I Come from Taoyuan

Lucky children use their childhood to heal their whole lives, and have the motivation to move forward and protect themselves so as not to turn black. Unhappy children use their whole body to heal their childhood, and they often turn black, cruel, and dehumanizing. The early stage is a warm and simple daily life, which is quite good. There are a few people who can still maintain their original intentions after embarking on the extraordinary journey. A good story can always warm people's hearts at some point.

After reading some of it, I can only say that the subject matter is okay, and the writing is okay, but the protagonist and plot are very good. Sometimes I get angry when I watch it, and I feel like I want to curse. The protagonist is like a mentally retarded person. . . . This is an objective and fair statement. I am too lazy to scold me and don't let anyone criticize me. If anyone sees my comment, I hope it can remind you when reading.

I feel like the writing was pretty good at the beginning, but it was outrageous when the helicopter came out at the back. I just opened a box and opened three or four chapters and interspersed the plot in the middle. I just said that the woman said that she wanted to expand her father's contacts in the Western Continent and led people from the Western world to find the ruins of cultivating immortals in her country. It was very explosive. Could this be considered that in order to expand her contacts, she led people to search for the ruins of the country's highest science and technology? There is also something from the Republic of China period, where warlords were divided into one side. How can we do it without any background or history? Does that woman really not know? And the more I think about it, the more annoying it becomes. The unified dynasty that has been in existence for so many years has been destroyed, and all the immortal cultivators have disappeared overnight. I didn't read it later, but the more I think about it, the more absurd it becomes. Is there something wrong with your historical background? It depends on the level of the helicopter you mentioned. If we push it back more than two hundred years, if there were no immortal cultivators at that time, it wouldn't be defeated so easily, right? This is not a corruption of the dynasty. If there are cultivators on both sides, and there are no large weapons or anything like that, how could it be like the Republic of China? Let me give you an introduction to the background after reading it. I can't stand it anymore but I'm very curious.

There's a lot of nonsense, but the writing is okay, but the background hasn't been explained clearly after dozens of chapters. It's really uncomfortable to watch. Also, after reading it for a long time, I still don't understand what the author wants to write? Is it ancient fantasy or urban cultivation? Just after introducing the Ten Thousand Years Divine Dynasty, I thought it was an ancient fantasy, but a helicopter came behind the good guy? ! ! I just thought it was similar to modern cultivation, but this is an old-fashioned helicopter, and the story style suddenly seems to be the style of the Republic of China? ! ! ! What's more, the governors of the two continents are not related to each other. This is a bit like the feeling of déjà vu when foreign powers invaded in the late Qing Dynasty and the early Republic of China, but you are a dragon, an immortal and ten thousand years. Just one dynasty can last for thousands of years, so why can't it be fixed? ! ! Do you think it is possible to destroy his country in a small way? ! ! As far as population is concerned, a dynasty that develops steadily in terms of population will have no problem replacing billions of people in 10,000 years. A pile of people can kill them. This setting is really bad.

It may be a good book, but after 60 chapters I just couldn't stand it anymore. Don't mind the author.

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The part about the helicopter entering the village was very poisonous. The first part was very interesting, but I didn't read the second part. I couldn't stand that part of the story. I'm not qualified to comment on the quality of this book. I only want to say that from my point of view, that part is really damn poisonous. It's like reading a book that you read well and prepared to keep reading. Suddenly, an unbearable mouse poop ruined it. It felt so disgusting and unbearable.

You are very good at screening readers. First, you have evidence in front of you but you still don't believe in gods. Then you use a supporting character's perspective to explain the background in a long novel. Then you take the initiative to lead the way (translation: rare) and want to win the favor of others. It is very speechless. I can tell that this book is a slow-burning book. The writing style is also good and the background should be very grand. However, in the early stage, it may be difficult for your advantages to cover up your flaws. Come on.

The more I look at it, the more unreasonable it becomes. If other countries no longer abide by you but still abide by the rules of heaven, then your final result can only be destruction. All tools must be under the same framework. Whether it is the gods of the West or the Black Dragon Society of the island country, they have integrated with the mortal power and provided various conveniences to their countries. But you are aloof and have no contact with mortals. If you are not finished, who will be finished?

