bai Lian become an immortal. There were densely packed flying swords. I was always looking for casting materials to upgrade materials. I was tired of aesthetics.

The heirs have all come out. When I read the novel, I really hate pig's feet writing about heirs, unless it's at the end, because you can't care about it. Pig's feet can't be a nanny for a lifetime, but you can't watch your children die at the end of their lives. This is still in the mortal world of immortality. I gave up when I saw that crow reproducing offspring. Why don't you come here...

Anyone who has ideas can post them! (Personally, I feel that even if there is a female protagonist, there won't be too many scenes. It's the same as not having one at all. Just treat her as a beauty, haha.)

You too, you just wanted to go to Guanghan Realm, and you immediately ran into Guanghan Order? How fucking embarrassing!

Incomparable to the other Li Feiyu

This book has obviously increased the combat power of Mahayana in the lower realm. I feel that there are many books written about the lower realm these days that can rival those of true immortals! I still remember that in the Wangyu Immortal World chapter, after Han Li ascended, he was beaten by a mid-stage True Immortal who had mastered the law of speed and was unable to fight back. This was Han Li who had already ascended and became an Immortal, although the Immortal Energy may not have been fully transformed! It is conceivable that Han Lina in the Mahayana period is far from a true immortal! As a result, I now feel that there are many Mahayana stagers in the lower realm who are comparable to true immortals. This is ridiculous. I guess Han Li is also set to be not much different from a true immortal.

🤫 I am following several fanfics at the same time. The heroine of this one is a person who has nothing to do with the heroine of the original novel. It feels a bit boring. I follow the fanfics just to make up for the regrets in the original novel. This one seems to have no regrets. In short, it is tasteless to keep, and it would be a pity to throw it away, so keep it first.

Damn it, you tricked me, a heroine-less fan, into killing me. Fortunately, I read the following chapters, clicked in, and found that the protagonist not only has a woman, but also has a child. I specifically voted for a monthly comment and was so angry. For the heroine-free fan, as long as the protagonist has a relationship with a woman, there is always a heroine. It does not mean that there is little description or no title, which means that the heroine is not the heroine.

I followed several Mortal fanfics in one go. I read the first few novels. I wanted to read them for a while while I was waiting for the update, but in the end I didn't want to read them anymore. I'm really not suitable for reading endless novels.

I hope the author can be completely original when writing the Immortal Realm Chapter, and don't use the setting of the Forgotten Words Immortal Realm Chapter. In the Forgotten Words Immortal Realm Chapter, you can improve your realm by opening your own acupoints. The settings for realm improvement are rubbish! Moreover, there are very few races in the Immortal World. They are basically human and demon races. Without the spirit world, a continent would have hundreds of tribes. Both human and demon races are small tribes. In the Immortal World chapter, true spirits are also included in the demon race? And they have all been driven to the point of near extinction by the human race in ancient times or today! I feel that the layout of Wangyu Immortal World is too small, and Han Li's understanding of the laws is hilarious. He only relies on swallowing treasures, and he doesn't understand anything at all! The setting of elixirs and immortal weapons in Wangyu's Immortal Realm chapter was not well thought out. I remember that the first-level elixirs were the lowest and the ninth-level ones were the highest. When it came to immortal weapons, the reverse was true. Will set completely opposite levels Furthermore, I found that in the Immortal World chapter, it is always said that immortals are within a million years old, but since Taiyi, immortals are basically immortal, and there is no such thing as the five declines of heaven and earth, but there are very few ancient immortals? Were they all killed? The same is true for Daozu, and the same is true for Da Luo. They always talk about the previous Da Luo, and what happened to the previous generation of Dao Ancestors. Da Luo Dao Ancestors are all immortal, and they have all disappeared. It is impossible that they are all dead. For example, the Tao Ancestor who opened up the Demon Realm mentioned in the book, and the existence of the 24 heads, basically did not mention why they disappeared

The final preparations for the spiritual world have been taking so long, refining the immortal weapon to create the immortal map, and the world bell opening the world again. I thought I was going to be brilliant in the immortal world, but who knew you wouldn't write it anymore, isn't that a pity?

The protagonist is so easily tricked into swearing poisonous oaths, I feel dizzy

To be honest, since the protagonist is so awesome right now, he might as well start his own business. The native human monks in the spiritual world are not very good at reading the original work. Why do you care so much?

The current score is more than 300. If it reaches 500 within three months, it will start to evolve into a third-shift beast. Try to maintain it every day. Please be a witness and continue to support me. Of course, if you can't achieve it, just pretend I didn't say it😂😂😂

How many chapters do you need for this Bi Du? The chapter about Bi Du Yue Kingdom was skipped. Brother, what you wrote is about mortals, not about Jin Yong's novels. Cultivation of immortals is about fighting with people and heaven. Either you die or I live. You also quit Yue Kingdom after losing Bi Du. Are you kidding me? Unless the power disparity is directly crushed, everyone will fight to the death!

Congratulations to the author for finishing, well done to the beginning and end. The ending was a little too rushed but it was passable. Among mortals, this book is pretty good. The only thing I'm still chasing now is Mortal Immortality. With your book finished, I've lost the pain of chasing another book. It's annoying to wait for more, come on, the author wishes this book a big hit🔥

Can the author update a few more chapters? There are too few chapters.

Happy New Year to the 28th, odd and even updates will resume on the 29th! ! !

It feels great. The spiritual realm is the bottom line! There are also collecting Xuantian spiritual objects to give to the Holy Land. Otherwise it wouldn't be worthy of being called the strongest force!

The author's writing is so good, I borrowed the building to advertise "I Simulated Cultivation as a Mortal"

There is a Taoist ancestor in the immortal world who practices while sleeping. Zhen Chan Lao San is actually a talent, he doesn't just draw blood to practice medicine

The author's writing is so good, I borrowed the building to advertise "I Simulated Cultivation as a Mortal"

Does the author write the fairyland chapter? Should he follow Wangyu or write it separately by himself?

I just looked at the progress of this book yesterday. I didn't expect it to be finished today and ready to be started.

Watched it on September 29, 23 at 7:28 pm

In fact, among mortals, Wangyu didn't even mention that the Mahayana period is divided into the early, middle and late stages, let alone the period of transcending tribulation! It's directly what ordinary Mahayana says, not what ordinary Mahayana says!

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