The start is tepid but solid, so it doesn't lose pace. It's rare to find an author who can handle suspense. I haven't seen much before I feel like I can push it. I have finished reading all the chapters so far. Let me add some words. How should I put it? I see a lot of people talking about poison, poison, etc., And I feel a little helpless. Are you too used to being flattered by the author? If the protagonist doesn't do some killing and decisiveness, he is a holy mother, if he has some weaknesses and needs to grow up, he is an abuser... It is completely reasonable to fall into some traps, which is to lower his intelligence... Although everyone has their own preferences, how to read it is personal freedom, but personally, when reading, I still hope that you don't need to be too old to judge whether the protagonist's behavior is right or not, and whether that is in line with your values. Making this kind of judgment is tiring on the one hand and affects the joy of reading, and on the other hand it affects one's thinking mode. Of course, for some online articles, this reading method is not a problem, but for a book like this one, which tells you a story seriously, you should still read it in a different way. Brother, if you are looking for something cool in this article, you won't even read it if it's a novice article, right? That's what it is, it's boring to read, but it's a bit chewy. Let the author write what he wants to write, even if it's not good enough, at least it's not mass-produced shit. I originally wanted to talk about the last few chapters, but this method of uncovering the answers is a bit boring, and the oral trap is okay... It's too lazy... But after seeing other people's comments, I feel that it's not incomprehensible... Forget it, keep writing... For those who haven't read it yet, I will give you some tips for you to judge for yourself. There is indeed a lack of cool points in the early stage, and even now there are not many so-called cool points. But the long foreshadowing is very important. If you can pay attention to his narrative rhythm, you will find that he knows that you will be impatient if he doesn't give you pleasure, but he can still catch you. This level of ability to handle suspense is already better than many web articles that are famous for this. And suspense is just a means to advance the plot, he is not writing a mystery. I haven't seen any technical mistakes so far, so I personally don't think there are any poisonous points. The character's behavior is self-consistent, even if it does not conform to your values. I don't want to say it's too sinister, but I just think the Japanese woman's oral trap is too Taiwanese drama script... It's still the kind of domestic red mystery drama...

Chapter 32: Death from poison Two points 1. It's understandable that you want to show your worth and leave the valley, but does showing your cooking skills make you feel like you have the aura of the protagonist? 2. The heroine feels dirty even when living in other people's homes, and when she encounters soup given by others, she doesn't say whether she is afraid of the hero poisoning her. At least if you think that it was made by such an ugly person, you won't want to eat it, right? Not much to say

The main character doesn't look interesting at all. His grandfather looked fine before he died. After his death, the main character looks aggrieved. He has nothing to do but find someone to look for. If the old cripple hadn't opened a plug-in for his grandson, I think the main character's life would be no different from his previous life.

It seems like the writing makes no sense, but it does make sense at the same time. You know that feeling?

A must-read novel for those who lick dogs and have masochistic tendencies 🪖

I saw outsiders entering the village and started killing people. I almost raped them. I can't stand it here. It's too poisonous. I obviously realized that something was wrong, but I still didn't care. Not to mention incompetent. The foreigner was drunk. Even if you don't have a gun, you can't just take him there? I have to go and observe it, and then take people with me when I come back. I am really trying to persuade you to quit, and then I write about how good I am at playing with bows and arrows. What were you doing earlier? There are only a few foreigners in total and they are not familiar with the terrain. How many people are there in the whole village? Can you die? Two lives as human beings, that's all? The novel is fiction, not reality! Reality is not so poisonous either.

The biggest feature of this peach blossom garden should be that it can weaken the protagonist's wisdom and make him enter a closed thinking zone. The power of Peach Blossom Spring is so terrifying.

I started smoking at the age of three. It's amazing. Author, you are really good at selecting readers. I didn't spend any money anyway, so I won't scold you.

If you have a modern background, write about it well, whether it's about its cruelty, its ruthlessness, or its sadness. The most annoying thing is that the writing is pointless, the position is unclear, and the plot is ambiguous, especially the plot transition is slow and weak. How should I complain?

Coming from Li Jing's book, I have always felt that the author's writing style is very good. Please try to write according to your own ideas and don't be influenced by others. As for those who are gibbering, would you like the author to lend them your pen? You are awesome, write it! 🤗🤗🤗

The author writes very well, and the whole story and background are good, but I feel that the character traits of the master and brother are portrayed a little too hastily. The protagonist's growth over more than ten years is also well grasped, neither too long nor too short, and the portrayal of the people and objects in Taoyuan is also perfect. However, the description of the protagonist's psychological changes after living in an ancient mountain village for more than ten years is not detailed enough. The face-to-face interactions with the supporting characters are not very deep yet.

I always feel that the logic is wrong. In the world of immortals, either those who cultivate immortals are aloof and indifferent to the world, or they treat common people as nothing. It's okay to write about the Republic of China, and the previous Ten Thousand Years Dynasty is also reasonable, but the mortal world is the foundation, how can it be allowed to be invaded by outsiders? The enemy of life and death, either you can't defeat him, or you destroy him, and you will live or die. It was completely suppressed. The Chinese cultivators were hiding in various places (I don't know if it would be harmonious) and the civilians were doing things like bullshit and horses. Then all the cultivators could be wiped out, or they could use their divine power to destroy the invaders and unify the earth. It makes sense to write this way. After reading about seventy chapters, I really can't stand it. It's not clear what the protagonist's situation is. He most likely follows this cult master to learn immortality. The golden finger is not clear either. The normal golden finger is familiar history, or something else. In fact, the most annoying thing is your world setting. I should express it ok, right?

I have read more than forty chapters, and the previous ones were okay. What happened after the foreign devils came? I came in after seeing the Wudiwen label, Wudi? Laughing to death! Also, the author seems to be suppressing the protagonist's cognition. If you don't believe it, that won't work. It's just a coincidence...

The author's writing style is good, let me list a few poisonous points, 1. A failed time traveler is still a failure (it's true in the novice article, but the author doesn't want to write a novice article). In order for people to see the protagonist's shining point before time travel, I also wrote a little bit about it in the previous 20 chapters. 2. The flashbacks in the chapters where the plane appeared were too wordy and watery. 3. There is a difference between immortals and mortals, and you cannot take action. This is the biggest poisonous point, so I can't stand it anymore. There is a concession, and there are immortal cultivators from other countries, so why do you call it the difference between immortals and mortals? 5 Whose territory is Dahua? If you don't fight back when others are coming to grab your territory, you are a crazy cultivator. As I write this, the more I think about it, the more I realize there are a lot of things wrong with it. 6. Suspense? Riddler, Riddler BDHS. 7 Finally, a few personal suggestions for the author. I read books to relax and seek novelties. I read simple, plain, passionate, novel and interesting stories one after another. They are not about the chaotic feelings of family, country and world. It is true that I should pursue something, but it is not the main thing. I hope the author's next book will be a hit

Reading this novel feels like watching a movie, the author is so idealistic! When I stopped writing, I came up with a new idea, and I became inconsistent without realizing it. Coupled with the little pitfalls and poisons from time to time, it's hard to describe! Literary youth is a disease

It would be stupid for any author to write a protagonist who smokes. I will not discuss the rights and wrongs of smoking with anyone now. Just two points: first, writing about smoking may not necessarily please smokers; second, writing about smoking will definitely dissuade some people who don't like smoking. Smoking is really unnecessary in characterization. It's hard to comment. I wish him success. 🙂

After the frontline fight against the epidemic is over, I will get back to my best form as soon as possible, believe me.

There are so many slanderous words in this book, it made me laugh.

When I first watched it, I was really shocked. The novel setting and the writing were good. At that time, I watched the early morning. After finishing it, I just put the book aside. During this period, I will recommend this book to anyone who reads the book on Douyin. But after watching it for the second time after gaining weight, the three views are really disgusting, and the protagonist is really disgusting. The protagonist is not even as good as the Tang Shenwang. At least Tang San has to look at what he does to see the double standard. The protagonist directly told everyone that he had double standards! Immediately, I was so disgusted that I exploded. When reading a book, the author would say at the end of the chapter why he was reported. I was still very angry at the time. Why should such a good work be reported? Did the author offend someone or something? After reading it for the second time, I found that it was really not unfair to be reported, that is, it was removed from the shelves, otherwise I would have to report it. I also joined a book club group, and it was as if the group was dead. I immediately left it, and it didn't matter whether I joined or not.

This book is now blocked and can no longer be searched